开头段： 让步+ 转折句+说明自身立场+三个中心词 （将接下来要写的三个中间段的中心意思概括成三个短语或词语） 举个栗子： 城市的高速发展是否提高了我们的生活质量.. （临时写的..言辞可能粗糙一点,我就表达这么个意思哈..请海涵..轻拍...) Admittedly, 城市的高速发展使得城市间的距离在层面上缩短了。人们信息交流的途径更多了blahblah..(一般1~2句话)。However, can we say that the development improves our quality of life and brings us more conveniency in every aspect? Perhaps not; it is also depriving people's time to enjoy their life , distancing people from their friends and destroying the natural environment.
(1) topic sentence: people need several close friends.
(2)general explanation： 对于TC的进一步解释。一般说三个比较大概的方面但是表达的意思要具体可感，虽然是概括性语句但是不代表他们是空洞的。 再举个栗子（糖炒栗子最好吃了..T^T）.. Unlike strangers, we are free to tell our close friends everything. They know me even better than my parents do. They know the person who will steal my breath away , the flavor of my favorite donuts, the exact style of my favorite pop star and the sentence that I use most frequently.
(3) detailed example 就是编个感动人的故事或者用大量排比blow people's minds away.. 如果要说..close friends are always ready to help me. for example/ take ....for example.... 然后开始编故事..(有此想约个crush出去啊.. 但是害羞不知不合开口啊..跟爸妈说肯定要被打断腿啊..所以就问了闺蜜..然后闺蜜出谋划策..然后出谋划策的具体内容就是DETAILS. 按照江奇老师的要求..details没有三个并列就不要拿出来了! 所以我们开始宁死想三个馊主意.. 1）She helped me ask the number of that guy 2) she recommended a romantic cafe for our first date 3) she bought me a beautiful dress that makes me like a goddess.=.= 就举个栗子而已..)
还有一个万能的例子：一个实验！ According to the results of a research或者experiment related to ...., / once published on *** journal or magazine, people live in the countryside are more happy and satisfied with their daily life than those people live in the urban area. 然后开始讲实验方法.. 高中实验写起来.. 随机从郊区选50人，从城市选50人。让他们做问卷..问一些表达生活态度的问题： 如..上下班几个小时，满意度打个分， 吃饭均价， 睡眠质量。 各个选项转换好分数，转化成百分制。 然后郊区人民得分 82. 城市只有60.... 城市普遍反映生活压力大， 睡不好，老加班，老板还凶各种吐槽..
