标题: 作文贴by死皮赖脸的婷婷 [打印本页] 作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-5 18:03 标题: 作文贴by死皮赖脸的婷婷 尽情拍砖，不够我借你^o^作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-5 18:03
Whether people are faced with more difficulty to determine their careers which contribute to a successful future currently than in the past? I am partly in favor of this idea considering the relenting situations of the bygone days. Advances on technology and science, however, also throw light on people's choice on careers, which can be illuminated by reasons and specifical examples in the following article.
In the first place, I do concede that it was relatively easier for people to recognize a promising career for the employment situation in the past was less complex. On one hand, less competitions were confronted on human resource market as the pressure exerted by population was controllable. Specifically, in the 1950th of China when the national economy was rebuilt, every career was thriving and residents were lucky enough to get chances to be constituted a certain job instead of crowding in the labor market. Any job they possessed would lead to a secure and successful future. On the other hand, due to the underdevelopment of technology and science, the sorts of jobs available were comparatively narrow. People living in the past may need not face the dilemma during the determination making process.
However, prodded by the progress of technology and science, people currently own even more access to information which help them have a better understanding of different fields. For instance, the computer enables people to gather information free of the limitation of distance and time. It is the computer that broadens people's view to diverse issues, therefore clearly know what they really want and which job is of most significance to them. The further online service on career choice even developes a complete analysis of the individual and provides him or her with professional job recommendations. Besides, many colleges and universities have adopted some courses which foster students’ capacity to ascertain a promising career or a job. Here, we are confident that current people are apparently easier to confirm their careers and jobs.
Last but not least, we cannot ignore the essence of future with success and safety. Form my point, that possibly stands for the a high salary which could cover any emergent disease of a family member and satisfaction that an individual self grains from work. Even though some careers such as physician, attorney and professor are paid highly, the people engaged in these fields also are required to have a firm foundation of relevant knowledge, especially the physician probably has to burden the pressure of facing death of his patient. Thus we are not supposed to reckless pursue a 'so-called' successful career without consideration of our inner wills. Instead a clear identification of ourselves plays an vital role for us to find jobs which are most suitable for us. Only in this way will we move continuously on the way to a secure and successful future.
In sum up, in spite of some advantages attached to the past which made people easily identify a career, the current progress on employment situation outstrips the former advantages. To get a better future, we must start from equipping ourselves with knowledge instead of merely pursuing a superficially promising career. As long as we find a job most proper for us and commit enormous effort will we attain a brighter future.作者: bonnenuit 时间: 2012-11-6 12:24
Whether people are faced with more difficulty to determine their careers which contribute to a successful future currently than those did in the past? I am partly in favor of this idea considering the relenting situations of the bygone days. Advances on technology and science, however, also throw light on people's choice on careers, which can be illuminated by reasons and specifical examples in the following article(这句不错）.
In the first place, I do concede that it was relatively easier for people to recognize a promising career for the employment situation in the past was less complex. On one hand, less competitions were confronted on human resource market as the pressure exerted by population was controllable. Specifically, in the 1950th of China when the national economy was rebuilt, every career was thriving and residents were lucky enough to get chances to be constituted a certain job instead of crowding in the labor market. Any job they possessed would lead to a secure and successful future. On the other hand, due to the underdevelopment of technology and science, the sorts of jobs available were comparatively narrow. People living in the past may need not face the dilemma during the determination making process（如果determination提前的话making应该被动了，我偏向喜欢用the process of making determination).
However, prodded by the progress of technology and science, people currently own,(别省掉都逗号，否则就出现两个谓语） even more access to information which help them have a better understanding of different fields. For instance, the computer enables people to gather information free of the limitation of distance and time（这样写太累赘，虽然可以增加字数，但表达不是很好，不如不用，只有一个freely就行）. It is the computer that broadens people's view to diverse issues, therefore clearly know what they really want and which job is of most significance to them（指代不明）. The further online service on career choice even developes a complete analysis of the individual and provides him or her with professional job recommendations. Besides, many colleges and universities have adopted some courses which（换to) foster students’ capacity to ascertain a promising career or a job. Here, we are confident that current people are apparently easier to confirm their careers and jobs.
