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作者: ivansmile33    时间: 2012-10-3 01:04
标题: 求教og中的with的用法，求帮助
Except for a concert performance that the composer himself staged in 1911, Scott Joplin’s ragtime operaTree monisha was not produced until 1972, sixty-one years after its completion.
(A) Except for a concert performance that the composer himselfstaged
(B) Except for a concert performance with the composer himselfstaging it
(C) Besides a concert performance being staged by the composerhimself
(D) Excepting a concert performance that the composer himself staged
(E) With the exception of a concert performance with the staging done by the composer himself

这题B选项的with是修饰performance，那么E选项以with开头是做状语么？第二个with呢？做修饰语，修饰performance？
在看过曼哈顿习语那一章节，发现with开头曼哈顿认为是错的，请问大家怎么认为的？
再一题，

Almost a decade after New York State passed laws to protect patients by reducing the grueling hours worked by medical residents, twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work more than 95 hours a week.

twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
an investigation by state medical officials of twelve hospitals have found all twelve consistently breaking the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, with more than half the surgical residents working
an investigation of twelve hospitals by state medical officials has found that all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
twelve hospitals were investigated by state medical officials who found all twelve breaking the laws, with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight, and more than half the surgical residents work
an investigation by state medical officials has found that, of twelve hospitals, all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, with more than half the surgical residents working

答案是C
B中的with放在句末，用逗号隔开，是做状语修饰  an investigation 还是做定语修饰hours，我知道两个修饰都不对，但是每次遇到末尾的都不知道修饰什么，求赐教？
顺便问一下，D中的who是不是应该改成whom修饰officials啊？
而E中的of twelve hospitals怎么看都觉得位置放得不对，无法解释，是这样么？

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作者: DUKB24    时间: 2012-10-3 08:35

Except for a concert performance that the composer himself staged in 1911, Scott Joplin’s ragtime operaTree monisha was not produced until 1972, sixty-one years after its completion.
(A) Except for a concert performance that the composer himselfstaged
(B) Except for a concert performance with the composer himselfstaging it
(C) Besides a concert performance being staged by the composerhimself
(D) Excepting a concert performance that the composer himself staged
(E) With the exception of a concert performance with the staging done by the composer himself

这题B选项的with是修饰performance，那么E选项以with开头是做状语么？第二个with呢？做修饰语，修饰performance？
在看过曼哈顿习语那一章节，发现with开头曼哈顿认为是错的，请问大家怎么认为的？
再一题，

Almost a decade after New York State passed laws to protect patients by reducing the grueling hours worked by medical residents, twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work more than 95 hours a week.

twelve hospitals have been investigated by state medical officials, finding that all twelve consistently break the laws, many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
an investigation by state medical officials of twelve hospitals have found all twelve consistently breaking the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, with more than half the surgical residents working
an investigation of twelve hospitals by state medical officials has found that all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, and that more than half the surgical residents work
twelve hospitals were investigated by state medical officials who found all twelve breaking the laws, with many residents working longer than 24 hours straight, and more than half the surgical residents work
an investigation by state medical officials has found that, of twelve hospitals, all twelve consistently break the laws, that many residents work longer than 24 hours straight, with more than half the surgical residents working

答案是C
B中的with放在句末，用逗号隔开，是做状语修饰  an investigation 还是做定语修饰hours，我知道两个修饰都不对，但是每次遇到末尾的都不知道修饰什么，求赐教？
顺便问一下，D中的who是不是应该改成whom修饰officials啊？
而E中的of twelve hospitals怎么看都觉得位置放得不对，无法解释，是这样么？

-- by 会员 ivansmile33 (2012/10/3 1:04:27)

quote：
with：


Now let’s talk about the comma + with modifiers. So here we are talking about prepositional phrases. “with” modifiers are very versatile modifiers. They can modify either the preceding clause or the preceding nouns. What they modify actually depends on the context of the sentence and the wording of the modifier itself.


Bihar is India's poorest state, with an annual per capita income of $111.


In this sentence, with modifier actually modifies the preceding noun. With modifier in this sentence has the following sense. Notice how “which has” can be understood to replace “with”.
India’s poorest state, which has an annual per capita income of $111


However, this modifier can be understood to modify the subject of the clause as well because of the nature of the verb - is. This is a linking verb, which establishes the following relationship:
Bihar = India’s poorest state.



Now lets consider a scenario in which “with” modifier modifies the preceding clause. This is a GMATPrep Question. You can find the detailed solution of this question at this link.


Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline.


The comma +with modifier above modifies the preceding clause. In essence this sentence can be written as two separate sentences:


1. Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches.
2. Their arms and legs are hung like socks on a clothesline.


So sentence 2 has been converted into with modifier. This modifier extends the thought of the preceding clause by providing a detail supporting it.


Now if the above sounds very complicated, then do not worry about it. As long as you know that these modifiers are versatile and hence can modify preceding clause and preceding nouns, you would be fine. Let the meaning of the sentence guide you. You should understand the meaning of the sentence and ensure that one of these roles fit well.





D.who is right （ it is the subject of a new clause）


E.of twelve hospital is a misplaced modifier； it should be placed after an investigation （ to identify what exactly the investigation is talking about）

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作者: ivansmile33    时间: 2012-10-4 02:06
谢谢哈，请问这个来源是？曼哈顿么

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作者: DUKB24    时间: 2012-10-4 10:23

谢谢哈，请问这个来源是？曼哈顿么

-- by 会员 ivansmile33 (2012/10/4 2:06:39)

E-GMAT forum

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作者: a476772885    时间: 2012-10-4 12:34
第一道题答案是A吧？

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作者: ivansmile33    时间: 2012-10-10 01:07
抱歉，回复迟了，能解释解释么

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作者: ivansmile33    时间: 2012-10-10 01:13
亲，有更详细的么？只说了with在句末加逗号修饰有两种，一种是全句，一种是名词，可是with的其他用法不用管么

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作者: ivansmile33    时间: 2012-10-10 01:36
Except for a concert performance that the composer himself staged in 1911, Scott Joplin’s ragtime operaTree monisha was not produced until 1972, sixty-one years after its completion.
(A) Except for a concert performance that the composer himselfstaged
(B) Except for a concert performance with the composer himselfstaging it
(C) Besides a concert performance being staged by the composerhimself
(D) Excepting a concert performance that the composer himself staged
(E) With the exception of a concert performance with the staging done by the composer himself
而且这个with是不加逗号的那种，怎么解释

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