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作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-8-14 20:33
标题: 叶子的作文贴
综合写作

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-8-14 21:43
The reading material and listening material talks about the truth of the portrait of the Jane Austen. Reading passage claims that the portrait depict the jane Austen. Nevertheless, the listening is not in agreement with that of the reading passage.
First of all ,according to the lecture, Considering the letter of Austen published in 1880 when Austen dead 17 years later, some of her family members may have no opportunities to see herself in person. Thus ,it is uncertain for Austen family to make sure whether or not the teenage girl in the picture is Austen. On the contrary , the author points out that this painting being strongly support by her family that Jane definitely is the girl in the picture.
Furthermore, the second point of different between the lecture and reading concerns whether the girl whose face is similar to Austen is Austen herself. The professor asserts that considering the Austen’s family is too big, it is possible that the girl is Austen’s relatives, such as hr consin M and C who are very like to Austen.
In addition, the authors points out that the style of the paint is linked to OH, who once served to Austen family and lived in Austen young’s period. However, the speakers argues that this paint could also be associated with ML, who served to the Austen family when Austen was 27 years old . therefore, when the paints was been finished , the age of Austen ,about 27 years old ,was older that the teenage girl in the protriat,

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-8-14 21:44
害羞的飘过~~~~感觉自己在不断的说废话

求大牛改正

作者: 猫和鸭 时间: 2012-8-16 09:15
The reading material and listening material talks about the truth of the portrait of the Jane Austen. Reading passage claims that the portrait depict the Jane Austen. Nevertheless, the listening is not in agreement with that of the reading passage.First of all ,according to the lecture, Considering the letter of Austen published in 1880 when Austen dead 17 years later, some of her family members may have no opportunities to see herself in person. Thus ,it is uncertain for Austen family to make sure whether or not the teenage girl in the picture is Austen. On the contrary , the author(这个author是说reading passage吗，感觉如果用author会和第一段所说的编书的作者有混淆哈） points out that this painting being strongly support by her family that Jane definitely is the girl in the picture.Furthermore, the second point of different between the lecture and reading concerns whether the girl whose face is similar to Austen is Austen herself. The professor asserts that considering the Austen’s family is too big, it is possible that the girl is Austen’s relatives, such as her consin M and C （弱问一下，写作的人名可以缩写呈示吗？如果是的话就太好了，我老是为这个犯愁呢）who are very like to Austen.In addition, the authors points out that the style of the paint is linked to OH, who once served to Austen family and lived in Austen young’s period. However, the speakers argues that this paint could also be associated with ML, who served to the Austen family when Austen was 27 years old . therefore, when the paints was been finished , the age of Austen ,about 27 years old ,was older that the teenage girl in the protriat.（这段的例证好像有点理解错误啊，听力里的驳论应该是说的是那个画布的销售商，而不是画家哈）

MM，感觉这个写作是你一气呵成的呀，很厉害啊，架构地很流畅，思路也很清晰的说，而且没发现啥语法错误啊，不像我的是改了好几遍才抠出来的哈，希望不会恶心到你喔，呼呼~~~

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-6 19:15
TPO11 综合

The lecture addresses each of the three criticisms of decreasing tendency of literature works reading mentioned in the reading passage.

The lecturer challenges the point in the article that the brilliant stimulation can not be provided due to the dwindling in book reading. She points out that in spite of the quantity of the available book diminished, the quality of the literature books, such as novel and poems, are increasing ,which could furnish the reader with more useful information and knowledge.

The speaker admits that the increasing amount of time of the general public are occupied by enjoying television programs, nevertheless, it not means the lower status of culture mentioned in the reading. Watching television is a novel avenue of culture change which represent the direction of literature development.

The narrator finally claims that the genuine reason of less literature caused by lack of reader is that the modern literature finished by authors articles are have more difficulty to understand than the past those so that more less people are willing to reading modern literature nowdays. However, the reading states that for the sake of poor level of readers ,the proportion of reading literature is reducing.

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-6 22:11
9月6日托福独立作文
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement :the most important problems in today’s world will be solved in our life time.

The speaker claims that we can cope with the most significant problems in our lifetime, this claim relies on the belief that the rapidly developed technology in today’s way could be enough(could ) to solve these problem.(it is enough for the hi-tech to solve these problem) However, in my view (in my point of view), the speaker oversimplify other essential factor, such as human nature, shortage of resource ,which would have significant influence on dealing with these issues.