Last but not least, we cannot ignore the essence of future with success and safety. Form my point, that possibly stands for the a high salary which could cover any emergent disease of a family member and satisfaction that an individual self grains from work. Even though some careers such as physician, attorney and professor are paid highly, the people engaged in these fields also are required to have a firm foundation of relevant knowledge, especially the physician probably has to burden the pressure of facing death of his patient. Thus we are not supposed to reckless pursue a 'so-called' successful career without consideration of our inner wills. Instead a clear identification of ourselves plays an vital role for us to find jobs which are most suitable for us. Only in this way will we move continuously on the way to a secure and successful future.
In sum up, in spite of some advantages attached to the past which made people easily identify a career, the current progress on employment situation outstrips the former advantages. To get a better future, we must start from equipping ourselves with knowledge instead of merely pursuing a superficially promising career. As long as we find a job most proper for us and commit enormous effort will we attain a brighter future.作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-6 19:12
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, it was easier for people to identify what types of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Whether people are faced with more difficulty to determine their careers which contribute to a successful future currently than those (careers点指代不明了) did in the past? I am partly in favor of this idea considering the relenting situations of the bygone days. Advances on technology and science, however, also throw light on people's choice on careers, which can be illuminated by reasons and specifical examples in the following article(这句不错）.
In the first place, I do concede that it was relatively easier for people to recognize a promising career for the employment situation in the past was less complex. On one hand, less competitionswere（competition是单数） confronted on human resource market as the pressure exerted by population was controllable. Specifically, in the 1950th of China when the national economy was rebuilt, every career was thriving and residents were lucky enough to get chances to be constituted a certain job instead of crowding in the labor market. Any job they possessed would lead to a secure and successful future. On the other hand, due to the underdevelopment of technology and science, the sorts of jobs available were comparatively narrow. People living in the past may need not face the dilemma during the determination making process（如果determination提前的话making应该被动了，我偏向喜欢用the process of making determination)(the process of making determination很对，这里直接就用determination process）.
However, prodded by the progress of technology and science, people currently own,(别省掉都逗号，否则就出现两个谓语）（这里不太懂是什么意思，prodded是被动语态）even more access to information which help them have a better understanding of different fields. For instance, the computer enables people to gather information free of the limitation of distance and time（这样写太累赘，虽然可以增加字数，但表达不是很好，不如不用，只有一个freely就行）. It is the computer that broadens people's view to diverse issues, therefore clearly know what they（指代错误了——people）really want and which job is of most significance to them（指代不明）. The further online service on career choice even developes a complete analysis of the individual and provides him or her with professional job recommendations. Besides, many colleges and universities have adopted some courses which to（换to) foster students’ capacity to ascertain a promising career or a job. Here, we are confident that current people are apparently easier to confirm their careers and jobs.
Last but not least, we cannot ignore the essence of future with success and safety. Form my point, that possibly stands for the a(查了一下the是表特指，a是表一类事物，所以婷婷感觉这里用a比较好的)high salary which could cover any emergent disease of a family member and satisfaction that an individual self grains from work. Even though some careers such as physician, attorney and professor are paid highly, the people engaged in these fields also are required to have a firm foundation of relevant knowledge, especially the physician probably has to burden the pressure of facing death of his patient. Thus we are not supposed to reckless pursue a 'so-called' successful career without consideration of our inner wills. Instead a clear identification of ourselves plays an vital role for us to find jobs which are most suitable for us. Only in this way will we move continuously on the way to a secure and successful future.
In sum up, in spite of some advantages attached to the past which made people easily identify a career, the current progress on employment situation outstrips the former advantages. To get a better future, we must start from equipping ourselves with knowledge instead of merely pursuing a superficially promising career. As long as we find a job most proper for us and commit enormous effort will we attain a brighter future. 作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-7 17:13
TPO 23 综合 The reading passage puts forward three hypotheses to throw light on the decline of the yellow cedar. The listening passage, however, denotes that none of these three explanations is adequate.
