In summary, eating fish may definitely be one of the recommended ways to be healthy, as the author proposes in this report. However,the author fails to strengthen his provided facts by showing reliable data and evidence.
这句话改成这样是不是更合理?
In summary, eating fish may definitely be one of the recommended ways to be healthy as the author proposes in this report, however,the author fails to strengthen his supporting facts by showing reliable data and evidence.
-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2013/1/18 9:47:21)