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作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-8 14:02
标题: 求助啦~~~谢谢大家
Q34:
The state religion of ancient China, which came into existence at least as far back as the Han Dynasty (206 B.C. to A.D. 220) and perhaps as early as the Western Zhou Dynasty (1050 B.C. to 771 B.C.), allowed only emperors performing the ritual worship of heaven, perceiving them as special links between the earthly and celestial realms.

only emperors performing the ritual worship of heaven, perceiving them as
only emperors to perform the ritual worship of heaven, with the perception of them being
the ritual worship of heaven to be performed only by emperors, who were perceived as
the ritual worship of heaven, performed by emperors only, with the perception of them as
the ritual worship of heaven as performed by emperors only, who were perceived to be
Answer: B C

B为什么不正确呢?是不是因为with代表着相关的东西而使得表达不准确，being用的多余？

D选项是否因为performed的发出者混乱

Q18:
The first shots of the American Revolution, fired at Lexington and Concord.Massachusetts, were, according to legend, heard around the world, but news of these shots, which were sent by swift messenger, took four days in reaching New York City as well as another additional eleven days to reach Charleston, South Carolina.

A.shots, which were sent by swift messenger, took four days in reaching New York City as well as another additional eleven days
B.shots that was sent by swift messenger took four days in order to reach New York City, and also another eleven days
C.shots that were sent by swift messenger took four days to reach New York City and another eleven days
D.shots took four days by swift messenger in order to reach New York City and another eleven days in addition
E.shots took four days by swift messenger to reach New York City and another eleven days
Answer: C E

请问C选项为什么不对呢?

Q19:????

New genetic evidence—together with recent studies of elephants’ skeletons, tusks, and other anatomical features—provide compelling support for classifying Africa’s forest elephants and its savanna elephants as separate species.

A. provide compelling support for classifying
B. provide compelling support for the classification of
C. provides compelling support to the classification of
D. provides compelling support for classifying
E. provides compelling support to classify
Answer: D

请问E选项不对是因为provide没有to do 的用法吗?

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-8 14:14
Q39:
The survival of a rare New Zealand species of mistletoe that produces spectacular sprays of scarlet flowers is threatened both because their leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and also because their flowers are pollinated by two species of birds whose populations are in decline.

A.   is threatened both because their leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and also because their
B.   is threatened both because its leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and because its
C.   is threatened both because its leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and also its
D.   are threatened both because its leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and its
E.   are threatened both because their leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and because their
Answer: A B
为什么要用its指代flowers???是因为their只可以指代人，its指代物?

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-9 14:54
同学们来帮帮忙哦~~~~！！！！~~~

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-9 18:35
Q34:The state religion of ancient China, which came into existence at least as far back as the Han Dynasty (206 B.C. to A.D. 220) and perhaps as early as the Western Zhou Dynasty (1050 B.C. to 771 B.C.), allowed only emperors performing the ritual worship of heaven, perceiving them as special links between the earthly and celestial realms.only emperors performing the ritual worship of heaven, perceiving them asonly emperors to perform the ritual worship of heaven, with the perception of them beingthe ritual worship of heaven to be performed only by emperors, who were perceived asthe ritual worship of heaven, performed by emperors only, with the perception of them asthe ritual worship of heaven as performed by emperors only, who were perceived to beAnswer: B CB为什么不正确呢?是不是因为with代表着相关的东西而使得表达不准确，being用的多余D选项是否因为performed的发出者混乱个人看法：根据allow的用法：allow sb to do sth /allow ... to be done,只剩下BC;再来看B选项中：首先with作为伴随状语修饰allow，逻辑主语是religion，这肯定不合理，religion哪里来的perception？其次，being special links=being+n绝对是多余的表达方式，直接用n就可以，最后，和C选项相比，由于B用了with独立主格，则with+n则不如C选项中的V（这是concision层面的考虑）