At the very beginning, the writer holds that the cedar bark beetle is the major cause of the declination. Yet the speaker displays a fact that heathy yellow cedars are more resistant to insects than other species by releasing chemical substance poisonous to beetles. Furthermore, the cedar beetles mainly attack the damaged and sick cedars which are doomed to demise. Thus the cedar bark beetle cannot be a candidate for the tree's decline.
Moreover, the speaker also casts doubt on the hypothesis that brown bears are responsible for the decline. To support his statement, the speaker exhibits the evidence that brown bears are existed only on mainland. Since the overall decline of yellow cedar occurs both on the mainland and island, the brown bear fails to account for the decrease in number of yellow cedar on the island.
Last but not least, the point that changes of climate contribute to the decline is also challenged by the speaker. According to the speaker, the frost damage could not be the explanation since the yellow cedar on lower elevation where it is warm die in greater number than that on higher elevation where it is cold. Although the climatic changes make root system of yellow cedar more sensitive, confidence is little to support this hypothesis.作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-7 17:31
11.7 Colleges or universities should offer students a better job preparation before they start working. Whether students are supposed to be offered a better job preparation before entering work places by colleges, universities and other educational institutions? I cannot agree with this policy more as the courses and internship programs both perform indispensable role to pave the way to students' future careers. Points in different dimensions and specific examples will be demonstrated to bolster my statement.
In the first place, the systematic curriculum relevant to jobs is an optimal approach to equip students with professional knowledge. In campus, students are more concentrated in their own studying without disturbance from outside, which means they have higher working efficiency to absorb knowledge of their major. Specifically, a brilliant boy whose major is finance, during the preparation program, can not only participate in major courses such as marketing, banking and psychology of consumers, but also learns critical thinking and value estimation, all of which are helpful for his future career in the finance field.
Moreover, the job preparation also includes the internship programs where opportunities are big for students to cultivate their pragmatic abilities and skills for certain jobs. For instance, an apprentice could acquire rich experience like how to tackle the emergencies from the veterans who have worked for the corporation over ten years. Additionally, from working within a team, an individual will manage to sharpen his interpersonal skills and ability to deliver a eloquent lecture and even learn more from the teamwork spirit. In this way, the internship will lay a firm foundation for students' future job and raise them in a favorable position in the human resource market.
In spite of the advantages of the job preparation for students, the colleges and universities may place emphasis on the extent of encouragement on students for their careers choice. Possible is that the myopic pursuit of so-called lucrative and promising careers identified by authorities on education will refrain students from other available jobs whose significance are neglected by the public. What is of the most importance is the real interests inherent to students. To properly prepare students for future job, colleges and universities would better provide introduction courses of diverse majors to help students have better understandings of those majors they are to engage in and give advises when it is needed. In this way will the schools maximize the merits of job preparation.
In sum, since the job preparation exert enormous positive impacts on students' acquisition of knowledge and practical working abilities, there is no reason to refuse carrying out this policy before students start working. As long as colleges and universities pitch rational prodding force on students’ job choice and preparation will the students benefit ultimately.作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-8 17:34
TPO 24 综合 The reading passage contends that the examination of the T rex's leg bone reveals the existence of remains of blood vessels, red blood cells and collagen matrix. The lecturer, however, casts doubt on these discoveries.
At the very beginning, the lecturer challenges the idea that soft, flexible organic substance is the remains of blood vessels. According to him, these soft material may be left by bacteria colonies since bacteria colonized the hollows inside the bone which used to be the blood channels long after the organism died. Therefore, it cannot be the remains of blood vessels.
Furthermore, the writer claims the presence of red blood cells because of the color and size of the spheres. Conversely, the lecturer puts forward a fact that these spheres are also found in primitives nearby which do not have red blood cells when alive. Thus these spheres are not red blood cells but some pieces of reddish mineral.