Human are born to competition . the existence of competition decides that no effective way ,nowadays, would be to utility totally eliminating war. War is an overwhelming problem that has devastated the world for centuries and continues to be one of the world’s biggest problem we confront. In many cases, various measure once be took to end wars , such as reaching peace agreement ,sharing the frontiers with other country . the Second War was supposed to be “the war to end all wars”, which fully express the desire for the truce. However , we are incapable of living together in harmony in short notice since our world teem with competition. For example , waging war break out between two small in order to obtain the ownership of a new oil well. The politician of Iraq fight for power which brought suffering to the public. And people will cause war just due to the different religious stance. Therefore , It is possible that world peace will be achieved in our era if competition do not quit。

Secondly, the human nature ,such as selfish and greedy , keep us from the solutions of world’s biggest problem.
Experience tells us that individuals tend to act on behalf of their own short-term economic and political interest, not on behalf of the environment or the public at large. For instance, climate variation is also starting to take a serious toll as increased temperatures have insulted in flooding worldwide. An important part of tackling climate change is to decrease the amount of greenhouse gases, but as yet no real progress has been made since we are unwilling to pay tremendous prices for dealing. To be specific ,we are not prepared to giving up using our cars even though they will cause lots of pollutants . We are reluctant to use less electricity or gas ,which are beneficial to our environment. in addition, we also unwilling to pay the extra tariff or tax for the research of renewable energy. Indeed , some aspect of human nature that incur us put our own benefit at top priority when we make decision so that we can not deal with it nowadays.

Last but not least, Secondary problems intrigued by one of the most serious problem could elongate the time of dealing with it. It is well known that overpopulation is a very growing problem, which bring the shortage of food. China introduced a one-child policy in order to reduce the growth of the population, Nevertheless, it is unimaginable that this policy create an aging population where there are not enough young people to support the old.. as a result , No effective measures would be taken if we do no tackle the issue of the aging population.

In short, a variety of that have influence on our result of solution of the most important problems, such as competition, human nature and secondary problems. We cannot start real progress to deal with them within our lifetime.

作者: shendang 时间: 2012-9-7 10:52
9.6 综合修改
The lecture addresses each of the threecriticisms of decreasing tendency of literature works reading（看不懂这里，literatureworks 是一个词组？那reading 是什么） mentioned inthe reading passage.

The lecturer challenges the point in the article that thebrilliant stimulation can not be provided due to the dwindling in book reading.She points out that in spite of the quantity of the available book diminished,the quality of the literature books, such as novel and poems, are increasing,which could furnish the reader with more useful information and knowledge.

The speaker admits that the increasing amount of time ofthe general public are occupied by enjoying television programs, nevertheless,it not means the lower status of culture mentioned in the reading. Watchingtelevision is a novel avenue of culture change which represent the direction ofliterature development.

The narrator finally claims that the genuine reason of lessliterature caused by lack of reader is that the modern literature finished byauthors articles are have more difficulty（aremore difficult 比have more difficulty更简洁） tounderstand than the past those（ones） sothat more less people are willing to reading modernliterature nowdays(nowadays). However, thereading states that for the sake of poor level of readers ,the proportion ofreading literature is reducing.(综合作文重点是在阐述听力的东西，个人觉得把文章的东西写在前面，然后再来大篇幅说lecture怎么认为这样比较好，所以这个however可以放到这段的前面)

我听到的论据跟你有些出入，在这里写出来：
1，虽然读的文学书籍变少了，但是可能是因为多读了其他一些也同样是高质量的书，如sciencewritng
2，现在文化的形式是多样的，不再局限于文字上，可以是音乐或电影。欣赏好音乐或电影同样可以收获很多
3，人们读文学少不能怪读者，有些时候是作者的错。有些作者倾向于把书写得很难读懂，而他们这样做又常常是没道理的。

作者: 搞G战士DB 时间: 2012-9-7 13:48
The speaker claims that we can cope with the most significant problems in our lifetime,(.) this claim relies on the belief that the rapidly developed technology in today’s way (nowadays就可，in today’s way导致逻辑错误，technology不能 in way，快速的发展可以)could be enough(could ) to solve these problem.(it is enough for the hi-tech to solve these problem(s)) However, in my view (in my point of view), the speaker oversimplify other essential factor（我觉得这只是个statement，题目要你发表你的观点，它并没有表明自己的态度，因此不存在过分简化的问题）, such as human nature, shortage of resource ,which would （为啥要这个would？）have significant influence on dealing with these issues.

Human are born to competition （compete）. (The)the existence of competition decides that no effective way ,nowadays, would be to utility totally eliminating war(这一句- -是想表达没有有效的办法可以完全的消除战争吧。decides that there are no effective way that can totally eliminate war. utility totally连用感觉不好 ). War is an overwhelming problem that has devastated the world for centuries and continues to be one of the world’s biggest problem(s) we confront. In many cases, various measure(s) once be took to end wars , such as reaching peace agreement ,sharing the frontiers with other country .(The- -) the Second War was supposed to be “the war to end all wars”,(英文里是没有双引号的) which fully express the desire for the truce. However, we are incapable of living together in harmony in short notice since our world teem with（这个是神马？） competition. For example, waging war break out between two small （small what?）in order to obtain the ownership of a new oil well. The politician of Iraq fight for power which brought suffering to the public. And people will cause war just due to the different religious stance. Therefore ,（大小写啊亲）It is possible that world peace will be achieved in our era if competition do not quit。（.）

Secondly, the human nature ,such as selfish and greedy , keep（s） us（是不是掉了一个away？） from the solutions of world’s biggest problem. Experience tells us that individuals tend to act on behalf of their own short-term economic and political interest, not on behalf of the environment or the public at large（at large没有这个意思）. For instance, climate variation is also starting to take a serious toll as increased temperatures（temperature可数？就算可数这里也不用复数吧） have insulted in flooding worldwide. An important part of tackling climate change is to decrease the amount of greenhouse gases, but as yet no real progress has been made since we are unwilling to pay tremendous prices for dealing. To be specific, we are not prepared to giving up using our cars even though they will cause lots of pollutants. We are reluctant to use less electricity or gas, which are beneficial to our environment.（大小写……） in addition, we also unwilling to pay the extra tariff or tax for the research of renewable energy. Indeed, some aspect of human nature that incur us put our own benefit at top priority when we make decision so that we cannot deal with it nowadays.