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-9 18:36
Q18:The first shots of the American Revolution, fired at Lexington and Concord.Massachusetts, were, according to legend, heard around the world, but news of these shots, which were sent by swift messenger, took four days in reaching New York City as well as another additional eleven days to reach Charleston, South Carolina.A.shots, which were sent by swift messenger, took four days in reaching New York City as well as another additional eleven daysB.shots that was sent by swift messenger took four days in order to reach New York City, and also another eleven daysC.shots that were sent by swift messenger took four days to reach New York City and another eleven daysD.shots took four days by swift messenger in order to reach New York City and another eleven days in additionE.shots took four days by swift messenger to reach New York City and another eleven daysAnswer: C E请问C选项为什么不对呢?(C) 用了限定性定语从句修饰news意思就是“信使所遣送的枪弹”，错误，应该用非限定性修饰，同时由于news是不可数名词，如果用that were也应改为that was，并且这个选项使用了be sent不如用take好。（答案是比出来的，ABC明显一上来就不如DE）

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-9 18:36
Q19:New genetic evidence—together with recent studies of elephants’ skeletons, tusks, and other anatomical features—provide compelling support for classifying Africa’s forest elephants and its savanna elephants as separate species.A. provide compelling support for classifyingB. provide compelling support for the classification ofC. provides compelling support to the classification ofD. provides compelling support for classifyingE. provides compelling support to classifyAnswer: D请问E选项不对是因为provide没有to do 的用法吗?
这个题不必太纠结，就记得provide是少数的+for doing的v就好

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-9 18:39
你要是想了解更多的for doing还是 to do的区别能看的你吐死，百家之言各种说法，不过简单的讲就是for doing强调N的内容，to do强调动作，provide是比较special的V貌似没用过to do，因为provide N for doing.....

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-9 18:41
Q39:The survival of a rare New Zealand species of mistletoe that produces spectacular sprays of scarlet flowers is threatened both because their leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and also because their flowers are pollinated by two species of birds whose populations are in decline.A. is threatened both because their leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and also because theirB. is threatened both because its leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and because itsC. is threatened both because its leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and also itsD. are threatened both because its leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and itsE. are threatened both because their leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and because their Answer: A B为什么要用its指代flowers???是因为their只可以指代人，its指代物?

主语是survival单数，所以用is；mistletoe是单数所以用its，你得用逻辑看懂意思，看看指代的到底是谁。。。。

作者: DUKB24 时间: 2012-12-10 00:51

Q39:The survival of a rare New Zealand species of mistletoe that produces spectacular sprays of scarlet flowers is threatened both because their leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and also because their flowers are pollinated by two species of birds whose populations are in decline.A. is threatened both because their leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and also because theirB. is threatened both because its leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and because itsC. is threatened both because its leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and also itsD. are threatened both because its leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and itsE. are threatened both because their leaves are extremely tasty to a voracious opossum species and because their Answer: A B为什么要用its指代flowers???是因为their只可以指代人，its指代物?

主语是survival单数，所以用is；mistletoe是单数所以用its，你得用逻辑看懂意思，看看指代的到底是谁。。。。

-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/12/9 18:41:38)

sisi辛苦了

拍个肩!

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-10 03:05
看D哥复习的也很辛苦呢，先来顶下场子啦

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-10 13:44
谢谢哦

以后可能还有要麻烦你的地方谢谢了~~

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-10 15:44
A new study suggests that the conversational pace of everyday life may be so brisk it hampers the ability of some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and words and, the result is, to make sense of speech.

it hampers the ability of some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and words and, the result is, to make
that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words and, as a result, to make
that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words and, the result of this, they are unable to make
that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words, and results in not making
as to hamper the ability of some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and words, resulting in being unable to make

Answer: D B
这道题我选了D，请问是不是没有results in doing sth这种用法还是结构与前面的名词不平行?请问B选项后面的words的and跟什么平行呢?

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-10 15:48
On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender all of the gold they had brought with them.

On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding
Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold
Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

Answer: A B

on account of 也是不可以置在居首的对吗?making是否是修饰passed的?B选项的makes不是应该用making的吗?