Last but not least, the lecturer denotes that the discovery of collagen contained in T rex's leg bone is open to question. Since no collagen has been detected in fossils older than 100,000 years, the 70-million-year-old T rex's cannot preserve the collagen. Besides, the lecturer hypothesizes that collagen may come from a recent resource such as the skin of researchers who were handling the bone recently.作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-8 17:41
11.8 Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in the past. Whether the situation of receiving education is worse currently than in the past, as the speaker maintains? This statement is superficially correct, while a deep scrutiny will reveal the absurdness of it. I am inclined to stand for the view that education is much more easily to be acquired than before.
In the first place, the improvement of people's attitude toward education enhances an skyrocketing number of individuals to pursue opportunities for education. In the past, governed by the notation that earning money enjoyed the priority over any other alternatives, people tended to work in farmland and manufactory since they became adolescents when it was a great time to absorb knowledge. In contrast, since an increasing number of people are aware of the significance of knowledge and intellectual labor, education is placed considerable emphases on now. Here it is the revolution of people's thoughts that make people easier to get educated today than begone days.
Furthermore, the advances on technology and science as well build a bridge between people and education. Specifically, the computer, valued as one of the most successful invention in the twentieth century, plays an encouraging role on rendering ease to education. On one hand, it effectively save people's time and energy on searching information. No matter when and where, one merely needs to open the search box and type in keys words, and then all information related will emerge on the screen within seconds, which greatly shorten the time for him or her who used to go to libraries or bookstores to look for information. On the other hand, with the development of internet, the online education has become possible. Currently enrolled in a online course, one is able to learn as do the ordinary students by sitting in front of the computer at home, which is far out of the imagination of the past people.
Even though the progress on thoughts toward education and learning approach, there is no denying that competitions for chances of education is much more fiercer. So limited the resource of education such as expert professors, classrooms, and even internet together with the growing number of people who demand education that hardship can be faced by students, family and even the whole society. Luckily, the government has realized this quandary. A mint of money is pitched to cultivate more professors, to build more schools and to bring in more teaching equipment, all of which will release the pressure on current educational situations. Besides, certain acts of education are also enacted to guarantee the rights of citizens to get equal chance of education. In this way, conspicuous is that people today are easier to be educated than those in the past.
In sum, from what has been discussed above, it is convincing that people's attitude on education is improved and means to get educated are of greater convenience. With the joint efforts of family, society and the government, people are now easier to become educated than in the past and will be easier and easier in the future.作者: 小滋滋 时间: 2012-11-8 18:17
TPO 23 综合 The reading passage puts forward three hypotheses to throw light on the decline of the yellow cedar. The listening passage, however, denotes that none of these three explanations is（are） adequate.
At the very beginning, the writer holds that the cedar bark beetle is the major cause of the declination. Yet the speaker displays a fact that heathy yellow cedars are more resistant to insects than other species by releasing chemical substance poisonous to beetles. Furthermore, the cedar beetles mainly attack the damaged and sick cedars which are doomed to demise. Thus the cedar bark beetle cannot be a candidate for the tree's decline.
Moreover, the speaker also casts doubt on the hypothesis that brown bears are responsible for the decline. To support his statement, the speaker exhibits the evidence that brown bears are existed only on mainland.(这点听力里面是iland没有和mland有少量，我觉得有必要说全)Since the overall decline of yellow cedar occurs both on the mainland and island, the brown bear fails to account for the decrease in number of yellow cedar on the island.
Last but not least, the point that changes of climate contribute to the decline is also challenged by the speaker. According to the speaker, the frost damage could not be the explanation since the yellow cedar on lower elevation where it is warm die in greater number than that on higher elevation where it is cold. Although the climatic changes make root system of yellow cedar more sensitive, confidence（？没见过这个用法） is little to support this hypothesis.
整体写的很好了，建议可以先说观点对比，然后再说细节。 作者: AnthonySummer 时间: 2012-11-8 21:50
11.7 Colleges or universities should offer students a better job preparation before they start working.
Whether students are supposed to be offered a better job preparation before entering work places by colleges, universities and other educational institutions? I cannot agree with this policy more as the courses and internship programs both perform (noun前加冠詞或者直接使用複數）an indispensable role to pave the way for (to) students' future careers. Points in different dimensions and specific examples will be demonstrated to bolster my statement.
