她讲解时的思路是:
1、排除A、B,因为在表示罗列时such as优于like;
2、在C、D、E中,她选择D,原因是原文中是making the states economy,D与原文这个表述一致。
题目如下(黑色加深为划线部分):
Florida will gain another quarter-million jobs this year alone, many of them in high-paying fiilds like electronics and banking, making the state's economy far more diversified than ten years ago.
A. 如上
B. high-paying fields like electronics and banking, and making the state's economy far more diversified than its economy
C. high-paying fileds such as electronics and banking, to make the state's economy far more diversified than
D. such high-paying fields as electronics and banking, making the state's economy far more diversified than it was
E. such high-paying fields as electronics and banking, and make the state's economy far more diversified than it was 作者: jeonjihyun 时间: 2013-5-24 13:30
好象这样的讲解思路是有问题的, 尽管,我个人觉得GMAT好像在列举说明中偏爱such as 多于like,但这并不是绝对的,不能单单凭这个就草率的判断,像本题就是句子结构的错误和逻辑意思错误为主要判断依据的。我简单的说下我的看法:
a选项的主要问题不在于such as 和like谁优,它主要的错误在于后面the state's economy far more diversified than ten years ago的比较对象不匹配,经济不能单纯的和时间比较。
b选项,句子结构并列的错误,结构上will gain 。。。,and making不能形成并列。
c选项,to make the state's economy far more diversified than,被改作目的状语,完全混淆的句子逻辑意思。
d选项,句子结构较正确,而且结果状语运用没有问题。后面比较结构也比较合理。
e选项,and make 。。。。作为前面一句的并列句,它的主语就是Florida,那么这句就成为Florida will make the state's economy far more diversified than it was ten years ago. 这样逻辑意思不通。
。作者: jeonjihyun 时间: 2013-5-24 15:08
kiwifoodtown 发表于 2013-5-24 14:54
好象这样的讲解思路是有问题的, 尽管,我个人觉得GMAT好像在列举说明中偏爱such as 多于like,但这并不是 ...
还有,就是修饰词的位置不可以随意变动,当然这个情况下有需要变动的时候比前两种要多一些,所以只能作为一个参考点,看看修饰关系转变了之后句子的意思变化,当然也是从逻辑意思上考量的作者: enkyklios 时间: 2013-5-24 16:53
我举个例子;I don't know when does he left. 一看就是一个错误的句子,但是我们还是能够知道他要说的是什么,I don't know when he left. 。如果下边有一个选项是?I don't know that he left.那你就知道它改变了句意,对不对?尽管这个句子可能正确但是他不是原文要表达的意思,当然如果没有I don't know when he left.也就没有办法只好改变句意了。