我会开始努力的作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-4 13:44
9月4日 agree/disagree：an efficient leader will always try to make everyone feel that he's in part of a decision making
Currently, leader is becoming more and more important in every respect of our society. Their ablilities of management, especially the ability of decision making, determine whether they are efficient leaders. Some people argue that an efficient leader should make the decision alone, so that the decision making will be more efficient. However, in my opinion, it is much more efficient for a leader to make everyone in the group participate in part of a decision making. The illustration is as follow.
Admittedly, leader making decision without communicating with others seems more efficient, because it appears be time saving at first glance. Apparently, more people always means more different opinions, which will lengthen the time of discussion.
However, further reflection prove that the decision made by leader alone will be much harder to operate, due to most people in the group have no ideas about this decision and do not know how to operate it exactly. Accordingly, an efficient leader should consider the whole and attempt to make everyone in his group feel that he is a part of the decision making. Take my own experience as example, when I was a leader of my class, I once made the decision--the place of spring trip--alone. As a result, most classmates will not take parts in this trip, so I need to plan the trip again. Apparently, this plan wasted many of my time, and I remenber this fault till now.
Moreover, making the underlyings participate in the decision making can enhance their passion to complish the task much better and more efficient. The collegues will feel that they are so important to the company that they have to work much more assiduous than before. And then this company will be much more competitive because of the smart leading ability of the efficient leader.
To conclude, an efficient leader should persuade his co-workers to take active parts in the decision making. For one thing, making the decision together can make the decision much easier to operate. For another thing, the co-workers will work much more assiduous if they feel they play an essential role in his company, helping the company to be competitive.作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-4 13:45
完全不知该怎么写....求拍砖，求指导，非常感谢了~作者: fuzhengrui 时间: 2012-9-4 14:23 标题: 简单改了一下，见附件 [attach]105727[/attach]作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-4 15:58
非常感谢，好人一生平安^^ 我会好好总结，继续努力~作者: fuzhengrui 时间: 2012-9-4 16:00 标题: 加油 一起努力 RT作者: shendang 时间: 2012-9-5 17:24 agree/disagree：an efficient leader willalways try to make everyone feel that he's in part of a decision making
绿色-good,红色-有问题，蓝色-小结 Currently, leader is becomingmore and more important in every respect of our society. Their ablilities of management, especially the ability ofdecision making, determine whether they are efficient leaders. Some people argue that an efficient leader should makethe decision alone, so that the decision making will be more efficient.However, in my opinion, it is much more efficient for a leader to make everyonein the group participate in part of a decision making. The illustration is as follow.
Admittedly, leader making decision withoutcommunicating with others seems more efficient, because it appears be timesaving at first glance. （这里是转折，应该加上转折承接句或词吧）Apparently, morepeople always means more different opinions, which will lengthen the time ofdiscussion. However（前面已经说了征求他人意见会浪费时间，我觉得这个however，换到前面会更好 ）, further reflection provethat the decision made by leader alone will be much harder to operate, due to most peoplein the group have no ideas about this decision and do not know how to operateit exactly. Accordingly, an efficient leader should consider the whole and attemptto make everyone in his group feel that he is a part of the decision making. Take my own experience as example, when I was a leader of my class, I once made the decision--theplace of spring trip--alone. As a result, most classmates will not take partsin this trip, so I need to plan the trip again. Apparently, this plan wastedmany of my time, and I remenber this fault till now.
Moreover, making the underlyings participate inthe decision making can enhance theirpassion to complish the task much better andmore efficient. The collegues will feel that they are so important to thecompany that they have to work much more assiduous than before. And then thiscompany will be much more competitive because of the smart leading ability ofthe efficient leader.（可以用点从句什么的，减少这么多短句）
To conclude, an efficient leader should persuadehis co-workers to take active parts in the decision making. For one thing,making the decision together can make the decision much easier to operate. Foranother thing, the co-workers will work much more assiduous if they feel theyplay an essential role in his company, helping the company to be competitive. （结尾在重述一下观点，挺好的，但是我觉得重述时候要注意不能跟前面的表达相同，要不就起反效果了） 我的作文跑题了，见谅啊~~作者: shendang 时间: 2012-9-5 17:25
我922战哦，我也大四了。。。。作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-5 19:38
谢谢你的指导啊~我每次写作文的时候脑袋很容易一片空白啊~~ 你也加油！祝你922成功！作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-5 22:12
9月4日（修改） agree/disagree：an efficient leader will always try to make everyone feel that he's in part of a decision making
（修改） Currently, leadership is becoming more and more important in every respect of our society. Their ablities of management, especially the ability of decision making, determine whether they are efficient leaders. Some people argue that an efficient leader should make the decision alone, so that the decision making will be more efficient. However, from my point of view, it is much more efficient for a leader to make everyone in the group participate in part of a decision making. The illustration is as follow.
