范本 :
To Whom It May Concern
It has been a great pleasure for me to work with Ms. Cheng Lok Yiu, who has been a marketing officer with our company between the year 1999 and 2003.
As a marketing officer of our company, Ms. Cheng is responsible for a number of job duties ranging from promoting our company products, exploring and establishing business relationship with potential clients.
Apart from being a good team member, Ms. Cheng also displayed considerable initiative and approached her work thoughtfully and intelligently. Ms. Cheng also impressed me of being able to rise above the call of duty on certain occasions and was more than capable of taking up extra responsibilities.
Your favorable consideration and assistance to Ms. Cheng will be very much appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Agnes Chow
Head
Marketing Department
Super-smart Corporation
失败的推荐信范例
Dear Sir:
It is my pleasure to recommend Mr. Fu-ping Wang for his application to graduate studies in your school.
Mr. Wang has been my research assistant of the National Science Council's project "The United States and the United Nations' Financial Crisis: The Role of U.S. Congress" since September 1997. His major responsibilities include information collecting, analyzing and translating. He is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with extremely high potentiality. Mr. Wang is not only quick at learning and good at solving difficult problems, but also with a logical mind that enables him to effectively analyze difficulties. All the work handed to him was completed satisfactorily. Actually, he is so reliable that I assign him with heavy responsibilities. With his help, I have been able to spend more time in writing the research paper. I really consider myself very fortunate to have such a capable assistant.
I am certain his diligence, coupled with a good competence and pleasant personality, will assure him of academic achievements in his future academic pursuits. I strongly recommend his admission without any reservation.
Sincerely yours,
Chung Wei-kuo
Research Fellow and Professor
The Institute of European and American Studies
Academia Sinica
Dr. S推荐信分析:
您觉得这封推荐信怎样呢?Dr. S认为,如果这是一封为秘书介绍新工作的推荐信,那还可以接受;不过对於对於申请研究所来讲,就似乎不太够力了。首先,这封推荐信犯的一个大忌就是不够明确。
从信中我们只看到推荐人很努力地用了一大堆形容词,试著告诉入学评审委员,这个申请人很「聪明」、「很热心」、「很有潜力」、「很有分析能力」云云,相关的例证却付之厥如;接著,这封信又未能指出这个申请者这些特质与将来的研究领域有何相关,只说在这个申请人的帮助下,他可以专心在研究工作上,言下之意似乎就是告诉对方这个申请者是一个很好的秘书,而非一个有前景的研究生。
其实,只要多用一点心思,换个观察角度,单纯、琐碎的助理工作一样也可以表现出这名申请者在与研究所有关方面的能力。比方说,推荐人不妨强调他之所以雇用这个人为研究助理,是因为这个助理以前曾做过与他目前的研究领域相关的怎样的报告,表现出申请者在这个研究领域已具备的基础知识或是研究潜力。又以资料搜集的工作为例,可以强调这个这个申请者如何善用某些方法,将资料作有系统的分析整理等。
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University of International Business and Economics This is to recommend Ms. Shan Shan, a graduate from this university’s department of International Business Management, for acceptance into your MBA program. I have known Ms. Shan as a resourceful and goal-oriented individual since 1990, when she attended a lecture I delivered, at which she asked perceptive and challenging questions. Although she did not officially take a course with me, she often consulted me on issues arising out of her studies. I therefore have come to know her well. I feel strongly that Ms. Shan’s unusual talents and abilities will stand her in good stead for a quality MBA education, which should serve as a major boost to her career. While at this university, Ms. Shan was an outstanding student, boasting excellent performance in all subjects of her studies and demonstrating great potential. Her overall GPA ranked her among the top 3 in her class of 40 students. But Ms. Shan was no bookworm devoted exclusively to exams. She read extensively in subjects outside her major, particularly in business law, marketing, finance and journalism, all of which seemed to be fascinating to her. In recognition of her intellectual strengths, the department offered, at the time of her graduation, to accept her into its graduate without the normally mandatory examinations. She, however, turned down the offer. A highly independent woman, she already had her own agenda set. She wanted to obtain practical management experience first and then proceed to pursue a Master’s Degree in Business Administrative in your country. She apparently made the right decision, for she has since become one of our most successful graduates in her crop of students. Ms. Shan is good at communicating in both oral and written English. Some of he most important undergraduate courses were taught by American professors, many of whom considered her oral English as native and her written English as standard. I am sure that she has since improved her English a lot more in her professional life. In Ms. Shan, we all saw an optimistic and easy-going character. With highly unusual determination, she is not to be daunted by any difficulties. She believes that, with hard work, she can achieve anything she wants. I think her confidence in herself is well grounded in her track record, especially when considering the fact that she entered into this university as the daughter of a most impoverished family, but graduated as a top student. Judging by what I know of her, I think Ms. Shan is fully qualified to pursue an MBA degree in your program. I therefore recommend her with enthusiasm. And I shall greatly appreciate if you can favorably consider her application for admission and financial aid. Yours sincerely |
thanks a lot
急需一些关于反映数学背景的推荐信事例和范文~!
请问那位能找到?
It's your professor who will write the recommendation letter not you...Why are you bothering to discuss this? I just wonder...Do you write the letter yourselves?
Thanks for your guide!
给老师看看比较好
帮忙顶
推荐信都要单独开吗?
光用所申请学校固定格式的推荐信是不是不够的?
怎么弄得推荐信是自己写的似的?
我们非牛人还没这个本事操纵牛人写推荐信吧
多年前的帖子,顶一下~
margaret1013 发表于 2004-12-14 01:06
学校评审委员除了注重申请人呈现的自己,也相当重视教授或主管的观点:评估这位申请人的特质,以及将来在学 ...
margaret1013 发表于 2004-12-14 01:06
学校评审委员除了注重申请人呈现的自己,也相当重视教授或主管的观点:评估这位申请人的特质,以及将来在学 ...
margaret1013 发表于 2004-12-14 01:06
学校评审委员除了注重申请人呈现的自己,也相当重视教授或主管的观点:评估这位申请人的特质,以及将来在学 ...
margaret1013 发表于 2004-12-14 01:06
学校评审委员除了注重申请人呈现的自己,也相当重视教授或主管的观点:评估这位申请人的特质,以及将来在学 ...
margaret1013 发表于 2004-12-14 01:06
学校评审委员除了注重申请人呈现的自己,也相当重视教授或主管的观点:评估这位申请人的特质,以及将来在学 ...
margaret1013 发表于 2004-12-14 01:11
推荐信范例University of International Business and EconomicsBeijing 100029, P. R. China Sept. 28, 19 ...
margaret1013 发表于 2004-12-14 01:06
学校评审委员除了注重申请人呈现的自己,也相当重视教授或主管的观点:评估这位申请人的特质,以及将来在学 ...
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