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作者: xwl114    时间: 2012-9-14 02:05
标题: L的独立作文 求狠批!求猛拍!!!
马上要考了 还木有写过几篇 掩面。。
大了胆子把刚写的作文粘上来 求同一战壕里的各位指教!
各位大侠 请往死里改!往死里批!!!
小女在此无限感激!!!

恩 作文题:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Although the science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people's lives have already taken place.
作者: xwl114    时间: 2012-9-14 02:06
In contemporary society, obviously, people enjoy the benefits from the significant development of science and technology. And the debate over whether human beings have already embraced the qualified lives with the help of social advances has been raging for quite some time. As far as I am concerned, the science and technology actually contributed our wonderful lives now, although it is arbitrary to claim that the most critical improvement has appeared.

Initially, agriculture have benefited from science and technology with abundant food produced. Other things being equal, recent agriculture which is filled with technique is certainly more prone to produce plentiful food for the whole world than did the previous. Apparently, it is science and technology that have been considered as major element to the improved agricultural products. Quote an example to demonstrate this. In 1900s, agricultural food, like rice, wheat, meat, could only cover the half or less population's need in China. Comparatively, almost 90% Chinese citizens have enough and diverse rice and vegetables in daily meals now.

Science and technology, in addition, allowed transportation much more convenient. Among the advantages of the modern transportation is to permit people's life to be more effective and efficient. The incredible speed of airplane is the most explicit example. One general investigation conducted by experts indicates that, after the invented of airplane, the average time spend during the trip is ten times shorter than used in the past. The contemporary transportation vehicle gives people nowadays a substantial edge over the people in the past with its faster speed. Consequently, with more time to be saved on road, today people possess more time to work and rest.

However, science and technology does not solve the problems in medicine and people's health. We have to confirm that it is science and technology who lengthened human being's life, but there are still numerous diseases unconquered. Take the cancer for instance. Numberless people have suffered from cancer throughout the human's history with limited treatments and few cured. For years, scientists as well as doctors devoted themselves to decipher the secrets of cancer. And as the result, the development of science and technology relatively made some progress which light the patients' pain and extend their lifetime, but people still die because of the unsolved cancer.

In conclusion, although so dramatic is science and technology that our life quality improved impressively, it would not be too accuracy to state that science and technology has already made the most significant improvement. Since at least the problems of health are waiting for new solutions, I do disagree with the statement in the topic above.
作者: xwl114    时间: 2012-9-14 02:07
先谢过各位了!~




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