Last but not least, Secondary problems intrigued by one of the most serious problem could elongate the time of dealing with it. It is well known that overpopulation is a very growing problem(看不懂……), which bring（s） the shortage of food. China introduced a one-child policy in order to reduce the growth of the population, Nevertheless, it is unimaginable that this policy create an aging population where there are not enough young people to support the old. as a result , No effective measures would be taken if we do no tackle the issue of the aging population.

In short, a variety of that have influence on our result of solution of the most important problems, such as competition, human nature and secondary problems. We cannot start real progress to deal with them within our lifetime.最后一句，我们是没办法开始么？开始还是可以的吧，只是没法彻底解决。

具体的错误在上面指出来了。总体来说不错哈，用词很考究，结构和思路都没有问题。注意一下细节，比如大小写，比如标点符号，还有要特别注意主谓一致。然后一些没有把握的词或用法就别用了，很容易变成中式英文，用简单词汇也比出错好。然后有的句子太绕了，比如第三段最后一句，看起来会很不舒服，注意一下。
水平有限，只能改到这程度了。也学到了很多，一起继续加油哈~

作者: 临窗听雨 时间: 2012-9-7 16:56
楼主模仿新东方范文的痕迹太重了

9月6日托福独立作文
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement :the most important problems in today’s world will be solved in our life time.

The speaker claims that we can cope with the most significant problems in our lifetime, this claim relies on the belief that the rapidly developed technology in today’s way could be enough(could ) to solve these problem.(it is enough for the hi-tech to solve these problem) However, in my view (in my point of view), the speaker oversimplify [overlook/ignore/neglect是不是更好? 或者oversimplify the issue]other essential factor, such as human nature, shortage of resource ,which would have significant influence on dealing with these issues.

Human are born to competition. The existence of competition decides that no effective way, nowadays, would be to utility totally eliminating war. War is an overwhelming problem that has devastated the world for centuries and continues to be one of the world’s biggest problems we confront. In many cases, various measures once has been taken to end wars, such as reaching peace agreements ,sharing the frontiers with other country . The Second War was supposed to be “the war to end all wars”, which fully express the desire for the truce. However , we are incapable of living together in harmony in short notice since our world teem with competition. For example , waging war break out between two small in order to obtain the ownership of a new oil well. The politician of Iraq fight for power which brought suffering to the public. And people will cause war just due to the different religious stance. Therefore , It is possible that world peace will be achieved in our era if competition do not quit。

Secondly, the human nature, such as selfish and greedy , keep us from the solutions of world’s biggest problem. Experience tells us that individuals tend to act on behalf of their own short-term economic and political interest, not on behalf of the environment or the public at large. For instance, climate variation is also starting to take a serious toll as increased temperatures have insulted in flooding worldwide. An important part of tackling climate change is to decrease the amount of greenhouse gases, but as yet no real progress has been made since we are unwilling to pay tremendous prices for dealing. To be specific, we are not prepared to giving up using our cars even though they will cause lots of pollutions. We are reluctant to use less electricity or gas, which are beneficial to our environment. In addition, we are also unwilling to pay the extra tariff or tax for the research of renewable energy. Indeed, some aspects of human nature that incur us put our own benefit at top priority when we make decision so that we cannot deal with it nowadays.

Last but not least, Secondary problems intrigued [激起兴趣]by one of the most serious problem could elongate the time of dealing with it. It is well known that overpopulation is a very growing problem, which bring the shortage of food. China introduced a one-child policy in order to reduce the growth of the population, Nevertheless, it is unimaginable that this policy create an aging population where there are not enough young people to support the old. as a result , No effective measures would be taken if we do no tackle the issue of the aging population.

In short, a variety of that have influence on our result of solution of the most important problems, such as competition, human nature and secondary problems. We cannot start real progress to deal with them within our lifetime.

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作者: beiyezi 时间: 2012-9-8 20:54
你的9.7的独立捏，我貌似要改你的

