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作者: mahyar 时间: 2004-12-10 06:47
标题: gwd 8-15 请版主指教

8-15

Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

B. Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.

D. The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds.

E. Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds.

答案给的是c, 但是我觉得A最合适，因为从逻辑上讲其他几个都是water rise into the atmosephere, 不符合逻辑，只有evaperation rise into atmosphere 才合适，请版主指教

作者: mahyar 时间: 2004-12-10 06:57
对不起，刚看了一下A 有致命的语法错误 clouds condensing, 但是C的逻辑错误怎么解释呢

作者: littlemuddie 时间: 2004-12-10 08:39

偶选C. 因为warmed和ocean water逻辑没错。

ocean water evaporates, rises......, and condenses.........三个连冠动作 to form clouds. 清晰明了。

1）而A, clouds are formed 首先不好。

2）water that is warm又犯GMAT大忌。

3）另condensing 在此只能理解为伴随，但condensing 的动作发出者应该是 ocean water 而非clouds，此为三错。

4）应用ocean water 足够了，无须 oceans' water.

综上所述，A 坚决批判。请见谅

作者: whoami2 时间: 2005-2-20 21:25

以下是引用mahyar在2004-12-10 6:57:00的发言：
对不起，刚看了一下A 有致命的语法错误 clouds condensing, 但是C的逻辑错误怎么解释呢

哈哈，我跟楼主掉进同一个坑里了。然后也是对答案的时候发现了 condensing的问题

还是功夫不到家啊

作者: winnowerfly 时间: 2006-7-13 09:47

which 不是不能指代前面句子意思的吗?

本来这题挺明白的,又糊涂起来.

作者: jianlysmile 时间: 2007-7-24 15:55

请教：

C答案中，主语 ocean water evaporates, 后面这个逗号有必要吗？他后面就是谓语动词rises,应该去掉逗号吧，疑惑，求助

作者: crowkiller 时间: 2007-7-24 17:16

以下是引用jianlysmile在2007-7-24 15:55:00的发言：

请教：

C答案中，主语 ocean water evaporates, 后面这个逗号有必要吗？他后面就是谓语动词rises,应该去掉逗号吧，疑惑，求助

有必要，主语是ocean water ， evaporate 是和后面并列的谓语。。。

作者: JUJUCHENG 时间: 2007-8-23 01:27

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-9-22 4:15:27编辑过]

作者: mimixiaxia 时间: 2007-9-4 09:26
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作者: elinaqu 时间: 2007-9-10 17:16
逻辑意思的顺序,动作的顺序,此题类似于 OG 261

作者: szy733 时间: 2009-1-13 14:56
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作者: 初夏的味道 时间: 2009-8-2 09:46

同问

作者: pennyrun 时间: 2009-8-21 14:36

感觉C的to form不太好啊因为有表目的的意思，有点改变愿意的感觉但其他选项错得更明显不知道这么说对不对啊？

作者: metrina 时间: 2009-9-18 18:48

对这道题还是有疑问，首先A中的condensing的主语可不可以理解为"....oceans's water that is warmed...." that引导的定语从句的主语？即condensing伴随的是(water) is warmed by the sun这句话。这样它的主语就是water了嘛。

其次，C是不是有一点句子中心转移的味道？本来是要强调clouds的形成，C却成了强调water的一系列动作。

作者: gelgoog 时间: 2009-12-12 02:46
同问A中,condensing应该修饰最近的一个完整主谓句的主语(新东方的笔记),所以condensing应该修饰oceans’ water. 难道that(oceans’ water) is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere 不算是完整主谓句?!

作者: aeoluseros 时间: 2009-12-12 11:23

同问A中,condensing应该修饰最近的一个完整主谓句的主语(新东方的笔记),所以condensing应该修饰oceans’ water. 难道that(oceans’ water) is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere 不算是完整主谓句?!

-- by 会员 gelgoog (2009/12/12 2:46:17)

A中condensing确实是修饰ocean's water。that(oceans’ water) is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere是完整主谓句

作者: mumulily 时间: 2010-9-4 13:09
句子强调clouds的形成过程，但A选项强调的是clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water,后面用一个that从句解释water，掩盖了clouds具体的形成过程。

作者: bejamin1111 时间: 2013-7-23 12:28
如果把A中的condensing改为condenses，相对于C，偶认为A更加符合句子的intended meaning. open to discussion

作者: rq2gtr 时间: 2014-8-27 03:52
看明白哦

作者: chasedream77gq 时间: 2015-7-7 05:08
C is the best. A has voice problem

A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust. Active voice & passive voice

B. Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust. Modifier problem

C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds. The best structure.

D. The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds. Modifier problems

E. Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds. Modifier problem

作者: chasedream77gq 时间: 2015-7-7 05:09

chasedream77gq 发表于 2015-7-7 05:08
C is the best. A has voice problem

A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water ...

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