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作者: ttouch    时间: 2004-11-20 21:00
标题: 最近考试的可以进来看看这道语法

本月好几个人碰到这道题, 大家可以看看.



For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of milk each per year.


A) providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing


B) providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow are produces


C) provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing


D) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces


E) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cow will produce


作者: JerryGuan    时间: 2004-11-20 21:08

C

楼主认为,值得注意的地方是不是:done, doing 可以同时出现修饰主语?


作者: ttouch    时间: 2004-11-20 21:10
要根据逻辑主语来判断
作者: JerryGuan    时间: 2004-11-20 21:12

wait, 我换选A

C答案欠考虑for 短语的作用了。


作者: ttouch    时间: 2004-11-20 21:13
C 看起来有点混乱
作者: JerryGuan    时间: 2004-11-20 21:18
这里的FOR 是什么意思哈
作者: kenshin    时间: 2004-11-20 21:55
以下是引用ttouch在2004-11-20 21:00:00的发言:

本月好几个人碰到这道题, 大家可以看看.



For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of milk each per year.



A) providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing



B) providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow are produces



C) provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing



D) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces



E) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cow will produce


首先,provide和milk这两个修饰结构的对象应该一致,排掉B,C


其次,cow应该为复数,排掉D,E


但是A的进行时。。。恨不得也排掉





作者: JerryGuan    时间: 2004-11-20 22:48
以下是引用kenshin在2004-11-20 21:55:00的发言:

首先,provide和milk这两个修饰结构的对象应该一致,排掉B,C


其次,cow应该为复数,排掉D,E


但是A的进行时。。。恨不得也排掉





不是进行时,是分词,伴随takes care


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作者: joe11    时间: 2004-11-20 22:50

欧选 A.  


作者: jimjohn    时间: 2004-11-21 08:09
Support A

作者: hougang    时间: 2004-11-21 10:53

The correct choice is A. There is an example as follows:

It is a tough business for the farmer who does most of the work, faces rising production costs but gets a relatively small piece of the financial return.

In other way, the above sentence could be altered as:

For the farmer who does most of the work, facing rising production costs but getting a relatively small piece of the financial reture, it is a tought business.


作者: hougang    时间: 2004-11-21 10:59
以下是引用JerryGuan在2004-11-20 21:18:00的发言:
这里的FOR 是什么意思哈

所以,这里我认为for可以理解为“那些奶牛为这些农场主每年生产。。。。”


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作者: kenshin    时间: 2004-11-21 11:15
以下是引用JerryGuan在2004-11-20 22:48:00的发言:


不是进行时,是分词,伴随takes care



我是说后面的那个producing阿。。。


作者: 三脚猫    时间: 2004-11-21 14:17

若选A的话,那farmer是不是作providing和 milking的逻辑主语?


作者: LES    时间: 2004-11-21 21:49
以下是引用三脚猫在2004-11-21 14:17:00的发言:

若选A的话,那farmer是不是作providing和 milking的逻辑主语?



Right.


A, definitely!


作者: paopao    时间: 2004-11-22 02:14
A.
作者: kurtzhou    时间: 2004-11-22 08:36
选A
作者: sunnyseasons    时间: 2004-11-22 09:00

A

too


作者: hougang    时间: 2004-11-22 09:29
以下是引用kenshin在2004-11-21 11:15:00的发言:


我是说后面的那个producing阿。。。


现在进行时表示持续或者正在进行的动作,我觉得在这里是可以的。因为那些cow是每年都在给农场主工作,而且每年的工作又可以细化到每天,呵呵。


作者: beechanooi    时间: 2005-9-17 04:42

A.


E creates illogical confusion that the farmer is "provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly". Farmer 定时被挤奶,呵呵,有趣!


A uses -ing to illustrate how the farmer keep the them (cows) cool - providing them..., milking them.... The plural nuns "them" will not create confusion with singular "farmer", and agrees with plural subjects "Holstein cows".


作者: steveyangxt    时间: 2005-12-10 10:42

a  现在进行时没错


作者: DREAMCATHY    时间: 2005-12-11 08:17

D


俺认为从逻辑主语看,去掉AB, E中COW应用复数; C中的现在进行时态表示每年发生的状况,不如一般现在时恰当。


作者: carolhide    时间: 2005-12-11 08:49
以下是引用beechanooi在2005-9-17 4:42:00的发言:

A.


E creates illogical confusion that the farmer is "provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly". Farmer 定时被挤奶,呵呵,有趣!


A uses -ing to illustrate how the farmer keep the them (cows) cool - providing them..., milking them.... The plural nuns "them" will not create confusion with singular "farmer", and agrees with plural subjects "Holstein cows".