Admittedly, leader making decision without communicating with others seems to be more efficient. Making decision all by the leader enable him to draw a conclusion fleetly, because more people always means more different opinions, which will lengthen the time of discussion.
However, further reflection proves that the decision made by leader alone will be much harder to operate. Since most people in the group have no ideas about this decision and do not know how to operate it exactly, the time to implement this decision will be longer. Accordingly, an efficient leader should consider the entire project and attempt to make everyone in his group feel that he is a part of the decision making. Take my own experience as example, when I was a leader of my class, I once made the decision that travel Peking as our trip all by myself. As a result, most classmates did not join our trip, so I needed to plan the trip again. Apparently, this plan wasted much of my time, and I remember this fault till now.
Moreover, making the staff participate in the decision making can enhance their passion to accomplish the task much better and more efficient. By encouraging colleagues to participate in decision making, they will feel that they are so important to the company that they have to work much more assiduous than before. And then this company will be much more competitive because of the smart leading ability of the efficient leader.
To conclude, an efficient leader should persuade his co-workers to take parts in the decision making. For one thing, reaching the decision together enable the decision much easier to carry out. For another thing, the co-workers will work much more devotedly if they feel they play an essential role in their company, helping the company to be competitive.作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-5 22:12
9月5日 In order to solve the problems of the present and the future, people should review the past.
Currently, people are facing more and more problems, some come from their job and others come from their daily lives. Accordingly, the great methods of problems solving become more and more significant. From my point of view, reviewing the past enable me to figure out the problems of the present and the future more efficiently.
Admittedly, reviewing the past appears to have no sense to the problems of the present and the future at our first glance, because the present and the future seem to have no relation with the past totally. Some people consider that they are facing a virtually new world, which is very different with the past.
However, the past experience can bring many helpful advices to us. Everything in the world must have something in common. The things in common are called the universal truth, which is the most essential knowledge I have ever known. And the universal truth come from the past is very significant for us to solve the problems of the present and the future. For instance, when we were children, most of us might have faced the situation that we were hurt by the hot water. Since that, we must remember the universal truth that we should be cautious of hot water. Apparently, the experience from the past can enlarge our knowledge to solve problems easier.
Moreover, the essential way to enhance our ability of problems solving is to review the problems of the past and conclude some useful skills of problems solving. As a matter of fact, people can improve ourselves by learning, and learning the history is the most important one. In order to perform well in the future, each student must have learned history at the school.
To conclude, we should review the problems of the past, because it can help us to figure out problems of the present and the future efficiently. Not only the past experience can help us to solve problems by providing tips, but also it helps us to be a much stronger to solve problems.作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-5 22:13
第二篇，依旧手生····咋办呢···作者: 搞G战士DB 时间: 2012-9-6 13:04
Currently, people are facing more and more problems, some come from their job and others come from their daily lives. Accordingly, the great methods(要么the great method，要么the methods) of problems（S去掉） solving become more and more significant. From my point of view, reviewing the past enables me to figure out the problems of the present and the future more efficiently. 这一段用了两个more and more，不太好啊，事实上more and more就要少用，当然个人观点哈，欢迎指正。开头段要明确表明自己观点，前两句过于累赘的感觉，过多的再说解决问题的方法的重要性。直接点题比较好哈。同样个人观点- -我也很菜的- - 注意下单复数和主谓一致
Admittedly（既然后面要否认这个观点，就不要用“公认”这个词啊- - 要不然岂不是自扇耳光么）, reviewing the past appears to have no sense to the problems of the present and the future at our first glance, because the present and the future seem to have no relation with the past totally. Some people consider that they are facing a virtually new world, which is very different with the past（这里的对比是new world和the past，我不知道T里可不可以这么用，G里这么用肯定是错的，保险起见还是改the old one吧）.合成一段吧，说的是同一个观点，下面这段是为了否认第二段的，合并比较好。However, the past experience （亲是想说过去的经验吧，experience gained from the past）can bring（有bring advices么？give 和 make 都可） many helpful advices to us. Everything in the world must have something in common. The things in common are called the universal truth, which is the most essential knowledge I have ever known. And the universal truth come from the past is very significant for us to solve the problems of the present and the future. For instance, when we were children, most of us might have faced the situation that we were hurt by the hot water. Since that, we must remember the universal truth that we should be cautious of hot water. Apparently, the experience from the past can enlarge our knowledge to solve problems easier. 这一段我彻底凌乱了。开头说experience,然后就扯universal truth去了，最后又回到了experience才提到了the past。整段的出发点是论述过去的经验可以帮助我们学习现在的知识，从而更好地解决问题。但是没有表达出来啊！考官是很快速的看你的文章，看到这儿肯定迷糊了。写的更清楚一些哈。 Moreover, the essential way to enhance our ability of problems solving is to（to?） reviewing the problems of the past and（is..and..注意并列形式哈，本来是is to..and，那么这里应该用and to ，当然这里本来就不需要to） concluding some useful skills of problems solving. As a matter of fact, people can improve ourselves（themselves） by learning, and learning the history is the most important one. In order to perform well in the future, each student must have learned history at the去掉 school.
