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作者: leo2012 时间: 2013-3-22 16:53
标题: ISSUE 6 求拍
6 A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
主要就帮我看看开头结尾两段这样写是否可以，心里没底。
It is impractical to require all the students to study the same national curriculum before entering college. Tough on the surface cognitive skill and logic ability of student can be well cultivated by the carefully orchestrated national curriculum, the overlooking of discrepancy of different states in geography, economy and ethnic culture makes such an approach impractical.

The discrepancy of geographic environment of a country will impact on the implement of the same curriculum. Take China as an example, in south part of China, with tropical weather, swimming is very popular as a form of exercise and a kind of survival skill. Swimming pools can be found nearly in every residential district and school. It is also taken as a compulsory course for high school students. However, things were different in the north part, with frigid climate. In this part of China, ice-skating and skiing are well received by local people. More skating or skiing playgrounds are built than swimming pools. It is impossible to take swimming as a compulsory course in this place for its disfavor and lacking of facilities. So ice-skating is taken as the compulsory course in the north instead of swimming in the south. In addition, in desert regions or alpine regions, special requirements have to be formulated for the outdoor curriculums, which are quite different from those in the flat region.

Moreover, the inquire in wealth in different states of a country may limit the making of the curriculum, which is relative to new technology, like computer science. In most wealthy states, computer has become quite popular and it is possible and necessary to make the curriculum about computer science. Whereas, in the poor states, local education institutions have no adequate funds to build the computer rooms, let alone hire teachers on these curriculums. The enforcing national curriculum may be result in higher tuition which those poor students in local areas can not be able to afford.

Finally, in a multicultural society, the same national curriculum may become the block of culture development, especially the minatory culture. Different ethnic communities should be given the opportunity to preserve and promote their traditional cultures. The main approach of culture development among students is education. And the curriculums of ethnic cultures are better designed by local education communities for they get a further awareness of local cultures. Minatory students may poorly understand their culture without the special curriculum on their ethnic culture. On the other hand, the inheritance of ethnic culture is weaken.

These are only three cases of why the requirement is unrealistic. Before paying serious attentions to regional difference in geography, finance and race, blindly requiring all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college is not an advisable approach.

作者: leo2012 时间: 2013-3-22 16:55
怎么最后一段显示成那样了

作者: 普渡哥 时间: 2013-3-23 11:06
我觉得有点偏题了，作者把the same national curriculum 理解成自然环境了。。

作者: leo2012 时间: 2013-3-23 14:36
标题: 版主，我贴了一下中文提纲，大概是这个意思
尽管统一的教学安排能够更合理的培养学生的逻辑思维和认知能力，但这一做法并不现实，这种做法忽略了一个国家不同地区在地理环境，经济，民族文化等方面的差异所造成的限制。

1.地理环境的限制，不同的地区会根据当地的环境来制定户外运动课程，以在中国南北方分别以游泳和滑冰作为课程的例子；

2.经济环境，以计算机课程的普及为例，富裕地区和落后地区差异的差异不能要求都统一上计算机课；

3.民族文化，各民族的文化差异，同一国家不同民族和地区的文化、信仰可能不同，若完全同一课程会破坏这些习俗的传承。

结尾（重复上面）

后面时间比较紧就写得比较急了，开头结尾是我先写的，您看看这样开头结尾（英文版）这样的模式是否可以。
开头
It is impractical to require all the students to study the same national curriculum before entering college. Tough on the surface cognitive skill and logic ability of student can be well cultivated by the carefully orchestrated national curriculum, the overlooking of discrepancy of different states in geography, economy and ethnic culture makes such an approach impractical.
结尾
These are only three cases of why the requirement is unrealistic. Before paying serious attentions to regional difference in geography, finance and race, blindly requiring all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college is not an advisable approach.
加粗部分就是我自己做的模版格式
谢谢斑竹了

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