我的意思是在"becoming"这样的用法比较少见,因为become本身就是一种状态了,故一般使用became的形式,呵呵Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and
landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the
first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life
and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who
became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the
peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in
1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in
1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about
the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in
1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote
romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909
becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
MINE C
ANS D
请指教
(C) in addition to用法错，不可用替换also。
﹙E﹚和﹙D﹚比，那儿不好了，是as..吗?
谢谢rings的回答，可是若用became不就变成run-on sentence
用became的话，它的主语是谁呢?
我的意思是在"becoming"这样的用法比较少见,因为become本身就是一种状态了,故一般使用became的形式,呵呵A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life
and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who
became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
我覺得A的問題是 in 1909
Turning away from literary realism to.................., in 1909...........became thefirst woman
到底 1909 發生前面的事 or 後面的事?
我感覺有雙向修飾
請nn幫我確認 thanks
up up ....這題有點像OG的火山在信紙裡爆發的題目....請在確認
up up ,,,,,Nobody bird me
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant lifeand landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist whobecame the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
The subject of the first part of the sentence "Turning away....northern Sweden" is Selma Lagerlöf, thus the subject should follow immediately after the comma...
I still don't understand what the different between the 'in addition to 'and the 'also' there is ?
will anyone tell me about such difference???
C的错误是the first xx 后面不接分词,应该接to do.
这题的D的时间状语位置值得商榷:
92. Never before had taxpayers confronted so many
changes at once as they had in the Tax Reform Act of 1986.
(A) so many changes at once as they had in
(B) at once as many changes as
(C) at once as many changes that there were with
(D) as many changes at once as they confronted in
(E) so many changes at once that confronted them in
Choice D is the best answer, Choices B and C awkwardly place at once between confronted and its direct object, changes.
上面红色部分说的明确, 这种谓语和直接宾语之间插入一个时间状语是awkward的. 这题的D犯了忌讳.
但是其它的又确实又有其它更为严重的错误, 也许这就是选相对好的吧.
in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
歧义
" become the first woman "and "was the first "
"was the novelist .." and " was also the first"
我觉得A还有一个修饰歧义的问题，就是in 1909,在A中1909，是修饰后面的整个句子，而在D中in 1909做状语，修饰became,简洁，明确
我看到E就排除了，E改变了文章的重心（将从句/分词结构变为svo结构），文章的重点是她获得nobel prize这个事实，而不是他的写作方向；我认为，as a novelist并不是E的错误
這題我選C
我還是不大能分辨in addition to 與and also的差異點
longman:
in addition to: sth add to a piece of information
如果番成中文: 在1990年她成為第一個女性外加第一個swedish作家....
正確選項D : 她在1990年代時成為第一位女性而且也是第一個Swedish的作家ˋ
天阿~~~我打出來後覺得兩者的意思都不對
原文應該是要表達"她在1990年成為第一位女性作家吧".....
另外,個人觀點
C錯在明明是同一個主語,用了,and變成兩個獨立句子
A was also更將 women 跟 writer分割,邏輯上不對
E 沒用from A to B
反到用了from A and B-->感覺像是from (A and B)
還用了that去形容人......
Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
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这题似乎公认的答案是D, 但是who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life有这种用法? 感觉from...to是个固定的搭配, 要求平行, 但是怎么to后面还有个write! 去掉write这选项是最好的, 可写成这样我觉得有问题.
另外D的时间状语位置我觉得有点怪, OG里面有个解释好像和它冲突:
92. Never before had taxpayers confronted so many
changes at once as they had in the Tax Reform Act of 1986.
(A) so many changes at once as they had in
(B) at once as many changes as
(C) at once as many changes that there were with
(D) as many changes at once as they confronted in
(E) so many changes at once that confronted them in
Choice D is the best answer, Choices B and C awkwardly place at once between confronted and its direct object, changes.
我自己理解的答案是E, 解决了上面两个问题, 至于the first sth to do这个结构我觉得不是强调重点, E的说法可以接受, 请指教.
嗯，同意Avantasia的说法，窃以为D和E句子结构上都没有问题，只是这个who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life实在是有些奇怪。如果该成who turned away from literary realism to romantic stories about the peasant life就更好了。所以当时选了E
I think the right answer is E.
A,C,D all have a common mistake: turned/turning away from literary realism to write romatic stories... Here, the from ... to ... reqires two parallel nouns. Whereas E changed the structure to turned away from ... and wrote ..., completes the parallel of two verbs, and is more close to the logical meaning. This parallel of two verbs also make the sentence more balanced. Although B also adopts this correct structure, the "She..., and novelist Selma" creates redundancy of the subjects. Thus only E is the best answer.