In the first place, the systematic curriculum relevant to jobs is an optimal approach to equip students with professional knowledge. In campus, students are more concentrated in their own studying without disturbance from outside, which means they have higher （higher和efficiency重複意思了， they can effect to absorb~）working efficiency to absorb knowledge of their major. Specifically, a brilliant boy whose major is finance, during the preparation program,（who 缺少主語~）cannot only participate in major courses such as marketing, banking and psychology of consumers, but also learns critical thinking and value estimation, all of which are helpful for his future career in the finance field. （最後最好加句critical thinking is the foundation of finance industry 和這段主體呼應）
Moreover, the job preparation also includes the internship programs where opportunities are big（big形容不恰當吧）for students to cultivate their pragmatic abilities and skills for certain jobs. For instance, an apprentice could acquire rich experience like how to tackle the emergencies from the veterans who have worked for the corporation over ten years. Additionally, from working within a team, an individual will manage to sharpen his interpersonal skills and ability to deliver an eloquent lecture and even learn more from the teamwork spirit. In this way, the internship will lay a firm foundation for students' future job and raise them in a favorable position in the human resource market. （寫的不錯！）
In spite of the advantages of the job preparation for students, the colleges and universities may place emphasis on the extent of encouragement on students for their careers choice. Possible is that the myopic pursuit of so-called lucrative and promising careers identified by authorities on education will refrain students from other available jobs whose （that） significance are neglected by the public（沒看懂這句話主謂賓的關係）. What is of the most importance is the real interests inherent to students. To properly prepare students for future job, colleges and universities would better provide introduction courses of diverse majors to help students have better understandings of those majors they are to engage in and give advises when it is needed. In this way will the schools maximize the merits of job preparation.
In sum, since the job preparation exert enormous positive impacts on students' acquisition of knowledge and practical working abilities, there is no reason to refuse carrying out this policy before students start working. As long as colleges and universities pitch rational prodding force on students' job choice and preparation will the students benefit ultimately.
作者: lmylacoste 时间: 2012-11-9 16:32 Whether the situation of receiving education is worse currently than in the past, as the speaker maintains? This statement is superficially correct, while a deep scrutiny will reveal the absurdness of it.（好对比，G的经典） I am inclined to stand for the view that education is much more easily to be acquired than before.
In the first place, the improvement of people's attitude toward education enhances an skyrocketing number of individuals to pursue opportunities for education. In the past, governed by the notation that earning money enjoyed the priority over any other alternatives, people tended to work in farmland and manufactory since they became(were 会不会好点，become强调变化) adolescents when it was a great time to absorb knowledge. In contrast, since an increasing number of people are aware of the significance of knowledge and intellectual labor, education is placed considerable emphases on now. Here it is the revolution of people's thoughts that make people easier to get educated today than begone days.
Furthermore, the advances on technology and science as well build a bridge between people and education. Specifically, the computer, valued as one of the most successful invention in the twentieth century, plays an encouraging role on rendering ease to education(rendering在这里是提供的意思吗？我觉得不是特别好，可以delivering ease for/easing vt). On one hand, it effectively save(复数哦) people's time and energy on searching information. No matter when and where, one merely needs to open the search-box and type in keys words, and then all information related will emerge on the screen within seconds, which greatly shorten the time for him or her who used to go to libraries or bookstores to look for information. On the other hand, with the development of internet, the online education has become possible. Currently enrolled in a online course, one is able to learn as do the ordinary students(为什么要倒装，求教！！！) by sitting in front of the computer at home, which is far out of（有远远超出的意思吗，我查了字典，有这意思例句，但没这意思。。。） the imagination of the past people.