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-10 17:17

A new study suggests that the conversational pace of everyday life may be so brisk it hampers the ability of some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and words and, the result is, to make sense of speech.

it hampers the ability of some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and words and, the result is, to make

that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words and, as a result, to make

that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words and, the result of this, they are unable to make

that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words, and results in not making

as to hamper the ability of some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and words, resulting in being unable to make

Answer: D B
这道题我选了D，请问是不是没有results in doing sth这种用法还是结构与前面的名词不平行?请问B选项后面的words的and跟什么平行呢?

-- by 会员 yexianda (2012/12/10 15:44:49)

D选项的表达有歧义，用results 和hampers平行，是表明conversatinal pace引起所有人的sense of speech，而不是children 理解句意，hamper后面有两个内容，to distinguish和to make，make不能与hamper平行。
B选项用to make和to distinguish平行，也正是表达了此意

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-10 17:26

On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender all of the gold they had brought with them.

On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold

With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold

A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding

Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

Answer: A B

on account of 也是不可以置在居首的对吗?making是否是修饰passed的?B选项的makes不是应该用making的吗?

-- by 会员 yexianda (2012/12/10 15:48:57)

这道题选择D吧？？亲。。您在看看答案。。。
我自己的看法啊：A选项：hold与a United States citizen主谓不一致；making放在句中夹心修饰，如果修饰immigrants则是错误的逻辑关系；imprisonment that a …中that有引起修饰imprinsonment的歧义，所以应该用make it a crime punishable by imprisonment for sb. to do。
B选项：主谓不一致；法律法规习惯使用doing；with短语做伴随状语，逻辑主语为immigrants，表达的是law是为immigrants拥有的，逻辑错误。
C选项：it指代不清A law passed in 1993 that…有作为immigrants同位语的歧义；make it a crime for sb. to do，用doing错误。
D选项：Correct；Because of结构后面并不是不能跟名词，而是那个直接后续的名词必须能表达出"原因"，使得即便去掉noun.后面的所有修饰成分，仅仅because of noun, S.V.O.逻辑上也能够非常直接没有问题；这里because of a law，已经能够表达出是immigrants found that的直接原因
E选项：being冗余，due to在GMAT中不放在句首。

作者: 九尾 时间: 2012-12-10 17:48

-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/12/9 18:41:38)

还可以偷懒结合上下文的谓语动词形式来判断

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-10 21:37
灰常感谢~~~

!! 解释的太详细了~~！

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-10 21:37
谢谢~

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-13 15:25
GWD3-Q10:
Antarctica receives more solar radiationthan does any other place on Earth, yet the temperatures are so cold and theice cap is reflective, so that little polar ice melts during the summer;otherwise, the water levels of the oceans would rise 250 feet and engulfmost of the world’s great cities.

is reflective, so that little polar ice melts during the summer; otherwise,
is so reflective that little of the polar ice melts during the summer; were it to do so,
so reflective that little polar ice melts during the summer, or else
reflective, so that little of the polar ice melts during the summer, or
reflects so that little of the polar ice melts during the summer; if it did

A B
请问A选项为什么不正确，是否是otherwise表达的逻辑意思不正确。
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GWD3-Q11:
Retailers reported moderate gains in theirNovember sales, as much because of their sales of a year earlier being sobad as that shoppers were getting a head start on buying their holidaygifts.

of their sales of a year earlier being so bad as that
of their sales a year earlier having been as bad as because
of their sales a year earlier being as bad as because
their sales a year earlier had been so bad as because
their sales of a year earlier were as bad as that

E D
请问so...as不是只能用在否定句吗?
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GWD3-Q19:
Possible long-term consequences of the“greenhouse effect,” the gradual warming of the Earth’s climate, may includemelting the polar ice caps and a rising sea level.

may include melting the polar ice caps and a rising sea level
may include the melting of polar ice caps and the rising sea level
may include polar ice caps that are melting and sea levels that are rising
include melting the polar ice caps and sea levels that are rising
include melting of the polar ice caps and a rise in sea level

A E
A选项中的the polar ice caps和a rising sea level难道不平行吗?是否用melting来修饰a rising sea level是错误的?为什么我觉得E的melting of 感觉用起来wordy?