To conclude, we should review the problems of the past, because it can help us to figure out problems of the present and the future efficiently. Not only the past experience（同上） can help us to solve problems by providing tips, but also it helps us to be a much stronger to solve problems.
分段的问题在上面了。总体来说用词过于简单，需要大量的高级词汇积累。句型还很单调，多练习多样的句式哈，倒装、并列、比较神马的（其实我这点也很烂- -）。字数也少了，缺少事例，内容太空洞，从而说服力就小了。没事的哈，咱俩半斤八两，多练习多学习别人的，肯定会有提高的，加油！作者: shendang 时间: 2012-9-6 18:29
童鞋记得改我作文哦~~作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-6 23:16
非常感谢你的批改啊，有些问题真的很严重，我会好好改的~！作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-8 15:45
9月8日 The most important investment of a company is to improve the skills of its employees.D\A
Currently, the companies in the world are facing numerous competitions, which lead them to have a tough time. How a company can be competitive is a very complex but interesting question. While some people point out that the skills of employees have nothing to do with the company, I consider that improving the skills of employees is the most signigicant investment to a company.
To begin with, it is undeniable that employees are the essential part of a company. A company cannot be operated without enough employees in it. Like a system of human, the system of company is consisting of many organic elements. And the most important organic elements of the system of company are employees. Accordingly, consisting of skillful employees make sure the company can be run without getting in trouble. For example, a big company named Yison in my hometown used to be a successful company, however, it broke down last year. The reason why it broke down is that most of its skillful employees went to a new company next to it.
Moreover, investing the employees to improve the skills of them enables them to be much more creative, which is the most crucial to a company in the new digital age. By investing the employees to handle the new technology, the company can upgrade its structure. Since the new technologic structure of the company is capable of enhancing its profits, the investment to educate the employees is very worth. Take the Google as example, Google is one of the most successful companies in the world. The reason why it became so successful is that it has the most creative employees in the world. So precious are creative employees that company must spend a considerable amount of money to improve them.
Admittedly, some other investments of a company, such as the implements of producing, are also very important. Without the implements, the company perhaps cannot produce anything, but the skillful, creative employees will figure out this problem.
In conclusion, the importance of the investment of a company to improve the skills of its employees has never be overemphasize. The skillful and creative employees are the guarantee that the company will be excellent.作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-8 16:26
9月8日 综合
In the lecture, the professor claims that the commercial fossils collectors bring more benefits than harms to the scientists and the general public. Apparently, the claim is not agree with that of the passage, which indicates that the private collectors bring unfortunate development for human.
To begin with, the professor argues that the commercial trade of fossils makes the public have more access to fossils exhibits. By permitting commercial trade of fossils, there more people to buy and own the fossils, and they will donate the fossils to the museum or school. Hence, the private collectors help the public to have more chance to appreciate the fossils, which refutes the passage, which states that the private collectors will make it harder for the public to see fossils.
Secondly, the professor points out that the scientists will have many chances to investigate the fossils. In order to identify the fossils, the private collectors will hire the scientists to test the unearth fossils. So, the fossils have been passed through the scientists' hands, guaranteeing that the scientists have many opportunities to investigate the fossils. On the contrary, the passage held the counterpart that scientists are likely to lose access to some of the most important fossils.