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-8 21:31
Whether university professors should focus on the education of students or researches? It might be tempting to back professors invest more time and energy in educating instead of researching. However, given to chance , I think the formula ought to be reversed. Granted ,the student play an crucial role in future development. Still, researches in various sphere form the bases for a social rapid development.
First of all, Researches are of great important for our life. Countless scientific achievement , which has always accompanied the progress and revolution of the society , definitely , relevant to a multitude of experimental researches conducting by professors and researcher. the invent of the stream engine brought a new era of prosperity of world society; the employment of electricity has multiplied the productivity and virtually reproduced limited resources on the earth. By the same token, the innovation of computer technology has made the Earth a little village and connected distant countries as a single Market. Apparently, we cannot emphasis the important of researcher to much.
Furthermore, the nature of occupation of the professor determines their work propensity. We could not confuse the definition of professor with teacher. university professor could prefer utility sophisticated and profound formula that student cannot understand and obtained in the college rather than the general but redundancy academic knowledge dealing problem. Consequently It is inevitable that professor alienated themselves from the student due to the gap of knowledge.
Given the understanding , it is difficult to overrate the connection between research and education. Admittedly , it can not be ignore that schooling of student imparted by professor is one of the vital feature of social development . Nevertheless, in many cases, the accomplishments hail from scores of research conducted by professor could facilitate the schooling of university . for example, technology has offered students with easy access to academic databases via Ipad screen. Read classical literature masterpieces or watch historical documents on internet. These great works are essentially helpful to arousing their curiosity and prepares them with key knowledge necessary for many courses. This kind of case is not rare. Thus ,we can draw a conclusion that Researches greatly benefit the education in college.
To sum up, the professor’s time should be occupied with a plenty of research . for these reason mentioned above , it is incorrect to place education significant above that of researches.

作者: beiyezi 时间: 2012-9-8 22:13
标题: 9.7独立修改
1,很多句子开头没大写
2，复数没加S
3，高亮是建议
4，语言方面挺好，逻辑上：论证的，第三段没说清楚

Whether university professors should focus on the education of students or researches? It might be tempting to back professors invest more time and energy in educating instead of researching. However, given to chance, I think the formula ought to be reversed. Granted, the students play a crucial role in future development of a nation. Still, researches in various spheres form the bases for a social rapid development.
First of all, Researches are of great important for our life. Countless scientific achievement, which has always accompanied with the progress and revolution of the society, definitely, relevant to a multitude of experimental researches conducting by professors and researchers. The invention of the stream engine brought a new era of prosperity of world society（booming society）; the employment of electricity has multiplied the productivity and virtually reproduced limited resources on the earth. By the same token, the innovation of computer technology has made the Earth a little village and connected distant countries as a single Market. Apparently, we cannot emphasis the important of researcher too much.
Furthermore, the nature（characteristic） of occupation of the professor determines their work propensity. We could not confuse the definition of professor with teacher. University professors could prefer utility of sophisticated and profound formula that students cannot understand and obtained in the college rather than the general but redundancy academic knowledge dealing problem. Consequently It is inevitable that professor alienated themselves from the student due to the gap of knowledge. （这段话的重点是不是研究才是教授的天职然后加以解释？没表达清楚，怎么扯到教授和学生之间的水平差距上了，好像意思是，因为学生太笨了，所以教授应该放弃学生而直奔研究？）
Given the understanding , it is difficult to overrate（overrate是高估的意思吧，很难去高估研究和教育的关系？） the connection between research and education. Admittedly, it can not be ignore that schooling of students imparted by professor is one of the vital feature of social development. Nevertheless, in many cases, the accomplishments hail from scores of research conducted by professors could facilitate the schooling of university（nevertheless 表转折，可是这句和上句没转折关系）. For example, technology has offered students with easy access to academic databases via I pad screen. Read classical literature masterpieces or watch historical documents on internet. These great works are essentially helpful to arousing their curiosity and prepares them with key knowledge necessary for many courses. This kind of case is not rare. Thus, we can draw a conclusion that researches greatly benefit the education in college.

To sum up, the professor’s time should be occupied with（by） a plenty of research. For these reasons mentioned above, it is incorrect to place education significant above that of researches（incorrect for professors to chose education over researches）.

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-9 18:42
独立
The most important investment of a company is to improve the skills of its employees.D\A
Investment activities are of extraordinary important for the running of cooperation. Planners should make such decisions on a case-by-case analysis. Granted , in some cases, improving employees’ skills is an effective channel of investment , it is undeniable that other factors also play pivotal role in direction of capital costing.
To maximize the profit of company , millions of money should be paid to attract brilliant leader. According with observation and common sense, it is clear that policy decisions of key executives that determine whether a firm ultimately succeeds. Notable cases include the turnaround success of Coca-cola after Roberto Goizueta assumed the position of CEO , and ,in contrast , the apple computer debacle following the departure of its founding visionary Steve Jobs. we cannot emphasize the important of leader too much. In general , a preeminent leader is born to lead, who has astute sense of successful opportunity. The talent of lead cannot be proved by Acquired training. Thus we should invest money every year to recruit qualified manager.
Besides the cost of location, we also need to pay every year developing advanced technologies. We live in a world teemed with fierce competition and everyday there are obsolete product replaced by new ones with advanced technology. Without the enormous money investing into technological development and innovation, enterprises cannot to survive in the upcoming competition. Such as the bankruptcy of Kodak corporation due to miss the historical opportunity of digital . therefore , it is difficult to overrate the important of relationship between the investment of innovation and development of company.
so significant the location of business film is also that we should cast scores of capital to purchase the most suitable one. if a enterprise is a tree, the position is soil. The conditions offered by the positions , such as customer’s group, market sphere and so forth ,are kin to the nutrition from the soil. Different trees rely on the variation of nutrition which determines the development of the company. For instance, contrary to many of Brand stores generally locating in densely populated regions and downtown areas, Walmart , warehouse supermarket has expanded its franchise store businesses in sparsely populated regions. This sort of cases are not rare . we can draw a conclusion that the expenditure of location is not negligible in comparison with of improving works’ capacity.

