标题: OG13 SC104 请NN们指导~~ [打印本页] 作者: yiqing2012 时间: 2012-10-11 21:51 标题: OG13 SC104 请NN们指导~~ Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
看了很多帖子的解释，有了自己的想法，不知道对不对，希望请教NN们~~~
这句话中“carefully ...narratives”这个部分可能1）修饰BP这个人2）修饰illustrations； 如果修饰BP这个人（即BP，carefully coordinating them with her narratives ）,那么因为后面还有capitalize这个v.，而同一个主语发出的动作应该平行，所以应该用coordinated而非coordinating来修饰BP。那我们来看E，这句话很怪异，我分析了一下，原因有两点：1）语义上，coordinate 和后面的keen observation &love等都没有平行的含义；2）in her book illustrations提前到BP之前会比较正常，这样不仅使主语离谓语更近，也能使句意更清晰一点。所以“carefully ...narratives”应该修饰illustrations,那么符合逻辑的只有C选项。
