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作者: valwang99    时间: 2004-10-22 19:53
标题: 请教gwd 6 29

Q29:


Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.




  • Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.


  • Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.


  • Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents, are the more likely to be self-confident, have a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as adolescents.


  • Children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.


  • Rather than permissive parents, the children of authoritative parents are the more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as an adolescent.

    • 请教为什么c不对？

    作者: rhod    时间: 2004-10-22 19:59

    1. 不平行.

    2. the more错误. 最高级前面才用the.

    作者: paraglider    时间: 2004-11-13 18:00

    A的句子结构也有问题啊？！！

    A are more likely than B to have C who as xxx are xxx, xxx, and xxx.

    这样的结构对嘛？

    作者: hankunlun    时间: 2004-11-18 09:29

    这样的结构对，

    A are more likely than B to have C who are xxx,xxx,and xxx as xxx

    作者: whoami2    时间: 2004-12-6 17:21

    hankunlun, 请问, 我觉得 have sb do(原形) sth 才对啊, 但这里用的是 are, 而不是 be 哦。我就是因此而废了a, 选了 d

    这不是标准使役动词的用法么？困惑啊

    作者: yoyonline    时间: 2005-1-1 03:47
    以下是引用whoami2在2004-12-6 17:21:00的发言：

    hankunlun, 请问, 我觉得 have sb do(原形) sth 才对啊, 但这里用的是 are, 而不是 be 哦。我就是因此而废了a, 选了 d


    这不是标准使役动词的用法么？困惑啊


    我觉得从整个句子的意思来理解比较好。who 指代children，“as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent”.是who引导的从句修饰children。

    作者: 三脚猫    时间: 2005-1-1 16:53
    以下是引用whoami2在2004-12-6 17:21:00的发言：

    hankunlun, 请问, 我觉得 have sb do(原形) sth 才对啊, 但这里用的是 are, 而不是 be 哦。我就是因此而废了a, 选了 d


    这不是标准使役动词的用法么？困惑啊


    are 在句子中是做who从句的系动词，并不是have sb do sth结构，楼主可能看错了吧。

    作者: zhaoshujuanw    时间: 2005-1-8 02:28

    D.Children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.

       我想有可能是因为“they”,容易产生歧义，“children”or "parents"?

    作者: scorpio0001    时间: 2005-3-25 11:45
    以下是引用zhaoshujuanw在2005-1-8 2:28:00的发言：

    D.Children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.


       我想有可能是因为“they”,容易产生歧义，“children”or "parents"?



    我不认为这里的they指代不明。本句子的结构为children(修饰语）are ...., when they are...，所以they应该指代children。


    D的错误在于：


    1、rather than 前后形式不对等。


    2、they指代children。所以句子变为：children are adolescent.搭配不合理。


    3、句子重心改变。


    请讨论。

    作者: juningw    时间: 2005-4-1 16:37
    以下是引用scorpio0001在2005-3-25 11:45:00的发言：



    我不认为这里的they指代不明。本句子的结构为children(修饰语）are ...., when they are...，所以they应该指代children。


    D的错误在于：


    1、rather than 前后形式不对等。


    同意


    2、they指代children。所以句子变为：children are adolescent.搭配不合理。


    是错在they are an adolescent. agreement不对


    3、句子重心改变。


    请讨论。


    另外，还有个重要的错误，就是more是比较级，后面一定要有than。

    作者: ethyl    时间: 2005-5-23 09:38

    A:简洁，平行

    B：sentence fragment

    C:focus改变；Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents，比较对象错；the more likely，the多余；to be self-confident, have a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent 不平行；

    D：being多余； have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent 不平行；when they are an adolescent，主谓不一致；focus改变

    E：Rather than permissive parents, the children 比较对象错；the多余；have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as an adolescent，错误同D

    作者: coffemug    时间: 2005-7-25 11:39
    Like all of ethyl's posts.   Clear and complete, right on the target!!   



    作者: gigiga0118    时间: 2005-8-5 13:01
    以下是引用ethyl在2005-5-23 9:38:00的发言：

    A:简洁，平行


    B：sentence fragment


    C:focus改变；Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents，比较对象错；the more likely，the多余；to be self-confident, have a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent 不平行；


    D：being多余； have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent 不平行；when they are an adolescent，主谓不一致；focus改变


    E：Rather than permissive parents, the children 比较对象错；the多余；have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as an adolescent，错误同D


    還是不懂

    B

    Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.


    出了什麼問題????

