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标题: 致敬前辈们的智慧---not only 。。。but also [打印本页]

作者: desideria    时间: 2013-1-26 16:25
标题: 致敬前辈们的智慧---not only 。。。but also
197. (GWD-8-Q20)Not only did thesystematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especiallyin the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses andfurniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.
A.    Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United Statescreate farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relativelyinexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
B.     Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States createfarmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relativelyinexpensive houses and furniture, but also
C.    The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creatingfarmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relativelyinexpensive houses and furniture, but also
D.    The systematic clearing offorests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) andgave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also  (D)
E.     The systematic clearingof forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in theNortheast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it

题目释义:The systematic clearingof forests did sth.…,but it also…
考点:1.   平行,关于not only…but also,参见本题后补充说明所摘录的Zeldaw里程碑式的帖子:
2.   逻辑为王:
如果你一眼看出这个句子考notonlybut also于是开始找答案,恭喜你,又上当了。
做题的时候要弄清楚句子的意思是递进还是转折,如果是递进not only...but also 没问题,如果是转折的话,就要考虑一下是否是GMAC的陷阱了, but/but also才是表示转折的意思.
选项分析:A.    not only 位于句首时,所引导的句子要用倒装,givecreateand连接的两个并列成分,而时态已经被did提前,只能用原形,所以这里gave错;But it also在此没有错,例见本题后补充的大全354
B.   Which定语从句修饰farmland,逻辑意义错误,是systematic clearing给了consumers houses and furniture,不是farmland
C.    But also之前分句缺谓语
D.   CorrectBut it also转折前后句,说明systematic clearing既带来了好东西,也带了坏东西,also的使用,精妙。
E.    Giving修饰created,改变了原来的句意:并列的两个动作;Not only…but…也可以,例见大全189241.
补充说明:Zeldaw的帖子摘录如下:
关于notonly...but also...----GWD8-20总结出的