Even though the progress on thoughts（是进步的思想吧，但是中心词是progress，应该是thoughts比较好，可以用progressive thoughts/progressive ideas） toward education and learning approach, there is no denying that competitions for chances of education is much more fiercer.（多加r了）So limited（倒装用得好！） the resource of education such as expert professors, classrooms, and even internet together with the growing number of people who demand education that hardship can be faced by students(被动有点矫情了，直接students等will suffer from hardships 比较利落), family and even the whole society. Luckily, the government has realized this quandary.A mint of money is pitched(太高深，求解释！！！) to cultivate more professors, to build more schools and to bring in more teaching equipment, all of which will release the pressure on current educational situations. Besides, certain acts of education are also enacted（enact act 好！！！）to guarantee the rights of citizens to get equal chance of education. In this way, conspicuous is that（是倒装结构吗，没见过不敢说错，求解释！！！）people today are easier to be educated than those in the past.
In sum, from what has been discussed above, it is convincing that people's attitude on education is improved and means to get educated are of greater convenience. With the joint efforts of family, society and the government, people are now easier to become educated than in the past and will be easier and easier in the future.
总结：
Excellent. Not flattering, it’s the best article of TOEFL I have read.
Various vocabulary and the diverse sentence structure, especially the invertedsentence, impress me a lot 作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-10 07:46
11.08 独立 Whether the situation of receiving education is worse currently than in the past, as the speaker maintains? This statement is superficially correct, while a deep scrutiny will reveal the absurdness of it.（好对比，G的经典） I am inclined to stand for the view that education is much more easily to be acquired than before.
In the first place, the improvement of people's attitude toward education enhances an skyrocketing number of individuals to pursue opportunities for education. In the past, governed by the notation that earning money enjoyed the priority over any other alternatives, people tended to work in farmland and manufactory since they became were (嗯，用were陈述事实更好) (were 会不会好点，become强调变化) adolescents when it was a great time to absorb knowledge. In contrast, since an increasing number of people are aware of the significance of knowledge and intellectual labor, education is placed considerable emphases on now. Here it is the revolution of people's thoughts that make people easier to get educated today than begone days.
Furthermore, the advances on technology and science as well build a bridge between people and education. Specifically, the computer, valued as one of the most successful invention in the twentieth century, plays an encouraging role on rendering ease to education (render在这里是给予的意思，或者这里用easing the education)(rendering在这里是提供的意思吗？我觉得不是特别好，可以delivering ease for/easing vt). On one hand, it effectively save saves(复数哦) people's time and energy on searching information. No matter when and where, one merely needs to open the search-box and type in keys words, and then all information related will emerge on the screen within seconds, which greatly shorten the time for him or her who used to go to libraries or bookstores to look for information. On the other hand, with the development of internet, the online education has become possible. Currently enrolled in a online course, one is able to learn as do the ordinary students(为什么要倒装，求教！！！) by sitting in front of the computer at home, which is far out of more than（额，这里有点chinglish了）（有远远超出的意思吗，我查了字典，有这意思例句，但没这意思。。。） the imagination of the past people.
Even though the progress on thoughts progressive thoughts（是进步的思想吧，但是中心词是progress，应该是thoughts比较好，可以用progressive thoughts/progressive ideas） toward education and learning approach, there is no denying that competitions for chances of education is much more fiercer.（多加r了）So limited（倒装用得好！） the resource of education such as expert professors, classrooms, and even internet together with the growing number of people who demand education that hardship can be faced by students(被动有点矫情了，直接students等will suffer from hardships 比较利落), family and even the whole society. Luckily, the government has realized this quandary.A mint of money is pitched(太高深，求解释！！！) (投入大量的资金)to cultivate more professors, to build more schools and to bring in more teaching equipment, all of which will release the pressure on current educational situations. Besides, certain acts of education are also enacted（enact act 好！！！）to guarantee the rights of citizens to get equal chance of education. In this way, conspicuous is that（是倒装结构吗，没见过不敢说错，求解释！！！）(是倒装，强调这一个观点已经很明显了)people today are easier to be educated than those in the past.
