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标题: 【求助】OG13 52题，对于and连接句子的解释 [打印本页]

作者: 瑞伊 时间: 2013-4-15 22:24
标题: 【求助】OG13 52题，对于and连接句子的解释
To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long, before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, and she remained in France during the Second World War as a performer and an intelligence agent for the Resistance.
(A) To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate,
(B) For Josephine Baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Paris was her home,
(C) Josephine Baker made Paris her home long before to be an expatriate was fashionable,
(D) Long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Josephine Baker made Paris her home,
(E) Long before it was fashionable being an expatriate, Paris was home to Josephine Baker,

OG解释说A ： To Josephine Baker... her is redundant and awkward; the subject of the first main clause is Paris rather than Baker.

为什么her就是多余的呢？？还有有某位同志说过，and可以连接前后两个主语不一致的完整句子，只要中间有逗号即可，为什么A中前一句不能用JB作为主语呢？？

某同志的帖：http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-673013-1-1.html
but/and主语与主句主语一致时可省略主语，不管and/but前面有没有逗号；连接两个主谓不同的完整句子时一定要用逗号

求高手解答，谢谢！

作者: bejamin1111 时间: 2013-4-15 22:44
关于这里的redundancy：
这里的her指的就是JB’s，那么这句话就可以改写成：To Josephine Baker, Paris was Josephine Baker‘s home...这就是明显的redundant..

还有第二个问题是....没看懂

作者: 瑞伊 时间: 2013-4-16 15:14

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-4-15 22:44
关于这里的redundancy：
这里的her指的就是JB’s，那么这句话就可以改写成：To Josephine Baker, Paris was ...

原句是这样的：
To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long, before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, and she remained in France during the Second World War as a performer and an intelligence agent for the Resistance.

OG解释说A ： To Josephine Baker... her is redundant and awkward; the subject of the first main clause is Paris rather than Baker.

但是之前有个帖说，and可以连接前后两个主语不一致的完整句子，只要中间有逗号即可，为什么A中前一句不能用JB作为主语呢？？如果JB作为前一个句子的主语，不就表明and前后连接的是两个主谓不一致的完整句子吗，在道理上也是可以的啊

某同志的帖：http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-673013-1-1.html
but/and主语与主句主语一致时可省略主语，不管and/but前面有没有逗号；连接两个主谓不同的完整句子时一定要用逗号

求高手解答，谢谢！

作者: 15801218581 时间: 2013-8-16 16:50

瑞伊发表于 2013-4-16 15:14
原句是这样的：
To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long, before it was fashionable to be an exp ...

and后面句子的主语是she，是个代词，要指代有同样地位（即主语）的名词，所以and前句的主语应该是JB不能是paris

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