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-13 15:41
1.A选项：is reflective与前面第一个so不平行，后面又出现so that，so..so that不合习惯，而应该用so..., so..., that，使前面两个so平行；而且注意到little of sth. 和little sth.，前者是说sth.中的一小部分，后者little是用来修饰sth.的，是说sth.本身的little。
B选项中的，Were it to do so是虚拟语气的表达方式

2.这道题要了解一个问题，as adj as必须有第二个as，但是so adj可以独自存在作为修饰语，这道题后面的as，其实是用以迎合前文的as much 的，形成as much as结构，你说的那个估计是从新东方上看到的肯定句用as...as...否定句用not so...as...是不？？？这不是绝对的。。。。还有就是E选项前后比较的结构已经就不平行了, as much 和as bad没有办法共存只用一个as

3.这道题一定要注意逻辑语意的，A选项里面强调的第一个是melting这个动作，第二个是sea levels，一个是动作一个是名词，这两个概念是不对等的，不可以并列，而且你也应该发现may与possible语意重复；咱再来看下E的逻辑语义是caps 的融化和sea level的上升

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-12-13 15:43
LZ我建议你先看看OG12-OG13,出现沉淀一下基础知识，别一上来就做GWD，GWD没有OG有利于复习，一上来会比较棘手。。。。。我们版主都说了OG+prep对付SC足矣。。。。。

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-13 21:02
谢谢，我已经看过OG和PREP了，可能复习的还不够系统，我在去看看，我基础比较差,以后还有很多知识点请指教

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-14 13:19
Almost a decade after New York State passedlaws to protect patients by reducing the grueling hours worked by medicalresidents, twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medicalofficials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residentswork longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgicalresidents work more than 95 hours a week.

twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
an investigation by state medical officials of twelve hospitals have found all twelve consistently breaking the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, with more than half the surgical residents working
an investigation of twelve hospitals by state medical officials has found that all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
twelve hospitals were investigated by state medical officials who found all twelve breaking the laws, with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight, and more than half the surgical residents work
an investigation by state medical officials has found that, of twelve hospitals, all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, with more than half the surgical residents working

D C
请问D选项的with是否表示相关的事宜，不能准确表达并列的，breaking前面是否应该加谓语?

作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2012-12-14 14:32

Almost a decade after New York State passedlaws to protect patients by reducing the grueling hours worked by medicalresidents, twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medicalofficials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residentswork longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgicalresidents work more than 95 hours a week.

D C
请问D选项的with是否表示相关的事宜，不能准确表达并列的，breaking前面是否应该加谓语?

-- by 会员 yexianda (2012/12/14 13:19:29)

不知道该怎么回答你的问题，单就breaking the laws 来说，它没有错，who found all twelve breaking the laws很完整，修饰了state medical officials。不知道你为什么要再加个谓语。

但至于D选项整个而言，句子的结构和逻辑都有问题。首先，with后面的内容在结构上应该是对主句补充说明，但事实上它的逻辑意思却和主句不符合。其次，and没有起到和with内容平行的作用，而是在形式上与twelve hospitals主句并列了。还有，时态上，对应Almost a decade ，主句应该用完成时态，而不是一般过去时。所以D的选项大有问题。

同意LS的意见，你应该先看看OG12-OG13，或曼哈顿，学习一下基础知识。

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-14 17:46
谢谢你

，我现在已经开始复习了，遇到不会的问题还要麻烦你

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-14 18:25
GWD6-Q2:
According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
By skimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its proponents, with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere.
A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because of its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.
According to its proponents, skimming along the top of the atmosphere makes it possible that a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

Answer: A
请问B选项是不是it指代问题以及表达wordy，C选项是with和it的问题，D选项感觉wordy(不确定）是不是A pro..不能做say的动作发出者??
E是否缺乏谓语?

