标题: 曼哈顿SC平行结构一道题的求教 [打印本页] 作者: 凤凰不传奇 时间: 2012-9-4 15:58 标题: 曼哈顿SC平行结构一道题的求教 he received a medal for sinking an enemy ship and the capture of its crew. 想问下大家可以改成以下形式吗？ he received a medal for sinking an enemy ship and capturing its crew.作者: 白菜白菜 时间: 2012-9-10 18:31
同问，我甚至觉得下面的形式更好啊~作者: stlibai 时间: 2012-9-10 19:16
lz看题好不仔细...我差点被唬过去... 原句是错的呀,改成下面才对: He received a medal for [the SINKING of ]an enemy ship and the CAPTURE of its crew. 括号部分为复杂动名词complex gerund phrase
我摘了一段笔记给你: 2、动名词： 简单动名词，：Tracking satellites accurately is important for the space agency 简单的动名词有着名词的外表却有一颗动词的心
复杂动名词（含有修饰成分，经常是前面加一个冠词，和of的介词短语）, Right: The rebels demanded the withdrawal of government forces from disputed regions, significant reductions in overall troop levels, THE raising OF（复杂动名词）the rebel flag on holidays, AND a general pardon.(动作性名词) 每一种都可以自己平行的Nouns分类: (1)具体名词Concrete Nouns (2)动作名词和复杂动名词Action Nouns and Complex Gerunds (3) Simple Gerunds. 简单动名词不能和复杂动名词平行。且只有复杂动名词才能和动作名词平行。 The accurate tracking-复杂动名词； tracking-简单动名词 3、如果一个动词有具体的名词形式，就不要用动名词，如extract就有名词extraction
至于lz说的he received a medal for sinking an enemy ship and capturing its crew. 对不对我觉得结构挺平行的,但是还是等大n来判断吧.作者: 白菜白菜 时间: 2012-9-10 19:24
原来如此=。=我就说原句怎么怪怪的 名词强调结果，动名词强调过程。如果是表示结果的话，用名词当然更好啦。作者: Soraya 时间: 2013-9-18 19:20
get。。。。。