Lastly, the professor casts doubt on the passage by stating that many fossils will never be discovered if there is no private collector. It is very pity that the valuable and cherish fossils are under the earth forever.
All in all, the professor make a clear clarify that private fossils collectors bring more benefits than harms to the scientists and the general public, refuting what the passage claims.作者: kchszy061ban 时间: 2012-9-9 19:22 蓝色为意见或建议高亮为精彩绿色为总结红色为错误
Currently, the（我觉得复数开头不用特指的额，嘿嘿） companies in the world are facing numerous competitions, which lead them to have a tough time. How a company can be competitive is a very complex but interesting question. While some people point out that the skills of employees have nothing to do with the company, I consider that improving the skills of employees is the most signigicant investment to a company.（开头的最后有一些突兀，能不能加入一些过渡的说理句子）
To begin with, it is undeniable that employees are the essential part of a company.（觉得后面这句和上面是重复说理，两句连成一句）A company cannot be operated without enough employees in it. Like a system of human, the system of company is consisting of many organic elements. And the most important organic elements of the system of company are employees. Accordingly, consisting of skillful employees make sure the company can be run without getting in trouble. For example, a big company named Yison in my hometown used to be a successful company, however, it broke down last year. The reason why it broke down is that most of its skillful employees went to a new company next to it.（楼主的反证例子，最后在加点点明论点的句子就好了。不是例子好就行，要能证明并且联系论点才好）
Moreover, investing the employees to improve the skills of them enables them to be much more creative, which is the most crucial（part，不清楚形容词直接可以这样用不） to a company in the new digital age. By investing the employees to handle the new technology, the company can upgrade its structure. Since the new technologic structure of the company is capable of enhancing its profits, the investment to educate the employees is very worth(y). Take the Google as example(google is a good example to illustrate this point, 楼主感觉如何？), Google is one of the most successful companies in the world. The reason why it became so successful is that it has the most creative employees in the world. So precious are creative employees that company must spend a considerable amount of money to improve them.
Admittedly, some other investments of a company, such as the implements of producing, are also very important too. Without the implements, the company perhaps cannot produce anything, but the skillful, creative employees will figure out this problem（这里的句子间联系就不是很紧密啊，how can workers solve the problems？）. In conclusion, the importance of the investment of a company to improve the skills of its employees has never be overemphasize（这里用被动式比较好吧？）. The skillful and creative employees are the guarantee that the company will be excellent.
In the lecture, the professor claims that the commercial fossils collectors bring more benefits than harms to the scientists and the general public. Apparently, the claim is（does） not agree with that of the passage, which indicates that the private collectors bring unfortunate development for human.
To begin with, the professor argues that the commercial trade of fossils makes the public have more access to fossils exhibits. By permitting commercial trade of fossils, there more people to buy and own the fossils, and they will donate the fossils to the museum or school. Hence, the private collectors help the public to have more chance to appreciate the fossils, which refutes the passage, which states that the private collectors will make it harder for the public to see fossils.（这里很好了）
Secondly, the professor points out that the scientists will have many chances to investigate the fossils. In order to identify the fossils, the private collectors will hire the scientists to test the unearth fossils. So, the fossils have been passed through the scientists' hands,（这里后面用动名词，前面是什么，感觉不是很一致的） guaranteeing that the scientists have many opportunities to investigate the fossils. On the contrary, the passage held the counterpart that scientists are likely to lose access to some of the most important fossils.
Lastly, the professor casts doubt on the passage by stating that many fossils will never be discovered if there is no private collector. It is very pity that the valuable and cherish fossils are under the earth forever.
All in all, the professor make a clear clarify that private fossils collectors bring more benefits than harms to the scientists and the general public, refuting what the passage claims.
In the lecture, the professor claims that the three ways to address the decline of Torreya are not satisfied solutions. Apparently, the claim does not agree with that of the passage, which states that the three ways can prevent the decline of Torreya effectively.
First of all, the professor indicates that reestablishing the Torrya in the same location is unlikely to succeed. Originally, the Torreya located in the region, having a specific microclimate that is wetter and cooler than the surrounding region. However, the microclimate is easily affected by the changes of the weather conditions. And the global warming beget the weather of this region becoming warmer and drier, and makes this region becomes unsuitable for Torreya to grow.