Admittedly , the raising of capacity of workers would benefit the company so much , such a developing cooperative interaction with colleague . still , we should not ignore other factors which are belonging the most important investment scope.

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-9 21:01
9月8日综合
According to the reading passage, the behaviors of dealing among private collectors have extremely negative effects on scientist as well as the public. However, the professor argues that this consequence was being exaggerated and she use three piece of reason to buttress her opinion.
First , on contrary to the statement in the passage that the citizen have few opportunities and less interest to view the fossil collections due to privatization of them. the speaker figure out that the result is reversed. With the fossils become a sort of commodity which could be purchase, Some of scientific institution and museum are able to buy and exhibit collection.
Furthermore, the professor states that even if the millionaire hold the ownership of fossils, it is not necessarily means that scientists have no approach to examine and research the collections, which differs from the article. She puts forward that so precious and valued is the fossils are that the owners will identify them. Samples of fossils be about to pass the hand of researcher at first. In this way, the scientist could gain access to any information of them.
In addition, the narrator points out that granted, a plenty of valuable fossils might be destroyed by commercial collectors, still, it is better than being buried beneath ground. A multitude of fossils are undiscovered for the sake of lack of collecting programs in many universities. This point undermines the claim made in the reading.
In short, the professor precisely finds the flaws in the reading passage, and compelling proves that the advantages of fossil’s commercial far overweight the disadvantages.

作者: fuzhengrui 时间: 2012-9-9 21:12
标题: 9.8独立改正见附件
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作者: fuzhengrui 时间: 2012-9-10 19:10
标题: 9.8综合修改
According to the reading passage, the behaviors of dealing（deals) among private collectors have extremely negative effects on scientist(scientific researches) as well as the public. However, the professor argues that this consequence was being exaggerated and she use(s) three piece(s) of reason to buttress her opinion.
First , on contrary to the statement in the passage that the citizen(s) have few(er) opportunities and less interest to view the fossil collections due to privatization of them.(,) the speaker figure(s) out that the result is reversed. With(with后面不能直接加句子） the fossils become a sort of commodity which could be purchase(d) , Some(some) of scientific institution(s) and museum(s) are able to buy and exhibit (the) collection(s).
Furthermore, the professor states that even if the millionaire(s) hold the ownership of fossils, it is not necessarily means(it does not necessarily mean) that scientists have no approach to examine and research the collections, which differs from the article. She puts forward that so precious and valued is the fossils are that the owners will identify them(倒装没写对）. Samples of fossils be(语法有问题） about to pass the hand of researcher(s) at first. In this way, the scientist could gain access to any information of them.
In addition, the narrator(全文都用一个professor就够了把） points out that granted, a plenty of valuable fossils might be destroyed（damaged更好） by commercial collectors, still, it is better than being buried beneath ground. A multitude of fossils are undiscovered for the sake of lack of collecting programs in many universities. This point undermines the claim made in the reading.
In short, the professor precisely finds the flaws in the reading passage, and compelling proves that the advantages of fossil’s commercial far overweight(outweigh) the disadvantages.

你表达的意思是听力的意思，但是小错不断。

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-10 20:04
19月9号综合

The lecturer rejects the ideas presented in the reading passage that salvage logging is an effective method to protect the health of forest and ecosystem. She use three pieces of reasons to buttress herself viewpoint that this means would lead long-term ecosystem damage.

The professor does not agree with the first point made in the reading------that salvage logging could provide desirable condition for the vegetation recovering. She puts forward that the consequence is reversed. The process of decomposition richen the soil of forest, which will benefit the tree growth. Removing dead trees lead the lack of nutrition to soil.

The author figures out that to minimize the damages of the insect infestation, the totting wood should be razed. In contrast, the speaker points out that even it is the fact that the decaying woods offer suitable habitat for bug , it is not necessary means that the phenomenon will cause bad result. The spruce bark beetles have develop lasting 100 years without any enormous disaster happening. Meanwhile , the rotting trees is a desirable home not only for spruce bark beetle but also for birds and other species of pest.

In addition, the narrator admits that savage logging is beneficial. But she also claims that the effect is temporary and small. To be specific, it is expensive to transport logs by helicopter and other transportation. Besides, Too often, the logging industries are more willing to employ the outsider works with more experience and well-trained. This undermines what the writer believes.

To sum up , the professor precisely finds the flaws in the reading passage, and compelling proves that the disadvantage of logging far overweight advantage.

作者: haduni 时间: 2012-9-10 21:27
The lecturer rejects the ideas presented in thereading passage that salvage logging is an effective method to protect thehealth of forest and ecosystem. She use uses three pieces of reasons to buttress herself her own viewpoint that this means would lead to long-term ecosystemdamage.