In sum, from what has been discussed above, it is convincing that people's attitude on education is improved and means to get educated are of greater convenience. With the joint efforts of family, society and the government, people are now easier to become educated than in the past and will be easier and easier in the future. 总结：Excellent. Not flattering, it’s the best article of TOEFL I have read.Various vocabulary and the diverse sentence structure, especially the invertedsentence, impress me a lot 谢谢lmy，改的超好诶，又认识到自己的不足了！共勉~作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-10 17:29
11.10 综合 The reading passage contends that the painting is Jane Austen because it was owned by Austen's extended family and it resembles Cassandra's sketch of Austen when she was a teenager. The speaker, however, believes that none of them is convincing by following points.
At first, the writer holds that the claim that the portrait was Austen was endorsed by Austen's family. However, the speaker argues that Austen's family had never seen Austen privately since the use of the portrait was authorized after Austen had been dead for seventy years. In this way, the endorsement of Austen's family on the portrait is open to question.
Furthermore, the writer asserts that the face in the portrait resembles the one depicted by Cassandra. Yet the speaker casts doubt on this by providing an alternative explanation. The girl was Austen's relative-one of Austen's female cousins or their daughters. Specifically, evidence suggests that it was Mary who is Austen's niece.
Last but not least, the speaker also challenges the evidence which indicates the portrait was painted when Austen was a teenager. By analysis of the portrait, the particular canvas was sold merely by William in London. The fact is that William did not sell this canvas until Austen was 27 years old. Therefore, the painting cannot be drawn when Austen was a teenager.作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-10 17:40
11.10 独立 spending money on traveling＆vacation vs. saving for future
The issue whether people are supposed to spend money on travel or save it for the future has provoked a heated discussion. Standing on this intersection, I tend to have a favorable attitude toward money spent on trips. Points in different dimensions will be illuminated by specific examples to bolster my perspective.
In the first place, travel is one of the optimal approaches to release an individual from working pressure. In current society, even though one has earned much more money than in the past and is no longer concerned with hazards of exposure and starvation, he is unavoidable to potential burden on working tasks and the relationship between others. Thus, it is time to travel. Specifically, a tour to Europe could make one appreciate the bravery of warriors in Rome Colosseo, savor the fascination of Eiffel Towel in Paris and even surprise the mystery of nature in Alps, all of these scenes will let one forget his worries about the reality and infill encouragement in the brain and limps. After an excellent trip, one will be more inspired and devoted on his work. Here travel plays an indispensable role to free people's tension.
The money spent on travel is rewarding for it not only sets us free from the working stress, but also exerts significant impacts on broadening our horizon. In particular, on a trip, chances are great for we to make friends with others with different careers ranging from painter, professor and even philosopher. During the trip, a perspicacious painter is able to share with us his experience to discover the power of the nature and to reveal potential emotions of human beings; a brilliant professor could prod us to realize the essence of knowledge and the importance to pursue for it; additionally a sagacious philosopher can demonstrate the value of life and thus evoke our sympathy towards children in Africa who still live a miserable life. From those wise people, we will benefit from the euphoria of traveling with them but also construct our epistemology and value system.
Admittedly, I concede that, to some degree, it is not prudent to spend all of our money on traveling without considering any possible emergencies. Since nobody could predict the things occurring in the future, we would better set aside a proper part of our salary monthly instead of pouring them on the entertainment activities. On the other hand, we are not necessarily hold over passive attitude towards the probable impending misfortune. With the development of national economy, the government is engaging to invest money on the maintenance of citizens' custodian life. Besides, certain laws and statuaries have been enacted to secure citizens' normal life when something bad suddenly happens. From this aspect, it is confident that as long as we rationally allocate money spent on traveling and with the assistance from the government, opportunities are big that we will live a happier and abundant life.
In sum up, from what has been discussed above, it is time to applaud for the money used on traveling since it does lift burden on us and enable us to contact with elites. If we could spend money on traveling with reasonability, a brighter future certainly is around the corner.作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-12 09:38
11.10 综合 TPO12 The reading passage contends that ifthe painting is Jane Austen because it was owned by Austen's extended family and it （the portrait）resembles Cassandra's sketch of Austen when she was a teenager. The speaker, however, believes that none of them is convincing by following points.
