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作者: bebrave    时间: 2004-12-8 23:05
标题: og001, 请nn指点

1. The Wallerstein study indicates that even after a decade young men and women still experience some of the effects of a divorce occurring when a child.


(A)  occurring when a child


(B)  occurring when children


(C)  that occurred when a child


(D)  that occurred when they were children


(E)  that has occurred as each was a child


Choice D is best. The phrasing a divorce that occurred when they were children correctly uses the relative clause that occurred to modify a divorce and includes a pronoun and verb (they were) that refer unambiguously to their antecedent, men and women. Choice A incorrectly introduces the when... phrase with occurring, thus illogically making divorce the grammatical referent of when a child; furthermore, the singular child does not agree with the plural men and women. B replaces child with children but otherwise fails to correct A's errors of structure and logic, and C corrects only the error created by occurring. Choice E includes an incorrect verb tense (has occurred) and wrongly replaces when with as. Also, each was does not properly refer to men and women.


and C corrects only the error created by occurring. ,请教occurring犯了什么错?是不是说如果选项写成occurring when they were children一样是错的?


请nn指点!


作者: LES    时间: 2004-12-8 23:18

bebrave mm,

强烈推荐先参考GMAT大区各版块的置顶贴,好东东多多!相信它们可以解决你大部分问题。

本语法区置顶贴有:

语法区第一贴 -《语法区版规》

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如果阅读完上述相关内容仍未能解决你的问题,欢迎发帖继续讨论。发帖一定要注意“版规”里的要求哦。谢谢!

祝你复习过程顺利、愉快!


作者: bebrave    时间: 2004-12-8 23:33

我搜索过了,没找到。

菜鸟手册里有注解:

that定语从句和分词的区别:分词相当于非限定定语从句,而限定定语从句和非限定定语从句的区别是局部和范围的区别,所表达的意思有很大的差异。

但我还是不太明白, 因为我分词相当于非限定定语从句好像说得太绝对了,而我在语法书里看到对限定非限定的区别是:

Restrictive elements are never set off with punctuation.

Nonrestrictive elements are always set off with punctuation.

如果这样的话,occurring的错就不是菜鸟手册上的原因。。。还是请NN指点一下吧!


作者: LES    时间: 2004-12-8 23:44

mm,你对限定性修饰与非限定性修饰的理解是对的。

现在分词: 作定语时强调动作的多次性、重复性和客观性、强调动作OG102/113
如政府的发令 directive, sentence doing 有强制性OG222
定语从句: 强调动作的一次性、具体时间、具体行为、强调状态OG96


作者: p200002    时间: 2004-12-9 00:21
我这个人就喜欢否定一切.不要去看菜鸟手册,就凭你义务教育学到的那点语法知识你都可以首先排除A和B.从事件发生先后可以知道,DIVORCE是以前发生的,没有可能用OCCURRING的.

GMAT语法需要记住的主要是一些不在语法书中的习惯用法.读多语法书的理论只会使自己变糊涂.

作者: bebrave    时间: 2004-12-9 00:22
谢谢les, 解释得太清楚了,
作者: bebrave    时间: 2004-12-9 00:27

  p200002,是呀,

做题,查书,搞来搞去,我常常糊涂掉!

我正烦恼呢,半天才看了5题,我是不是世界上最慢的人?






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