The professor does not agree with the firstpoint made in the reading------that salvage logging could provide desirablecondition for the vegetation recovering. She puts forward that the consequenceis reversed just opposite. The process of decomposition richen enrich the soil of forest, which will benefit the tree growth.Removing dead trees lead tothe lack of nutrition to soil.

The author figures out that to minimize thedamages of the insect infestation, the totting wood should be razed. Incontrast, the speaker points out that even it is the fact that the decayingwoods offer suitable habitat for bugs , it is not necessary means that the phenomenon will cause badresult. The spruce bark beetles have develop lasting 100 years without any enormous disaster happening. Meanwhile, the rottingtrees is are the desirable home not only for spruce bark beetles but also for birds andother species of pest(insects害虫和昆虫是不一样的).

In addition, the narrator admits that savage salvagelogging is beneficial. But she also claims that the effect is temporary andsmall. To be specific, it is expensive to transport logs by helicopter andother transportation means of transportation. Besides, Too toooften, the logging industries are more willing to employ the outsider workswith more experience and beingwell-trained. This undermines what the writer believes.

To sum up , the professor precisely finds theflaws in the reading passage, and compelling proves that the disadvantage oflogging far overweight advantage.

很不错呀，都是些无关紧要的小错误

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-11 20:51
9月10日独立
Have you ever been alienated by your colleagues ? Have you ever been job-hopping since you cannot tolerate the bad temper of your boss? Have you ever been blamed since you cannot cooperate with co-workers? If you have never experienced such things, you might hold the wrong opinion that only having excellent knowledge for job can we gain the ultimate triumph in fierce job competition. In fact, I have witnessed the struggle and paradox of the youngster when they first enter job environment.
First and foremost, the adaptation of new environment easily strengthens the connection between us and co-workers. The earlier we can adjust to the environment, the more possible we can blend into the social circle of company, which could benefit employees greatly. We cannot emphasize the important of team work too much. As a general employee, quickly integrating into work group enables us to accomplish our task more effectively and efficiently. Tons of time, wasting on tackling interior contradiction, will be saved. As a leader assigned recently, team group provides us a platform to deeply learn the capacities of workers. It is hard for me to image that a leader who has been kept away from teams can accurately distribute tasks to each of employees. According to a survey conducted by national statistic Bureau of China in 2012, people who can quickly adapt to the environment are able to finish 20 percent more works with one week than the unadjusted ones. That could be explain the phenomenon why the increasing number of people pay attention on job adaptation rather than excellent work skills.
Further more, adapting to the circumstances offers people with more opportunities to succeed. Compared employees to seeds and company to soil, if one of seed is unable to adapt to the soil, it will be overcome by other seed and eventually wiped out. However, if it can adjust to the condition of soil greatly, it will beat others obtain more nutrition and advantage, such as operation experience from co-workers, the opportunities of advancement and so forth, and become a huge tree someday. For instance, my uncle hired by The General Motors with another three candidates two years ago. He is the only one person who did not have certificate of high accountant among all of people, but he more swift adapt to the job than any others. He is the first one operating adeptly the company software to finish report form. He is the first one blending into work group and he is also the first one got appreciation of all people in company. Eventually, his is also the only one who was promoted within one year. This case are not rare and we can draw a conclusion that it is easier to gain access to success with well adaptation instead of job skill.
Admittedly, preeminent job skills have themselves advantages. Job capacity is a stepping-stone to success; they provide us more possibility to be recruited by operation. However, in the sight of long-term, without well adjusting capacity equaling with job knowledge, we cannot survive in the competition of company, let alone thriving. After all, the knowledge of job could be acquired gradually from a multitude of job experiences.

作者: bonfin 时间: 2012-9-11 23:23
9月10日独立
Have you ever been alienated by your colleagues ? Have you ever been job-hopping since you cannot tolerate the bad temper of your boss? Have you ever been blamed since you cannot cooperate with co-workers? If you have never experienced such things, you might hold the wrong opinion that only having excellent knowledge for job can we gain the ultimate triumph in fierce job competition. In fact, I have witnessed the struggle and paradox of the youngster when they first enter job environment.

First and foremost, the adaptation of new environment easily strengthens the connection between us and co-workers. The earlier we can adjust to the environment, the more possible we can blend into the social circle of company, which could benefit employees greatly. We cannot emphasize the important（importance） of team work too much. As a general employee, quickly integrating into work group enables us to accomplish our task more effectively and efficiently. Tons of time, wasting on tackling interior contradiction, will be saved. As a leader assigned recently, team group provides us a platform to deeply learn the capacities of workers. It is hard for me to image that a leader who has been kept away from teams can accurately distribute tasks to each of employees. According to a survey conducted by national statistic Bureau of China in 2012, people who can quickly adapt to the environment are able to finish 20 percent more works with one week than the unadjusted ones. That could be explain（be去掉） the phenomenon why the increasing number of people pay attention on job adaptation rather than excellent work skills.

