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作者: calmingben    时间: 2012-10-24 00:21
标题: 求指导SC
In her 26 years in theforests of Gombe, Jane Goodall collected data that proved that chimpanzees exhibitthe kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior and expression can bepassed on from each one to others by imitating and practicing.
A.   exhibit the kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior andexpression can be passed on from each one to others by imitating and practicing
B.   will exhibit the kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior andexpression can be passed on from one to another by imitating and practicing
C.   will exhibit the kind of curiosity so that new patterns of behavior andexpression can be passed on from one to another by imitation and practice
D.    exhibit the kind ofcuriosity by which new patterns of behavior and expression can be passed onfrom one to another by imitation and practice
E.  exhibit the kind of curiosity where new patterns of behavior and expressionare passed on to others by imitation and practice


请问为什么A不对。




作者: xohe赵    时间: 2012-10-25 11:00
A.    s.v.o. + so that + 情态动词+ v.引导的是目的性状语,用在此处逻辑错误;imitating and practicing不如imitation和practice语义相符及简洁;from each one to others用法错误,泛指群体里两个个体之间的关系应该用one…another…


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