天山 3-Q19 verbal-SC
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
A. reserves and this raised fears of other countries that
B. reserves, which , as a result, raised fears of other countries that
C. reserves, as a result, they feared that other countries would
D. reserves, with fears raised that other countries would
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries would
求教解題思路,我怎麼看都覺得怪怪的..而我竟然選B..昏
天山 3-Q19 verbal-SC
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
A. reserves and this raised fears of other countries that
this单独出现,肯定错误;
B. reserves, which , as a result, raised fears of other countries that
which不可指代前面整个句子,错;
C. reserves, as a result, they feared that other countries would
run-on,错;
D. reserves, with fears raised that other countries would
with修饰,错;
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries would
doing作伴随结果,correct;
求教解題思路,我怎麼看都覺得怪怪的..而我竟然選B..昏
这道题我选的是E,但是对C有点困惑。我下载的这套题C不是RUN-ON啊,因为中间那个符号是分号而不是逗号,这样不就是两个独立的句子了吗
C. reserves; as a result, they feared that other countries would
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
A. reserves and this raised fears of other countries that
在 and 前需要逗号; Logic error: 不是 fear of other countries, 而是 fear other countries 的动作和结果。
B. reserves, which , as a result, raised fears of other countries that
which不可指代前面整个句子,错; -- springfield
C. reserves; as a result, they feared that other countries would
as a result 该承接关系不对, they 可以指代 panel (集体名词)
D. reserves, with fears raised that other countries would
with fears raised 不好
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries would
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
A. reserves and this raised fears of other countries that
在 and 前需要逗号; Logic error: 不是 fear of other countries, 而是 fear other countries 的动作和结果。
B. reserves, which , as a result, raised fears of other countries that
which不可指代前面整个句子,错; -- springfield
C. reserves; as a result, they feared that other countries would
as a result 该承接关系不对, they 可以指代 panel (集体名词)
D. reserves, with fears raised that other countries would
with fears raised 不好
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries would
Agree on Joe's analysis on A,B,D.
C. I guess it's not necessarily just "they" who will fear. It could be other people's fears. That's why "they" is not suitable here.
Just FYR.
Agree with 'which不可指代前面整个句子', however, i still pick up B.
Reasons:
1. E would change the original meaning. Who will fear? Swiss or other countries?
Original sentence: other countries' fear.
E: Swiss's fear, not correct.
2. in B, 'which' does not necessarily reprsent the previous sentence, it could represent 'gold reserves'
NN, please more discuss, thanks.
我不是NN
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries would
fears前面有个修饰更好,没有也不是硬伤,从句意来看fears绝对不是other countries' fear,是指市场投资者的fear
B. reserves, which , as a result, raised fears of other countries that 大全里有fear of sth的例子,B的意思是“对这些国家的恐惧”,而不是“对这些国家采取相似行动的恐惧”
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
A. reserves and this raised fears of other countries that
在 and 前需要逗号; Logic error: 不是 fear of other countries, 而是 fear other countries 的动作和结果。
还有this不可指代前面句子的内容
B. reserves, which , as a result, raised fears of other countries that
which不可指代前面整个句子,错; -- springfield
C. reserves; as a result, they feared that other countries would
as a result 该承接关系不对, they 可以指代 panel (集体名词)
as a result并没有什么错,C错在they的指代不清,即使they可指代panel,逻辑上有问题,
总不能panel提出一政策,然后又对自己的做法感到fears.那就不做bie!
D. reserves, with fears raised that other countries would
with fears raised 不好
with+n(fears that...)+过去分词: 独立主格,可以修饰主句, 语法上没问题.问题在逻辑意思,过去分词有已完成的,被动的意思,说明fears被什么东东raised了,但看不出是前面panel的做法导致的结果.这与原意不符.
其二,with fears raised独立主格有伴随状态的意思(体会一下OG131monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging...这句with arms and legs hanging 修饰sleeping), 似乎在说瑞士政府带着fears干什么东东...
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries would
现在分词短语表伴随结果.就是它了!
B的句义不对是主要原因我觉得,因为Swiss抛售黄金的行为导致公众害怕其他国家也抛售导致黄金大跌,
with fear raised的逻辑主语应该是句子主语Swiss p, 这与句义不符, 因为不是p本身使人担心,而是那个行为.
我说的对么?
E;
A-run-on sentence, plus, "fears of" is awkward and unidiomatic;
B-"as a result" is unnecessary and should be omitted, plus, "which" incorrectly refers to "gold reserves" (the relative pronoun "which" cannot refer to an entire clause, but only to the nearest antecedent noun) and "fear of," again;
C-"they" has no clear referent, and even if it did, "panel" requires the singular "it;"
D-wordy, awkward, passive construction, which is corrected in E.
天山 3-Q19 verbal-SC
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
A. reserves and this raised fears of other countries that
B. reserves, which , as a result, raised fears of other countries that
C. reserves, as a result, they feared that other countries would
D. reserves, with fears raised that other countries would
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries would
求教解題思路,我怎麼看都覺得怪怪的..而我竟然選B..昏
题目好像贴错了:
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries
之所以没有would,是不是因为虚拟(省should)?
with fear raised的逻辑主语应该是句子主语Swiss p, 这与句义不符, 因为不是p本身使人担心,而是那个行为.
我说的对么?
你说得很对
with fear raised的逻辑主语应该是句子主语Swiss p, 这与句义不符, 因为不是p本身使人担心,而是那个行为.
我说的对么?
我選D
with引導的獨立主格不是沒有逻辑主语的問題嗎
還是我記錯了?