Further more, adapting to the circumstances offers people with more opportunities to succeed. Compared employees to seeds and company to soil, if one of seed is unable to adapt to the soil, it will be overcome by other seed and eventually wiped out. However, if it can adjust to the condition of soil greatly, it will beat others obtain more nutrition and advantage, such as operation experience from co-workers, the opportunities of advancement and so forth, and become a huge tree someday. For instance, my uncle hired by The General Motors with another three candidates two years ago. He is the only one person who did not have certificate of high accountant among all of people, but he more swift adapt to the job than any others. He is the first one operating adeptly the company software to finish report form. He is the first one blending into work group and he is also the first one got appreciation of all people in company. Eventually, his is also the only one who was promoted within one year. This case are not rare and we can draw a conclusion that it is easier to gain access to success with well adaptation instead of job skill.

Admittedly, preeminent job skills have themselves advantages. Job capacity is a stepping-stone to success; they（it） provide us more possibility (possibilities)to be recruited by operation. However, in the sight of long-term, without well adjusting capacity equaling with job knowledge, we cannot survive in the competition of company, let alone thriving. After all, the knowledge of job could be acquired gradually from a multitude of job experiences.

写得太好啦！！！用词很丰富，逻辑也很清晰，句子形式也多变。膜拜ing~~~
不过，个人觉得最好加上结尾段哈~~

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-12 20:25
9月11日独立
It is much easier for people to achieve success with their family members’ help now than in the past.

It seems that people always have desire to compare: am I smarter than others? Are we living in a era with more opportunities to succeed? Or, as the question goes, is success closer to us nowadays that in the past with the family helping? I would say no, as I have witnessed the struggle and paradox of our generation, even under family member’ support.

I general, We can find that the assistance offered by parents no more less than experience and interpersonal relation. But these two points are make no sense for our success at present.

First of all, nowadays, the experience from parent is not as vital as they would like in the past. So swift is the speed of social development that most of experience and knowledge from the elder are not suitable for us to gain access to the success. Therefore, even though parents could provide their child with enormous and desirable knowledge concluded from their past experience, it is less valuable to refer. Even worse, the out-of-date experience lead us have to spend twice effort to success. However, given in the past, the pace of updating of knowledge is not quick as today so that people can directly adopt the parent successful method directly; an heir of a huge amount of knowledge, generally, means a successful person.

Apart from the issue of problem, the interpersonal relationship also plays less significant roles in our brilliant future than before. Nowadays, people value and ethics have dramatic change; even the relationships between people are no longer pure. The increasing number of People weighs social relation by money and other material things. The values of material things are far overweight than relationship when anyone find them to look for the shortcut of success via parents social circle. A example could illuminate my opinion, my uncle Ye competed a job opportunities with three candidates two years ago. One of interviewer of the job was his parents’ friends who has kept contact with my uncle’s family and known the excellence of my uncle. We had thought my uncle is winner, but, actually, the interviewer chose other for the sake of 1000RNB. This case is not rare. But several decades ago, people treasured their interpersonal relationship, especially the friendship so that they almost could do everything for their friends and their child and, in turn, they could gain equal rewards. Consequently, it is easier for someone to gain access to success under parent’s social relationship backing in the past than now.

However, the comparison between two different times is itself ridiculous. With the fluctuation of social system and people’s notion, their seniorities’ experience and social relationship play various roles in the way of success. Maybe one day people will pay more attention on these two things again when their search for success of career and life.

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-12 22:32
9月11日综合

The writing passage puts forwards that in recent century, the research of archaeology, which is associated with the excavation and study of cultural artifacts, is confronted with severe situation in Britain
area. However, The professor points out that the new guideline could deal with the three pieces of issues mentioned in the passage.
First, pointing at the statement in the reading that the many valuable artifacts could be destroy by the construction projects, the professor claim that according to the new rule, the construction site should be examine before digging the foundation. If there are value artifacts, the government and archaeologists should cooperate to draw plan or preserve the antique before projects processing.

In addition, the speaker figures out that new guideline cope with the problem that there are no enough and constant found support from government by receiving financial support from construction companies. They need to pay not only for initial fee of examine but also for money of carrying on, which allow the proceeding of archaeological work.

Furthermore, the enactment argues that more paid job opportunities in all stage of archaeological work could be offered. From examining the site, via drawing preserve pan, enacting manner, recording date, up to archeological research. which tackle

作者: frankiyian 时间: 2012-9-13 09:15
The writing passage puts forwards that in recent century, the research of archaeology, which is associated with the excavation and study of cultural artifacts, is confronted with severe situation in Britain
area. However, The professor points out that the new guideline could deal with the three pieces of （多余？）issues mentioned in the passage.
First, pointing at the statement in the reading that the many valuable artifacts could be destroy （ed）by the construction projects, the professor claim （s）that according to the new rule, the construction site should be examine （ed）before digging the foundation. （这句有点乱，site是主语，所以后边的意思变成了 site digging。。。）If there are value（able） artifacts, the government and archaeologists should cooperate to draw plan or（没有并列含义，做计划-或者-保存意思不通。to更好。原文中是说做计划，绕边边或者挖出来保存） preserve the antique before projects processing.

In addition, the speaker figures out that new guideline cope（s） with the problem that there are no enough（你的意思是no enough，no constant 这种表达方法合适么？） and constant found support from government by receiving financial support from construction companies. They need to pay not only for initial fee of examine but also for money of carrying on, which allow the proceeding of archaeological work.

