241.
Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published. (A) the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be (B) that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being (C) the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be (D) seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results (E) that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results 正确：E
请问可以吧B选项的with短语看做独立主格吗？B的错误在哪？谢谢！-- by 会员 aimee09 (2012/10/20 21:08:43)
you should remember that
parallelism is the most effective weapon to deal with SC problems
just determine which part should be parallel and eliminate other choices with faulty or non-existent parallelim
you see the contrast present in the sentence
1. the protest from those waste-disposal companies
just brain-strom a while
what should there be a protest？ for what？there muse be something bad ，at least for those company
what？measures of .... as well as the publish ....
these two things are actually hurting those companies
they should be put in parallel form (either noun, verb or clause)
B can be easily knocked out for non-exsistent parallelism
-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/20 21:34:47)
谢谢！！也就是说parallelism>absolute phrases了？还是说以句意为根据呢？我总觉得measure和publish之间有一种递进的感觉，并不是完全平行。。可能是我自己的问题吧。。
241.
Despite protests from some waste-disposal companies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published. (A) the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be (B) that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being (C) the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be (D) seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results (E) that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results 正确：E
请问可以吧B选项的with短语看做独立主格吗？B的错误在哪？谢谢！-- by 会员 aimee09 (2012/10/20 21:08:43)
you should remember that
parallelism is the most effective weapon to deal with SC problems
just determine which part should be parallel and eliminate other choices with faulty or non-existent parallelim
you see the contrast present in the sentence
1. the protest from those waste-disposal companies
just brain-strom a while
what should there be a protest？ for what？there muse be something bad ，at least for those company
what？measures of .... as well as the publish ....
these two things are actually hurting those companies
they should be put in parallel form (either noun, verb or clause)
B can be easily knocked out for non-exsistent parallelism
-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/20 21:34:47)
谢谢！！也就是说parallelism>absolute phrases了？还是说以句意为根据呢？我总觉得measure和publish之间有一种递进的感觉，并不是完全平行。。可能是我自己的问题吧。。
-- by 会员 aimee09 (2012/10/20 23:40:37)
