27. Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of the Messenger were two young journalists. Chandler Owen j and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader.
(A) Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of the Messenger were two young journalists. Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader.
(B) Published in Harlem, two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, were the owner and editor of the Messenger.
(C) Published in Harlem, the Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists, A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and Chandler Owen.
(D) The Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists. Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and published in Harlem.
想问一下关于 who 指代的问题
A 中 who 指代谁呢？根据就近指代原则 应该是A. Philip Randolph吧？
不是太懂。
同时为什么A和B 也是错的，OG的解释看不懂啊？
那位N人指点？
27. Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of the Messenger were two young journalists. Chandler Owen j and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader.
(A) Published in Harlem, the owner and editor of the Messenger were two young journalists. Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader.
(B) Published in Harlem, two young journalists, Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, were the owner and editor of the Messenger.
(C) Published in Harlem, the Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists, A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and Chandler Owen.
(D) The Messenger was owned and edited by two young journalists. Chandler Owen and A. Philip Randolph, who would later make his reputation as a labor leader, and published in Harlem.
想问一下关于 who 指代的问题
A 中 who 指代谁呢？根据就近指代原则 应该是A. Philip Randolph吧？
我不是牛人，我的理解是这样的：
遇到这种n.and n.＋who(which.....)的结构，要分辩出定语从句到底要修饰谁。这道题给了明显的提示，就是从句里有个his reputation ，所以who肯定是修饰其中的一个单数主语。那么如果象a这样的定语从句修饰，就会造成歧义，不知道是修饰哪个。所以应该用c这样的结构。og中还有几道类似的修饰歧义，可以留意。
是messager被published，而不是the owner and editor 或者two young journalists，所以AB是错的。
不是太懂。
同时为什么A和B 也是错的，OG的解释看不懂啊？
那位N人指点？
Dangling modifier(悬荡修饰语):在有状语从句的主从复合句中，只有当从句的主句和主句的主语一致的时候，从句的主语才能省略。如果主从句的主语不一致时，错误的省略从句的主句，产生的语法错误叫 dangling modifier.
所以A B的错误在于错误的省略的从句的主语Messenger
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感人。。
感人。。
OG11 的解释：
A modifying phrase must be placed near the word it modifies. Here, the incorrect placement of the modifying phrase published in Harlem makes the phrase describe the owner and editor when it should describe the Messenger. The use of the singular owner and editor is puzzling: did one journalist own and the other edit? Or did they jointly own and edit? It is also unclear which of the two journalists is described in the clause beginning who. C Correct. In this sentence, the modifier correctly describes its object, the Messenger, the verbs indicate that both journalists played both roles; and the relative clause clearly shows Randolph, not Owen, as the owner of the reputation. D The relative clause (who ... leader) lacks a clear referent; placement of published in Harlem is awkward and unclear E Being introduces an awkward construction; the relative clause (who ... leader) does not have a clear referent |
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