Secondly, the professor casts doubt on the passage that move the Torreya to an entirely different location by offering the example that the blacklocus trees were moved to a new region causing an unpredicted calamity to the new region.
Lastly, the professor points out that the research center might has no enough capacity to keep these Torreya in it. Preserving the Torreya in the research center is not a smart decision because the center cannot ensuring the Torreya can germinate in it. However, the passage holds a opposite opinion that preserving Torreya in research center can prevent them to decline.作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-14 18:47
9月13日综合
In the lecture, the professor claims that the three ways to address the decline of Torreya are not satisfied solutions. Apparently, the claim does not agree with that of the passage, which states that the three ways can prevent the decline of Torreya effectively.
First of all, the professor indicates that reestablishing the Torrya in the same location is unlikely to succeed. Originally, the Torreya located in the region, having a specific microclimate that is wetter and cooler than the surrounding region. However, the microclimate is easily affected by the changes of the weather conditions. And the global warming beget(begets) the weather of this region becoming warmer and drier, and makes this region becomes unsuitable for Torreya to grow.
Secondly, the professor casts doubt on the passage that move the Torreya to an entirely different location by offering the example that the blacklocus trees were moved to a new region causing an unpredicted calamity to the new region.
Lastly, the professor points out that the research center might has no enough capacity to keep these Torreya in it. Preserving the Torreya in the research center is not a smart decision because the center cannot ensuring(ensure) the Torreya can germinate in it. However, the passage holds a opposite opinion that preserving Torreya in research center can
点评：内容差不多都点到了，只是可以叙述再详细点就更好了 作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-14 21:45
9月14日 Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in the past?
Currently, since the society develops rapidly, people are more and more concerned about the education. And then it raises a wide spread discussion that whether it is easier for people to become educated now than in the past. From my points of view, becoming educated is much easier for people currently. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, the pressure from works urges people to be assiduous to get educated. With the development of technology, the skills of working become much more crucial for the employees. Take the Google as the example, it is a high technological company, which means that the employees working in it must handle the latest technologies. Therefore, if we want to work in Google, we have to become educated well. All these prove that the pressure from the new and great job help us to get education.
Moreover, the advanced technology products, including the computers, the Internet and mobile devices, is the most useful tools for us to become educated we have ever used. Accordingly, by using these advanced tools, we can learn everything very conveniently and efficiently. When I was a high school student, I'd love to use the computer to do some extensive study, which can give me a better understanding of the subjects. Thanks to the computer, I finished high school with a excellent award and get the offer of my favorite university. Hence, it is apparent that the latest technology makes us easier to become educated than in the past.
Admittedly, some advanced inventions, such as the Television and computer games, affect some children to have no interest in study. However, the advantages from these inventions overweigh the disadvantages. For example, watching TV appropriately can have a good effect on them.
To conclude, nowadays, people are becoming much easier to be educated. Not only the pressure from development of technology but also the advanced inventions can help people to get education.作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-14 21:46
9月14日 Do you agree with the viewpoint that people are now easier to become educated than in the past?
Currently, since the society develops rapidly, people are more and more concerned about the education. And then it raises a wide spread discussion that whether it is easier for people to become educated now than in the past. From my points of view, becoming educated is much easier for people currently. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, the pressure from works urges people to be assiduous to get educated. With the development of technology, the skills of working become much more crucial for the employees. Take the Google as the example, it is a high technological company, which means that the employees working in it must handle the latest technologies. Therefore, if we want to work in Google, we have to become educated well. All these prove that the pressure from the new and great job help us to get education.
Moreover, the advanced technology products, including the computers, the Internet and mobile devices, is the most useful tools for us to become educated we have ever used. Accordingly, by using these advanced tools, we can learn everything very conveniently and efficiently. When I was a high school student, I'd love to use the computer to do some extensive study, which can give me a better understanding of the subjects. Thanks to the computer, I finished high school with a excellent award and get the offer of my favorite university. Hence, it is apparent that the latest technology makes us easier to become educated than in the past.
Admittedly, some advanced inventions, such as the Television and computer games, affect some children to have no interest in study. However, the advantages from these inventions overweigh the disadvantages. For example, watching TV appropriately can have a good effect on them.