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-19 20:18
Seldom more that 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, butit ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, the Erie Canal
connected the Hudson Riverat Albany tothe Great Lakes at Buffalo, providing the port of New York Citywith a direct water link to the heartland of the North American continent.

Seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York
, the Erie Canal

connected

Seldom more than 40 feet wide or 12 feet deep but running 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York
, the Erie Canal connected

It was seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, and ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, but the Erie Canal, connecting

The Erie Canal was seldom more than 40 feet wide or 12 feet deep and it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York
, which connected

The Erie Canal, seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but running 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York
, connecting Answer: B
如果E选项and或成or,seldom前面加is的话,是否正确?

作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2012-12-20 08:39

GWD6-Q2:
According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

By skimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its proponents, with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere.

A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because of its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.

According to its proponents, skimming along the top of the atmosphere makes it possible that a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

Answer: A
请问B选项是不是it指代问题以及表达wordy，C选项是with和it的问题，D选项感觉wordy(不确定）是不是A pro..不能做say的动作发出者??
E是否缺乏谓语?

-- by 会员 yexianda (2012/12/14 18:25:44)

A 正确
B 前面的方式状语和主句proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say无修饰关系。
C 状语的位置安排错误。
D 方式状语从句变为原因状语从句，不仅结构变了，而且句意都被改变。
E 状语从句升格为主句，严重违背句意。

作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2012-12-20 08:46

Seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York

connected

Seldom more than 40 feet wide or 12 feet deep but running 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York
, the Erie Canal connected

It was seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, and ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, but the Erie Canal, connecting

The Erie Canal was seldom more than 40 feet wide or 12 feet deep and it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York
, which connected

-- by 会员 yexianda (2012/12/19 20:18:33)

实在太乱，看不懂。

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-20 22:14
Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.

A.   Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
B.   Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
C.   The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
D.   The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
E.   The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it
C D

请问D选项的IT是否多余？C选项是否是因为creating和gaving和but also caused不平行

作者: yexianda 时间: 2012-12-20 22:16
Seldom more that 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, the Erie Canal connected the Hudson River at Albany to the Great Lakes at Buffalo, providing the port of New York City with a direct water link to the heartland of the North American continent.

A. Seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, the Erie Canal connected
B. Seldom more than 40 feet wide or 12 feet deep but running 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, the Erie Canal connected
C. It was seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, and ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, but the Erie Canal, connecting
D. The Erie Canal was seldom more than 40 feet wide or 12 feet deep and it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, which connected
E. The Erie Canal, seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but running 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, connecting
Answer: E B如果E选项and或成or,seldom前面加is的话,是否正确?

作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2012-12-21 07:57

Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.

A. Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
B. Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
C. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also
D. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also
E. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it
C D

请问D选项的IT是否多余？C选项是否是因为creating和gaving和but also caused不平行

-- by 会员 yexianda (2012/12/20 22:14:28)

首先，要明白，这道题不是not only.....but also....的平行结构，而是单纯的but引导从句的转折结构。所以 A B 都错。
D 选项中 but 后面必须跟句子，所以it在这里是句子主语成分，是必需的。
C 选项错不是因为不平行，而是因为，but前的句子无谓语成分，而but后的句子又无主语成分，所以错。

作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2012-12-21 08:04

Seldom more that 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, the Erie Canal connected the Hudson River at Albany to the Great Lakes at Buffalo, providing the port of New York City with a direct water link to the heartland of the North American continent.

A. Seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, the Erie Canal connected
B. Seldom more than 40 feet wide or 12 feet deep but running 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, the Erie Canal connected
C. It was seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, and ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, but the Erie Canal, connecting
D. The Erie Canal was seldom more than 40 feet wide or 12 feet deep and it ran 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, which connected
E. The Erie Canal, seldom more than 40 feet wide and 12 feet deep, but running 363 miles across the rugged wilderness of upstate New York, connecting
Answer: E B如果E选项and或成or,seldom前面加is的话,是否正确?

-- by 会员 yexianda (2012/12/20 22:16:55)

那样改更错，颠倒了结构，严重背离了句子愿意。

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