标题: Question about essay [打印本页] 作者: applebees 时间: 2003-3-17 06:30 标题: Question about essay Hello all, For example, the Essay is to write" The best way to give advice to other peole is to find out what they want and then advise them how to attain it". If I want to analyse " find out what they want and then advise them how to attain it" is not a best way, can I also indicate what is the best way?
Thank you作者: 山峰 时间: 2003-3-17 11:25
applebees,
Of course you can write in that way!! Remind: 1 write more words, say >400 words( that may ensure you the score of 4.5) 2 Write in 5-6 paragraphs to make the frame clearer; 3 prepare yourself with several templates.
good luck!
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作者: applebees 时间: 2003-3-20 05:00
A AWA topic. It appeared in a memorandoum from a member of a financial management and consulting firm. My question: what does the underlined sentence mean? "get" means we could de dao W's account? Don't understand.
We have learned from an employee of W company that its accounting department, by checking about ten percent of the last month's purchasing invoices for errors and inconsistencies, saved the company some $10,000 in overpayment. In order to help our clients increase their net gains, we should advise each of them to institute a policy of checking all purchasing invoices for errors. Such a recommendation could also help us get the W account by demonstrating to W the rigorousness of our methods.
Thanks作者: isuffering 时间: 2003-6-11 13:54
bank: account, then understand?