還請哪為大大指點迷津,謝謝^^
我觉得E 改变了原句的意思。
原句说,引起了其他采取同样行动国家的恐惧——是那些国家的恐惧。
E 说是引起了瑞士对那些采取同样行动国家的恐惧——是瑞士恐惧。
我找不到好的答案。。。。。求助啊~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
这道题,为什么不能是D,WITH的独立主格作原因状语,因为害怕其他的国家也会跟随这样做,因此P才会建议COUNTRY买掉黄金储备。
自己在定义下`~~
怎么回事?这题在GWD答案是D
我支持D,答案E明显改了原句意思
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half of its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
这句话的意思是, swiss 的专家因为害怕其它国家sell their gold而占领整个市场,所以推荐swiss政府出售一半黄金储量,with作伴随原因,修饰主语。其它的意思都完全不对。
怎么回事?这题在GWD答案是D
我支持D,答案E明显改了原句意思
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half of its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
这句话的意思是, swiss 的专家因为害怕其它国家sell their gold而占领整个市场,所以推荐swiss政府出售一半黄金储量,with作伴随原因,修饰主语。其它的意思都完全不对。
同问!
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half of its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
另外如果E是正确答案的话,前面用了过去时,recommended 为什么后半句用现在时do呢 ?D选项用would有效的避免了这个问题。
请大家帮忙看看!
我觉得应该选D,
E 改变了原句的意思
有没有大侠可以出来澄清一下,这题的E究竟有没有would,我手头的版本没有,而lz贴的有。
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E有没有would的到底。。。混乱。。
各位大人請教一下
為何D不好呢? 有些題目答案不是也可以用WITH嗎
此外,E的raising 不會有模糊不清 究竟前面的主詞或是前句的問題嗎
附加的句子做越多我越模糊
另外 我在某些文法書上 其實有看過which跟that都能代替句子 似乎ets倒是從沒出現過這樣的用法
煩請賜教 感謝!
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
A. reserves and this raised fears of other countries that
在 and 前需要逗号; Logic error: 不是 fear of other countries, 而是 fear other countries 的动作和结果。
B. reserves, which , as a result, raised fears of other countries that
which不可指代前面整个句子,错; -- springfield
C. reserves; as a result, they feared that other countries would
as a result 该承接关系不对, they 可以指代 panel (集体名词)
D. reserves, with fears raised that other countries would
with fears raised 不好
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries would
在GMAT中好象没有集合名词这个概念啊 写的是单数就是单数 写的是复数就是负数啊 唯一的一个就是DIABETES 在OG 11TH YELLOW的里面有啊 ETS的一个陷阱就在这里 其他的我做的题就是复数形式就是动词单数 单数名词就是动词复数啊 可能我做的不够多 TO BE DISCUSSED
选项E 没有WOULD
当初在D,E里面徘徊,看到d的would就选了
with的话确实修饰有歧义,但是ing就没有么?
请指教,谢谢。
我认为还是E正确。
A Swiss government panel recommended that the country sell about half its gold reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market.
D. reserves, with fears raised that other countries would
我觉得D有两个问题:
1. raise的动作发起者是谁呢?
2. swiss和别的国家哪个先卖?
如果说意思是瑞士因为担心别的国家卖,于是先卖,似乎这么表达更好一些:
with fears that other countries would sell the gold and ..., a swiss government panel recommended that the country do the same ...
E. reserves, raising fears that other countries would
在E中,raising可以看做修饰前面这句话,因为swiss sell gold,引起了别的国家的恐慌,所以他们也可能做同样的事。
Fears
raised that traffic-light ratings system could split PCTs
在网上查到有一个这样的句子, Fears
raised that 应该没有问题吧~~
支持D
E改变了句子的意思。。
原文的意思是 fears of other countries,
而E错误的修改为:Swiss raise fears that...
fears原本是其他国家本身产生的,不是swiss发出的。
anyway, 支持D..
感谢各位nn们的提醒,原来也是错选了D,
突然想到:
独立主格表示伴随的原因,条件,状态
D中的独立主格在此处应用不是很恰当同时也改变愿意,原文reserves and this raised fears of other countries that do the same and inundate the market. THIS表明前面发生的事是后面fears的原因,而后半句为结果,因而此处用独立主格改变了原文的因果关系,逻辑上与原文有分歧,故而错
E正确“,doing”表示结果,通常情况下doing作定语时前面不加逗号,加逗号多表示伴随状态或者是结果。
TO BE DISCUSS
我選D
with引導的獨立主格不是沒有逻辑主语的問題嗎
還是我記錯了?
還請哪為大大指點迷津,謝謝^^
虽然过了很久...............
with引导独立主格时确实不存在逻辑主语的问题 但应该明确 那是针对with后的分词/adj./介短等而言的 因为分词/adj./介短的逻辑主语就是with后的n. 也就是说with独立主格不考虑逻主的问题是限定在独立主格结构之内的 可是放眼整个句子 with独立主格这个整体结构是要在句子中做一个成分的 如状语 那就要考虑整个结构的修饰对象 如在本句中是govenment
所以D改变了原句的意思 支持E
我在想 如果with结构作状语修饰前面的谓语动词
但是前面有两个 一个是recommend 一个是sell,
那with到底应该修饰谁了?
指的是不是就是这个歧义??
瞎想的 请多多指教
不同意选 D。
单从保持原意上说,raise fears... 是结果。
A:... this raised fears of...
B、C:...as a result...
E:现在分词 raising 表结果。
而逻辑上如果要表示伴随,raised 则是多余了。而且 panel 带着 fears 建议也非常 awkward.
语法上 D 没大错,但在保持意思和逻辑上漏洞太多了
因此选 E。
chicr 发表于 2014-10-3 16:09
所以rasing修饰的是啥...
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