    作者: Ivanchiang    时间: 2005-9-1 15:04
    S+V才是一個完整的句子，B選項中Authoratative parents這個S沒有V相呼應
    作者: vivienvivid    时间: 2005-9-7 17:14

    请问以下A的WHO 后面为什么可以不是完整句

    作者: windaisy    时间: 2005-9-11 15:10
    A中WHO引导的从句是完整句啊，主谓表语齐全，AS作为介词修饰WHO
    [此贴子已经被作者于2005-9-11 15:11:25编辑过]
    作者: ayang1017    时间: 2005-9-26 15:48
    以下是引用ethyl在2005-5-23 9:38:00的发言：

    A:简洁，平行


    B：sentence fragment


    C:focus改变；Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents，比较对象错；the more likely，the多余；to be self-confident, have a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent 不平行；


    D：being多余； have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent 不平行；when they are an adolescent，主谓不一致；focus改变


    这个解释有点牵强，顶多是主宾不搭配，然而语法并不对此做要求的啊，og里都有一辆车的题很典型的～


    E：Rather than permissive parents, the children 比较对象错；the多余；have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as an adolescent，错误同D



    作者: chrislee0709    时间: 2005-10-14 16:00

    其實這題我是用修飾來做的


    這裡提到的children(A父母與P父母的比較)在孩子是青春期的時候會怎樣


    (self-confident,XXXX,XXXX)重點是這個青春期的修飾不能距離要修飾的children太遠，


    A(合理)


    B(變成青春期的孩子，改變句意)


    C(太遠有歧義)


    D(同C)


    E(同C)

    作者: Febby1984    时间: 2005-12-1 16:34

    B有两个定语从句,配了两个谓语动词,所以主句没了谓语动词~


    C,D,E都改变了原文的意思;原文强调怎样的父母会有怎样的孩子,而不是孩子会如何如何~

    作者: cdsteven517    时间: 2006-3-30 15:36
    ethyl 结实的真好，呵呵。。
    作者: 程门立雪    时间: 2006-7-4 05:53
    我想D的错误是否在于a high self-esteem不能接在TO后面呢?
    作者: soloenti    时间: 2006-8-20 14:28
    D E as an adolescent   跟前面复数不吻合
    作者: yaomao    时间: 2006-10-1 21:52
    B还有错误：that指代children
    作者: cattsky    时间: 2006-10-1 23:22
    1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

    是不是改成以下更好一些?

    1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have  self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent adolescence childern.

    记得XDF老师说过N+who/which+be+adj是明显的冗赘.

    另外,想问问是不是非中心词的比较肯定是错的?

    例如 She is a friend of Susan rather than John.--这样有语病吗?


    [此贴子已经被作者于2006-10-1 23:24:38编辑过]
    作者: ptr07    时间: 2006-12-17 06:24
    I agree on ethyl except "they are an adolescent",
    作者: 罗马青年    时间: 2007-5-28 18:19

     "ethyl "每次的解释都能让人豁然开朗，太感谢了！

    不知道"ethyl "目前在哪所TOP B-SCHOOL就读？（也许已经毕业了，呵呵！）

    作者: shopgirl    时间: 2007-7-12 21:44
    以下是引用罗马青年在2007-5-28 18:19:00的发言：

     "ethyl "每次的解释都能让人豁然开朗，太感谢了！

    不知道"ethyl "目前在哪所TOP B-SCHOOL就读？（也许已经毕业了，呵呵！）

    我也有同感，ethyl 是一个默默无闻的大牛啊！！
    作者: GRASPDREAM    时间: 2007-8-11 12:32
    以下是引用gigiga0118在2005-8-5 13:01:00的发言：

    還是不懂

    B

    Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

    出了什麼問題????

    没有谓语~

    作者: нандин    时间: 2007-8-18 13:33

    靠，你看A 多好啊 为什么我还选C 郁闷

    作者: latinjazz    时间: 2008-6-10 17:38

    1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

    2. Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children
                          that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

    C, D, E明显改变句义, 主辞都变成children

    但还是搞不清楚A, B差在哪

    我选B是因为B的adolescent children比A的children who as adolescents简洁

    但解答写A, 看了还是搞不清楚...

    或许是B用单数that指复数的adolescent children错误吧

    作者: helenzane    时间: 2008-10-26 22:34
    请问，B里的adolescent children有问题么？我为什么总觉得怪？
    作者: wwzzxx    时间: 2008-12-2 01:59
    以下是引用latinjazz在2008-6-10 17:38:00的发言：

    1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

    2. Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children
           that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

    C, D, E明显改变句义, 主辞都变成children

    但还是搞不清楚A, B差在哪

    我选B是因为B的adolescent children比A的children who as adolescents简洁

    但解答写A, 看了还是搞不清楚...

    或许是B用单数that指复数的adolescent children错误吧

    b选项是一个结构性错误。

    你可以试试简化起来读，parents who are more ........to have...........然后句子结束了。这是一个词组，不是句子。

    作者: amypig    时间: 2008-12-5 17:21
    明白了，呵呵，终于明白了，非常非常感谢
    作者: elizabeth007    时间: 2008-12-6 21:55
    以下是引用latinjazz在2008-6-10 17:38:00的发言：

    1. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

    2. Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children
           that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

    C, D, E明显改变句义, 主辞都变成children

    但还是搞不清楚A, B差在哪

    我选B是因为B的adolescent children比A的children who as adolescents简洁

    但解答写A, 看了还是搞不清楚...

    或许是B用单数that指复数的adolescent children错误吧

    B最大最明显的错误在于句子没有谓语，换个表达叫做谓语迷失在从句丛中了。错的丧心病狂。。。





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