To conclude, nowadays, people are becoming much easier to be educated. Not only the pressure from development of technology but also the advanced inventions can help people to get education.作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-17 20:23
9月17日 Grades (marks) encourage students to learn？A\D
Currently, the rush of getting education has been gaining at an amazing rate, urging more and more parents to send their children to school to be better educated. And then, it raises a wide spread discussion that whether grades can encourage students to learn. From my points of view, I suppose that wanting to get high grades can enhance the learning of students.
It is undeniable that getting high marks is not the goal of the students. The true reason why students should study is that learning can adjust students to be useful and suitable to our society. However, grade is an efficient and useful tool to encourage students pay more attention on learning.
To begin with, in order to get higher grades, students will spend enough times on study, ensuring that students can learn the knowledge better. As a matter of fact, learning is a job that requires spending lots of time. Take my friends Joe and Tom as examples, they were my classmates in the middle school. Joe was a hard-working student who always lost himself in study in a long time, while Tom was not as assiduous as Joe. It is apparent that Joe got grades higher than Tom. What's more, Joe absorbed the knowledge much deeper than Tom and now he still could use the knowledge learned at that time.
Moreover, grades are inviting enough to attract students to participate the seminar and accomplish their tasks better, which are very significant for students to learn knowledge. In the seminar, students can discuss their own opinions about the knowledge and learn from each other, enhancing the understanding of knowledge efficiently. Additionally, the tasks are the most important method for students to implement their knowledge in practice. There is no better illustration than the example of my own experience in college. When I was a first year student, I cannot get considerable marks. Fortunately, a friend encouraged me to participate in the project that helps the store near the campus to attract customers. I accepted his advice because I majored in marketing and this project can help me to get higher score in marketing. After that, I got a high grade in marketing, but I also learned the knowledge of marketing much better.
In conclusion, grades are very useful to promote students' learning. Spending more time and participating in more seminars and tasks are the great way to get high grades, furthermore, they can enhance students' understanding of knowledge.作者: xeyyxzty 时间: 2012-9-18 20:12
蓝的是我也不知道的地方~红的是我认为有问题的地方
Currently,the rush of getting education has been gaining at an amazing rate（才疏学浅哈~不确定可不可以和之前的rush连着用~）,urging more and more parents to send their children to school to be bettereducated. And then, it raises a wide spread discussion that whether grades canencourage students to learn. From my points of view, I suppose that wanting to get (感觉the desire to get…更好) highgrades can enhance the learning of students.
It is undeniable that getting high marks is notthe goal of the students. The true reason why students should study is thatlearning can adjust（我不知道可不可以这样表示哈~就是表示一下自己的不肯定，告诉你一声~） students to be useful and suitable to our society.However, grade is an efficient and useful tool to encourage students to paymore attention on learning.
To begin with, in order to get higher grades,students will spend enough times onstudy, ensuring that students(they) can learn the knowledge better. As a matter offact, learning is a job that requires spending lotsof time. Take my friends Joe and Tom as examples, they were my classmates inthe middle school. Joe was a hard-working student who always lost himself instudy in(for) along time, while Tom was not as assiduous as Joe. It is apparent that Joe gotgrades higher than Tom. What's more, Joe absorbed the knowledge much deeperthan Tom and now he(感觉换成人名吧，指代不是很清晰) stillcould use the knowledge learned at that time.
Moreover, grades are inviting enough（能告诉我什么意思吗） to attract students to participate the seminarand accomplish their tasks better, which are very significant for students tolearn knowledge. In the seminar, students can discuss their own opinions aboutthe knowledge and learn from each other, enhancing（我真的不知道能不能这样用哈~貌似我英语真的不过关…） the understanding of knowledge efficiently. Additionally, the tasksare the most important method for students to implement their knowledge inpractice. There is no better illustration than the example of my own experiencein college. When I was a firstyear student(a freshman), I cannotget considerable marks. Fortunately, a friend encouraged me to participate inthe project that helps the store near the campus to attract customers. Iaccepted his advice because I majored in marketing andthis project can help me to get higher score in marketing.After that, I got a high grade in marketing(这个词太重复了吧the subject, it之类的替换一下吧),but(为什么转折呢~what’s more更恰当吧) I alsolearned the knowledge of marketingmuch better.
In conclusion, grades are very useful to promotestudents' learning. Spending more time and participating in more seminars andtasks are the great way to get high grades, furthermore, they can enhancestudents' understanding of knowledge.