At first, the writer holds that the claim that the portrait was Austen was endorsed by Austen's family. However, the speaker argues that Austen's family had never seen Austen privately since the use of the portrait was authorized after Austen had been dead foralmost seventy years. In this way, the endorsement of Austen's family on the portrait is open to question.
Furthermore, the writer asserts that the face in the portrait resembles the one depicted by Cassandra. Yet the speaker casts doubt on this by providing an alternative explanation. The girl was Austen's relative-one of Austen's female cousins or their daughters. Specifically, evidence suggests that it was Mary who is aAusten'sdistanceniece.
Last but not least, the speaker also challenges the evidence which indicates the portrait was painted when Austen was a teenager. By analysis of the portrait, the particular canvas was sold merely by William in London. The fact is that William did not sell this canvas until(when听力材料中 采用原文的词汇 貌似会得到比较高的分数) Austen was 27 years old. Therefore, the painting cannot be drawn when Austen was a teenager.我觉得有点问题 最后一个观点更强调的是年龄时间的不搭 最好说一下. 作者: 婷婷connie 时间: 2012-11-12 09:39
11.10 独立 spending money on traveling＆vacation vs. saving for future
The issue whether people are supposed to spend money on travel or save it for the future has provoked a heated discussion（你好喜欢 heated啊^^）. Standing on this intersection, I tend to have a favorable attitude toward money spent on trips. Points in different dimensions will be illuminated by specific examples to bolster my perspective.
In the first place, travel is one of the optimal approaches比我的高级好多啊to release an individual from working pressure. In current society, even though one has earned much more money than in the past and is no longer concerned with hazards of exposure and starvation, heis unavoidable to potential burden on working tasks and the relationship between others. Thus, it is time to travel. Specifically, a tour to Europe could make one appreciate the bravery of warriors in Rome Colosseo, savor the fascination of Eiffel Towel in Paris and even surprise the mystery of nature in Alps, all of these scenes will let one forget his worries about the reality and infill encouragement in the brain and limps.（这里想表达哦大脑和四肢的意思）（是非常好的词呢 还是 用的不是很恰当 我就confused）After an excellent trip, one will be more inspired and devoted onto（devoted to do 没有on 的用法）his work. Here travel plays an indispensable role to free people's tension.
The money spent on travel is rewarding for it not only sets us free from the working stress, but also exerts significant impacts on broadening our horizon. In particular, on a trip, chances are great for weus（us） to make friends with others withother people who have有点重复吧 换个介词 different careers ranging from painter, professor and even philosopher. During the trip, a perspicacious painter is able to share with us his experience to discover the power of the nature and to reveal potential emotions of human beings; a brilliant professor could prod us to realize the essence of knowledge and the importance to pursue for it; additionally a sagacious philosopher can demonstrate the value of life and thus evoke our sympathy towards children in Africa who still live a miserable life. From those wise people, we will benefit from the euphoriaof traveling with them but also construct（reconstruct）our epistemology and value system.
Admittedly, I concede that, to some degree, it is not prudent to spend all of our(去掉our怎么样)money on traveling without considering any possible emergencies. Since nobody could predict the things occurring(what will happen) in the future, we wouldhadbetter？讨论一下这里 set aside a proper part of our salary monthly instead of pouring whole of them on the entertainment activities. On the other hand, we are not necessarily hold over passive attitude towards the probable impending misfortune. With the development of national economy, the government is engaging to invest money on the maintenance of citizens' custodianquotidian life不知道这么用对不对. Besides, certain laws andstatuariesstatutes（这词用的？不明白为什么放这里）have been enacted to secure citizens' normal life when something bad suddenly happens. From this aspect, it is confident that as long as we rationally allocate money spent on traveling and with the assistance from the government, opportunities are big that we will live a happier and abundant life.这段就没前两段 思路清晰 逻辑 也有点~~~
In sum up, from what has been discussed above, it is time to applaud for the money used on traveling since it does lift burden on us（on us what ） and enable us to contact with elites. If we could spend money on traveling with reasonability, a brighter future certainly is around the corner.(让我想到了爱转角哈哈)