开始我也觉得不好，但是看到其他选项都是to write，也就没管他了
同意~而且觉得E把整句话的重心给改了~原句的从句变成主句，原句的主句变成从句~不是好习惯啊~~
虽然觉得D的时间状语的位置有点奇怪~但比较之下还是选D
A中turning表示一个同时得过程，逻辑上面不对；
C中句子的主干发生了改变，修饰的东西变成主干是不对的。
欢迎指教
还有一个问题：
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the
peasant life and landscape of northern
1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
两个并列句，第一个并列句可用代词？
Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
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这题似乎公认的答案是D, 但是who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life有这种用法? 感觉from...to是个固定的搭配, 要求平行, 但是怎么to后面还有个write! 去掉write这选项是最好的, 可写成这样我觉得有问题.
另外D的时间状语位置我觉得有点怪, OG里面有个解释好像和它冲突:
92. Never before had taxpayers confronted so many
changes at once as they had in the Tax Reform Act of 1986.
(A) so many changes at once as they had in
(B) at once as many changes as
(C) at once as many changes that there were with
(D) as many changes at once as they confronted in
(E) so many changes at once that confronted them in
Choice D is the best answer, Choices B and C awkwardly place at once between confronted and its direct object, changes.
我自己理解的答案是E, 解决了上面两个问题, 至于the first sth to do这个结构我觉得不是强调重点, E的说法可以接受, 请指教.
become the Nth sb to do 似乎是习惯用法，google一搜一大堆。
She became the first Canadian woman to graduate with a degree in electrical engineering from the University of Toronto in 1927.
我觉得这题还是选C,
OG92明确说谓语宾语间不能插入时间状语，所以Din 1909 的位置有严重的问题。
E中that指代人是严重错误的。
而C找不出非将其排除不可的原因，OG中没有说过in addition to应该怎样使用，也就是说C没有致命错误，所以选C。
92. Never before had taxpayers confronted so many
changes at once as they had in the Tax Reform Act of 1986.
(A) so many changes at once as they had in
(B) at once as many changes as
(C) at once as many changes that there were with
(D) as many changes at once as they confronted in
(E) so many changes at once that confronted them in
Choice D is the best answer, Choices B and C awkwardly place at once between confronted and its direct object, changes.
毫无疑问，本题选D。关于Avantasia的问题，非常钦佩其能够从OG中引经据典，760高分也说明了avantasia版版对语法研究确实很深入
这题，我们不能简单的套用OG的规则。变化中寻求规律才是根本
Selma Lagerlof became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
按理说，in 1909应该放在句末，作为became的状语，但是如果放在句末，会产生 Nobel prize for literature in 1909的修饰错误。此外， became the first woman and the first... 宾语非常的长，所以后置，结构非常优美。
所以，本题可以合理的把in 1909 前置，而不会产生awarkward的感觉。
赐教,选项D中的俩个划线部分是什么关系?
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
我的意思是在"becoming"这样的用法比较少见,因为become本身就是一种状态了,故一般使用became的形式,呵呵看到这里已经昏了，问一句吧：这个becoming要怎么改才行？
偶想偷懒了，想不动了
Selma Ottiliana Lovisa Lagerlöf novelist who in 1909 became the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
原文
http://www.britannica.com/eb/article-9046830
D的結構很明顯的是分裂結構
在verb跟object中間插入modifier
這對ETS而言是awkward且無法忽略的錯誤
所以如果考試時要仔細看題
說不定是題目有誤
如果題目沒有錯誤
我覺得選C比較好
因為如果只是in addition囉唆的錯誤
總比一個awkward的結構來的好
open to discuss...
Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
and必錯
C. Selma Lagerlof was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
the first…不是修飾Selma Lagerlof…應該是novelist
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
who turned away… 不是修飾novelist…應該是Selma Lagerlof做的動作
the first…不是修飾Selma Lagerlof…應該是novelist
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern
becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
the first…不是修飾Selma Lagerlof…應該是novelist
to win 及 in 1909 也都有問題!
这里to不是与from搭配的，所以不构成平行结构。。。
turn 。。。to do sth...另外， the first 后面只能加to do， becoming 是不对的。
另外还要注意句子中心的问题。。。
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
1 句子强调重心变化
2 时间状语位置不佳
3 并列分句逻辑意思有歧义。
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