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标题: 关于PREP209题有一个小问请教!多谢! [打印本页]

作者: 莽莽要上7    时间: 2012-9-5 16:37
标题: 关于PREP209题有一个小问请教!多谢!
同志们在刷SC中碰到一个问题求探讨~
prep209. (T-3-Q7)
In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.    number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.    number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.    numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.    wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,  
E.    wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,

只有一个问题求解:
manhattan里头说有时候会把带of的介词短语通过修饰词提前,转换为形容词短语。但是of是带有数量,时间,计量性质的固定搭配就能改了一定要用of结构么?这里为什么会把the number of改成wild salmon's numbers呢?如果没有红字划线的地方不给提示的话我肯定就选错了。
那么如果把A改成:
A.    number of wild salmon has been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, 这样对么?

多谢啊
作者: DUKB24    时间: 2012-9-5 17:15
同志们在刷SC中碰到一个问题求探讨~
prep209. (T-3-Q7)
In Scotland, the number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, by pollution, and by various other threats to the fish’s habitat.
A.    number of wild salmon have been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
B.    number of wild salmon is reduced because deep-sea and coastal netting is not controlled,
C.    numbers of wild salmon has been reduced because of uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,
D.    wild salmon’s numbers are reduced by deep-sea and coastal netting that is not controlled,  
E.    wild salmon’s numbers have been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting,

只有一个问题求解:
manhattan里头说有时候会把带of的介词短语通过修饰词提前,转换为形容词短语。但是of是带有数量,时间,计量性质的固定搭配就能改了一定要用of结构么?这里为什么会把the number of改成wild salmon's numbers呢?如果没有红字划线的地方不给提示的话我肯定就选错了。
那么如果把A改成:
A.    number of wild salmon has been reduced by uncontrolled deep-sea and coastal netting, 这样对么?

多谢啊
-- by 会员 莽莽要上7 (2012/9/5 16:37:10)



yes
and it is better than the original correct choice
作者: 莽莽要上7    时间: 2012-9-5 22:05
嘿嘿!多谢解答~~但我还有个问题~那么这里为什么会把the number of改成wild salmon's numbers呢?是不是有逻辑上的问题呀?the number of XXX 这个量被减少是不是不符逻辑呢?是不是只能是numbers(数)能被减少而量不可以呢?


thanks again!
作者: DUKB24    时间: 2012-9-5 22:16
嘿嘿!多谢解答~~但我还有个问题~那么这里为什么会把the number of改成wild salmon's numbers呢?是不是有逻辑上的问题呀?the number of XXX 这个量被减少是不是不符逻辑呢?是不是只能是numbers(数)能被减少而量不可以呢?


thanks again!
-- by 会员 莽莽要上7 (2012/9/5 22:05:07)



没问题,the number of 和 XXX‘s number都是表示数量的减少(只是后者比较awkward,但不是incorrect!)
A的致命问题就是S-V agreement 和parallelism,这两个都是不能被容忍的错误
作者: 莽莽要上7    时间: 2012-9-5 22:18
Thanks a lot!!!




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