标题: Kellogg今年的leadership essay故事必须选多个嘛？ [打印本页] 作者: Pythagoras 时间: 2012-10-11 23:37 标题: Kellogg今年的leadership essay故事必须选多个嘛？ What have been your mostsignificant leadership experiences? What challenges did you face, and whatimpact did you have? This is your opportunity to explain how you Think Bravely(personally and/or professionally). (500 word limit) 这个题目，网上有分析说，题目里experiences是复数，所以最好写2-3个leadership story。但是我想想觉得500字写两个story对我来说有点难。不知道达人怎么看这个题目的，能只写一个story么？ 作者: 斑点狗1985 时间: 2012-10-12 08:20
是要写>1个的leadership story来着作者: znana1223 时间: 2012-10-12 11:41
好问题啊，我只写了一个，想想要不要加一个呢。但是500写两个感觉好难啊，还要写背景，怎么想，怎么做的，结果如何作者: tobytao 时间: 2012-10-12 11:57
most significant，我觉得只能是一个作者: 斑点狗1985 时间: 2012-10-12 20:07
友情提醒。。。 have been而不是has been。。。 most significant前面没有the。。。 experience用了复数experiences。。。
所以。。。 需要>1的故事。。。
供参考！~~~作者: Pythagoras 时间: 2012-10-12 21:29
友情提醒。。。 have been而不是has been。。。 most significant前面没有the。。。 experience用了复数experiences。。。
What have been your mostsignificant leadership experiences? What challenges did you face, and whatimpact did you have? This is your opportunity to explain how you Think Bravely(personally and/or professionally). (500 word limit) 这个题目，网上有分析说，题目里experiences是复数，所以最好写2-3个leadership story。但是我想想觉得500字写两个story对我来说有点难。不知道达人怎么看这个题目的，能只写一个story么？
What have been your mostsignificant leadership experiences? What challenges did you face, and whatimpact did you have? This is your opportunity to explain how you Think Bravely(personally and/or professionally). (500 word limit) 这个题目，网上有分析说，题目里experiences是复数，所以最好写2-3个leadership story。但是我想想觉得500字写两个story对我来说有点难。不知道达人怎么看这个题目的，能只写一个story么？
-- by 会员 Pythagoras (2012/10/11 23:37:21)
要写2-3个。500字写2个绰绰有余。
-- by 会员 0250008 (2012/10/15 1:48:09)
多谢大牛指点！作者: nlarthur 时间: 2012-10-16 11:08
我写了两个，第一个稍长，第二个稍短作者: JonFrank 时间: 2012-10-18 12:02
Good question! I would suggest writing at least TWO. Because really of PRIMARY importance in all schools and in all essay questions is to follow the instructions! So if they ask for “stories” in plural, you need to give them stories. And if they ask for “AN experience” you need to give them only one. After all, in these essays, your main challenge is to follow whatever instructions they give and using these limitations, to show them that you are an AWESOME candidate. And it may seem hard at this point to get out TWO leadership stories in 500 words, but actually 500 words can be quite a lot. The important thing is to keep to the point.
A small tip for you: Leave out the introductions. START with the main PROBLEM or challenge. If you do this, you get STRAIGHT into the story from the very beginning. It helps you first of all, write a MUCH more exciting story, and secondly, helps you save a LOT of wordspace!