有点OG解释的风范呀,我同意A。


作者: tomcruise    时间: 2005-12-11 11:17

a


作者: GMAT阿驴    时间: 2006-3-7 17:16
support A
作者: ProfCPA    时间: 2006-7-21 02:15
E.
http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=23&replyid=1351442&id=83292&page=1&skin=0&Star=1

作者: HoneyMilk    时间: 2006-7-21 13:55

我觉得是E,理由:

焦点一:cow的单复数,后面说的是每只牛会产多少milk,所以单数

二,句子意思应该是,对于某些farmers的情况,这些牛如果被providedXXX,milkedXXX,则就会产生什么后果,所以将来时will produce是正确并且必要的


作者: roric    时间: 2006-9-7 15:26

这里单数/复数的牛有什么影响吗?

好像都可以的说。。。。都临考了还对考点很模糊。。。


作者: litperi    时间: 2006-9-7 15:36

选A

单复数不能变

变了意思就变了


作者: eddienumb    时间: 2006-9-7 22:15
个人认为选E  逻辑主语 不是farmer 是 后面的 cow
作者: zlily424    时间: 2006-9-19 02:47
support A.
作者: lanyuqi    时间: 2006-9-19 19:33

A

首先我认为providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly是做 takes care to keep them cool的伴随状语啊!是为了具体说明如何 takes care to keep them cool的

其次未划线部分已经出现了them说明文中一定有个名词复数,而farmer 只是单数啊,所以 them 指代的是 Holstein cows ,所以E用了单数是不对的!


作者: gonghao    时间: 2006-9-19 21:10
恩A
作者: Matrixrl    时间: 2006-9-19 21:42
a,动作发出者是farmer就对了
作者: 2000zlj    时间: 2006-10-5 22:33
support A
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作者: lxzjojo    时间: 2006-10-30 14:35
对啊,终于见到一个空前统一的贴子啦。是A没错啦,主句前面的for就决定了主语只能是farmer而不是cow鸟
作者: eddienumb    时间: 2006-10-30 14:41
a
作者: 加拿大帅哥    时间: 2007-2-10 06:50

For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of mild each per year.

  1. providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing

  2. providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces

  3. provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing

  4. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces

  5. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce

If A is correct, how to interpret the highlight part in the sentence and how to  understand the meaning of this whole sentence?

I prefer E.


作者: 加拿大帅哥    时间: 2007-2-10 06:57

对不起,我的题目和楼主的有点不同:

我的选项E当中 Holstein cows 是复数,而你的是单数。

我的意思是

E中如果是复数,该题目答案应该是E .


作者: 我是马甲哥哥    时间: 2007-2-10 07:49
以下是引用加拿大帅哥在2007-2-10 6:57:00的发言:

对不起,我的题目和楼主的有点不同:

我的选项E当中 Holstein cows 是复数,而你的是单数。

我的意思是

E中如果是复数,该题目答案应该是E .

Good point, the answer is E, should be cows.


作者: gonghao    时间: 2007-7-10 23:38

这题有点争议

似乎google上的原句是E的模式

但是ETS有改写

E有点夹心面包的嫌疑


作者: Ironpanda    时间: 2007-7-10 23:52
谁能讲讲D为什么不对?  Cow必须用复数这个似乎不够信服
作者: littleca    时间: 2007-7-11 00:04

选A,平行最大


作者: redEmpire    时间: 2007-7-11 01:48
以下是引用hougang在2004-11-21 10:59:00的发言:

所以,这里我认为for可以理解为“那些奶牛为这些农场主每年生产。。。。”


同意!


作者: shopgirl    时间: 2007-7-11 09:04
选A cde的过去时态也不对阿
作者: along1021    时间: 2007-7-11 16:15

就应该是A


作者: blur1997    时间: 2007-7-12 06:34

Should be A.

The sentence can be construed as:

"Holstein cows are producing....for the farmer, who takes care to keep them cool, providing ..., milking....


作者: 菊花刀    时间: 2007-7-22 01:37

这一题有定论了么

我觉得ETS这一题出的不严谨。太夹心饼干了


作者: wsdoll    时间: 2007-7-22 05:36

这题太晕了。。。。


作者: allfar    时间: 2007-7-22 15:00

复数就排出了BDE~

C中的provided with high-energy feed修饰对象不clear.


作者: ycgxx    时间: 2007-9-7 21:53

我觉得选项中的e肯定少了s。。。不然前面应该和其他选项一样加the。。。因此答案应该是e。。。For the farmers 是状语前置,全句的正确顺序应该是 cows will produce...for the farmers...( if they are 省略)provided...,milked,....

当然如果e的确没错,那就选a了。。。


作者: ranning    时间: 2007-9-8 20:49
以下是引用ttouch在2004-11-20 21:00:00的发言:

本月好几个人碰到这道题, 大家可以看看.

For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of milk each per year.

A) providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing

B) providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow are produces

C) provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing

D) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces

E) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cow will produce


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作者: 小小天    时间: 2007-9-8 21:08

选A


作者: 三颗星    时间: 2007-10-22 19:15

应该选E

请看原文

http://www.sciencenews.org/pages/sn_arc97/10_4_97/bob1.htm


作者: tangzimo    时间: 2007-10-22 20:03

我认为选D啊。大家来看看对不:

provide和milk这两个状语都是修饰cow的。因为:1.从形式上,如果是修饰farmer,则必须平行,而前面都已经用了who的定语从句了,所以没有可以修饰farmer的选项。2.从意思上,provided和milked都修饰cow没问题,被动嘛。

剩下的就应该是D和E了。但是E中的将来时没道理,而D中的the加单数名词可以指一类东西。

所以我认为选D


作者: tangzimo    时间: 2007-10-22 20:05
以下是引用三颗星在2007-10-22 19:15:00的发言:

应该选E

请看原文

http://www.sciencenews.org/pages/sn_arc97/10_4_97/bob1.htm

谢谢你找的原文!

不过,原文是:

For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, sated with high-energy chow, and milked regularly—often under the management of a sophisticated computer—these familiar black-and-white cows produce an average of 2,275 gallons of milk each per year.

这也不能确定选E而不选D 啊

请问E中为什么非用将来时呢,这个原文里也没用啊


作者: tangzimo    时间: 2007-10-22 20:08

哦,shit!

原来原题中有them,所以不能选单数的cow……

这样看,只好选A了。

不过,我认为这题选A还是有问题啊。这完全是在ignore平行啊!!!


作者: whiteshadow    时间: 2007-10-22 23:48

怎么可能是C,是A, doing修饰主语farmer


作者: genebaobao    时间: 2008-8-2 23:01

who takes care ...是等同于taking care的,注意and milking前面的Comma,说明前面的三个内容应该是并列的,那么相当于三个定语并列修饰Farmer

望牛人指教


作者: AlienX    时间: 2008-8-2 23:40
在別版看到同一題, 可是E中的cow是有s, 可能lz打錯

作者: rimm853    时间: 2008-8-3 06:34
这道题应该是D,

答案是在A/D中,其他BCE很好排除。

根据提议,应该用单数,不是pl

作者: katrinaxy520    时间: 2008-9-27 12:13

明显不是单数.如果是单数的话前面句子里的THEM就没有指代了,最先排除的就该是B和D


作者: blackTshirt    时间: 2009-7-21 22:23

转自:http://www.urch.com/forums/gmat-sentence-correction/102090-holstein-cows.html

B and D are easily eliminated because "them" does not agree with "cow".

A has a number of problems:
1. The modifying phrases "providing them with high-energy feed" and "milking them regularly" are located between two clauses. It is not clear whether they modify the subject "who" (= "farmers") of the preceding clause or the subject "cows" of the following clause.
2. The comma between the two modifying phrases should be omitted.
3. The use of the progressive tense "are producing" is inappropriate to describe a general scientific truth.

C is wrong because "provided with high-energy feed" and "milking them regularly" are not parallel andbecause, like A, it uses the inappropriate progressive form "are producing".

E is perfect. The three adjectives "cool", "provided", and "milked" are parallel, short for: "to keep them cool, keep them provided with high-energy feed, and keep them milked regularly". And the future form "will produce" is appropriate for a general scientific truth.


作者: wsc92    时间: 2012-8-2 14:52
转自:http://www.urch.com/forums/gmat-sentence-correction/102090-holstein-cows.html
B and D are easily eliminated because "them" does not agree with "cow".

A has a number of problems:
1. The modifying phrases "providing them with high-energy feed" and "milking them regularly" are located between two clauses. It is not clear whether they modify the subject "who" (= "farmers") of the preceding clause or the subject "cows" of the following clause.
2. The comma between the two modifying phrases should be omitted.
3. The use of the progressive tense "are producing" is inappropriate to describe a general scientific truth.

C is wrong because "provided with high-energy feed" and "milking them regularly" are not parallel andbecause, like A, it uses the inappropriate progressive form "are producing".

E is perfect. The three adjectives "cool", "provided", and "milked" are parallel, short for: "to keep them cool, keep them provided with high-energy feed, and keep them milked regularly". And the future form "will produce" is appropriate for a general scientific truth.
-- by 会员 blackTshirt (2009/7/21 22:23:00)



我支持A,楼上所说的第一个理由不成立,因为farm是单数,them只能指代cows。
而E明显存在着被动语态provided修饰前后均可的问题,这是模糊的!
跪求高人驳斥为什么不能选A而选E,因为gmac的新prep上给的官方答案也是E!
作者: ivy366522914    时间: 2012-8-2 20:10
这04年的贴在题在新prep里出现了??!!!




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