看了GWD8-20, 以前的NN讨论的的太好了,可是藏的太深,很多人都看不见, 后来又看了好些的帖子,,收益良多.所以我把大家观点总结一下,
首先Notonly…..but (also)表示的关系是递进, 其中also可以省略
But/but also表示的是转折.  but also, ring_cheng认为also不属于重复, 所以应当保留.该观点尚未证实.
not only...but also表示并列,不能表示转折,不要有先入为主的感觉认为not only...but also必须一起出现。单独出现but also是可能的,此时表示的是转折,参见大全74
作者: desideria    时间: 2013-1-26 16:28
All-terrain vehicles have allowed vacationers to reach many previously inaccessible areas, but they have also been blamed for causing hundreds of deaths, injury to thousands, and seriously damaging the nation’s recreational areas.
(A)    deaths, injury to thousands, and seriously damaging
(B)    deaths and injuring thousands, and serious damage to
(C)    deaths, thousands who are injured, as well as seriously damaging
(D)    deaths and thousands of injuries, as well as doing serious damage to  (D)
(E)    deaths, thousands are injured, and they do serious damage to
关于not  only…but also.. 的用法,我根据前人的发言并结合GMAT的思路挑出了这几条:
1.在正常语序中: not only … but also 应连接两个相对称的并列成分。例如:                    
Not only Mr Lin but also his son joined the Party two years ago. (连接两个主语)
I not only play tennis but also practise shooting. (连接两个谓语动词)                
He plays not only the piano but also the violin. (连接两个宾语)
在正常语序中: 短语本身不可以加入其它成份,比如变成:not only...but it also...是错误的(因为破坏了平衡)。
如大全中:
125.The winds that howl across the Great Plains not only blow away valuable topsoil, thereby reducing the potential crop yield of a tract of land, and also damage or destroy young plants.
(A)    and also damage or destroy
(B)    as well as damaging or destroying
(C)    but they also cause damage or destroy
(D)    but also damage or destroy(D)
(E)    but also causing damage or destroying
Choice D, the best answer, correctly employs the correlative construction not only x but also y, where x and y are grammatically parallel and where both x and y (damage and destroy) apply to young plants. Choices A, (not only... and also), B (not only... as well as), and C (not only... but they also) violate the not only... but also paradigm. Moreover, B contains terms (blow... damaging) that are not parallel. In C and E, damage is used not as a verb with young plants as its direct object but as a noun receiving the action of cause; consequently, these choices fail to state explicitly that the damage is done to young plants. E also violates parallelism (not only blow... but also causing)
2. not only … but also 连接两个主语时,谓语动词要和与其最近的主语保持人称和数的一致。例如:
Not only the students but also the teacher was against the plan. / Not only the teacher but also the students were against the plan.
3. not only … but also 不能用在否定句中。例如:                    
误: They don't fear not only hardship but also death.
正: They fear neither hardship nor death.
正: They don't fear either hardship or death.
4. not only … but also 连接两个分句,并且 not only 位于句首时,第一个分句中的主语和谓语要部分倒装。例如:
Not only does the sun give us light, but also it gives us heat.
Not only did he speak English correctly, but he also speaks it fluently.
《新编英语语法》薄冰P633:Not only does he compose music, but he also plays./ Not only does he have to type out the answer on a computer, but he also gets the computer to translate it into sounds.
《新编英语语法》章振邦1005:She was not only compelled to stay at home, but she was also forbidden to see her friends
英语语法大全上的例句是:   Not only did they break into his office and steal his books, but they also tore up his manuscripts.   所以我个人认为在倒装的情况下,but also是可以被主语拆开的.
这里附上ring_cheng的观点:倒装时可以在短语中插入某类成分,如:not only did sb do sth, but sb also did sth (之所以前后都加入主语,不是为了连接主语,而是为了句子的对仗工整而补足主语,连接的其实是主语的两个不同的谓语动作。又因为not only在句首已经倒装过了,所以but also用正常语序即可。依然满足句子平衡的要求).如大全354中but also被主语+助动词拆开:
354.In 1978 a national study found that not only had many contractors licensed by a self-policing private guild failed to pass qualifying exams, they in addition falsified their references.
A.    they in addition falsified their references
B.    they had their references falsified in addition
C.    but they had also falsified their references
D.    they had also falsified their references(C)
E.    but their references were falsified as well
not only…but also…的变体总结 -- aeoluseros
1. not only … but also …并不总是这么对称、完整地出现地,以下几种变体也为GMAT所接受:
(1) not only … but …
(2) not only … also…
(3) not only … , … as well (GMAT认可度待定)
Evidence:
OG11-52. The winds that howl across the Great Plains not only blow away valuable topsoil, thereby reducing the potential crop yield of a tract of land, and also damage or destroy young plants.
(A) and also damage or destroy
(B) as well as damaging or destroying
(C) but they also cause damage or destroy
(D) but also damage or destroy
(E) but also causing damage or destroying
key: D 其中OG对A选项的解释为:And also is not the correct idiom; not only is followed by but also or also. ? 证实GMAT官方认可not only…also…的用法。
prep 1-147 By pressing a tiny amount of nitrogen between two diamonds to a pressure of 25 million pounds per square inch, scientists were able not only to transform the gas into a solid but to create a semiconductor similar to silicon. ? 正式GMAT官方认可not only…but…的用法。
**对各大字典的搜索:
(1) LONGMAN,not:
not only ... (but) also ... --> 可惜没有针对性例句.
* Shakespeare was not only a writer but also an actor.
not only do/will/can etc
*Not only do the nurses want a pay increase, they want reduced hours as well.
? not only … as well …
(2) 牛津字典,not:
not only...(but) also (used to emphasize the addition of sb/sth 用以强调递进关系的某人[某事物]):
* Not only the grandparents were there but also the aunts, uncles and cousins.
* He not only writes his own plays, he also acts in them.
(3) AHD,not:
当第二部分只是强调第一部分时,在not only 结构里 also 通常省略。
He not only wanted the diamond but wanted it desperately.
(4) Cambridge,not only:
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/only_4#only_4__3
not only ... (but) also used to say that two related things are true or happened, especially when this is surprising or shockingNot only did he turn up late, he also forgot his books.
If this project fails it will affect not only our department, but also the whole organization.
(5) 另外在LONGMAN里查only,有这么一条:not only ... but (also) at not.
2. 注意除了not verb...but verb...之外,are...but are...也是一种平行,即not在平行之外.
Paleontologist Stephen Jay Gould has argued that many biological traits are not the products of natural selection, favored due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are simply random by-products of other evolutionary developments.
(A) due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are
(B) due to the reproduction or survival they enhance, but they are
(C) because they enhance reproduction or survival, but
(D) because they enhance reproduction or survival, but are
(E) because of enhancing reproduction or survival, but are
key:D   … many biological traits are not the products…, but are simply random…
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