Furthermore, the enactment argues that more paid job opportunities in all stage of archaeological work could be offered. From examining the site, via drawing preserve pan, enacting manner, recording date, up to archeological research. which tackle

总结：最后不晓得是怎么了，没写完还是。。整篇文章意思对了，也够八股。总的来讲蛮不错，就是小错比较多

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-13 10:58
谢谢franki 点评，最后是没有贴上去，我明明写完了的~~~~~

作者: frankiyian 时间: 2012-9-13 13:46

谢谢franki 点评，最后是没有贴上去，我明明写完了的~~~~~

-- by 会员 E月羽 (2012/9/13 10:58:40)

也谢谢你帮我改，我发现还是我的错比较多，辛苦了= =

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-13 18:21
9月11日独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

Have you ever seen a merchant prince go to bankrupt overnight for the sack of a risky investment? Have you ever gotten a failure when you had participated in an approaching final examination without any preparation patiently? Have you ever regretfully told your business strategy at first time without any specific plan so that you lost a chance of advancement? If you have never had such experience, you would never know how vital the patient is.

First of all, we can not emphasis the important of patience too much, especially for a business empire. The ultimate aim of business is to increase profit. When a decision could impact the development in a significant way, to maximize the profit, it is imperative for people to creative and desirable marketing investment ploy patiently from multiple investigations, precise statistic analysis, up to accurate customer position, instead of taking action in hurry. Otherwise, it could be a disaster not only for the cooperation but also for the employees. For example, the CEO of a company must weight all of his opinions cautiously. Due to a miscalculation on his part, the company could incur significant losses. These losses might be so substantial that the company will be force to cut jobs in order save money or save the company itself. More worse, this huge enterprise could gradually collapse as the price of this decision. Therefore, it is impossible to overstate the significance of patient.

Apart from the crucial characteristic of patient, also, we can not ignore another important factor: Opportunities only to the people who are prepared, which ask a huge amount of patience. Chances do not show up every minute. Although taking action immediately sometime could help us size the tails of opportunities, the possibility is tiny and limited. In most cases, only via a multitude of preparation beforehand can we successfully catch opportunities and eventually reach our target; sometimes, the successare even at hand. An illuminating is that compared with my classmate-Sam’s failure, I got great performance in my final statistic paper. When professor assign this task, Sam finished his final statistic paper at first without any patient preparation process. So that the bad academic grade. However, by elaborate preparing, I got reorganization from professor and a big “A”. In this case, No one can deny that the patience play a vital role in success.

Admittedly, to be patient not necessarily means preparation infinitely, instead of taking action. In many cases, so long the time of preparation is that plenty of people missing the optimal time to success in the fierce competitions, even though the chance is griped by them. However, as long as we are ready, action should be taken to ensure victory.

To sum up, compare with finish task patiently, taking action immediately is not my first choice, As the Abraham Lincoln address:I will prepare and some day my chance will come.

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-13 20:55
9月13日综合

According to the reading passage, the writer puts forward three measures to preserve the population of the Torreya, a kind of tree. However, the professor argues that none of methods are satisfied solution. She uses three pieces of reason to buttress her opinion.

The speaker refutes the first approach in the reading-----reestablishing Torreya in the original site. She points out that recently, Being affected by the great environment, the microclimate is no longer suitable to the Torreya survival. Not only the global warming but also the drying the wetland lead to the niche become warmer and drier than before, which eliminate the condition of Torreya to relocate in the same place.

In addition, on contrary to the statement in the passage that moving Torreya to an totally various place is an effective way to address the decline of Torrya. The professor claims that this method will cause another question. For example, the same measure once was taken to protect another kind of rare tree BL. The tree spread quickly and kills surrounding tree species, which were endangered. Therefore, Torreya cannot be planted into the new environment.

Furthermore, the narrator argues that to preserve Torreya in research centers cannot ensure the continued survival of the species, which different from what states by author. She alleges that the stability of population of Torreya cannot be guaranteed since trees lived in the centers cannot resist the diseases. To be specific, two a request---- large and genetic diversity, play crucial roles in trees survival.To the tree, Living in wild can satisfied these condition. However, for the sake of absence of genetic diversity, the tree cannot growth well in centers.

作者: duniaguodupa 时间: 2012-9-14 13:28
913综合
According to the reading passage, the writer puts forward three measures to preserve the population of the Torreya, a kind of tree. However, the professor argues that none of methods are satisfied solution. She uses three pieces of reason to buttress her opinion.

The speaker refutes the first approach in the reading-----reestablishing Torreya in the original site. She points out that recently, Being affected by the great environment, the microclimate is no longer suitable to the Torreya survival. Not only the global warming but also the drying the wetland lead to the niche become warmer and drier than before（此句要倒装，not only do······；另外lead to the niche become·····也有问题）, which eliminate the condition of Torreya to relocate in the same place.

In addition, on contrary to the statement in the passage that moving Torreya to an totally various place is an effective way to address the decline of Torrya. The professor claims that this method will cause another question. For example, the same measure once was taken to protect another kind of rare tree BL. The tree spread quickly and kills surrounding tree species, which were endangered. Therefore, Torreya cannot be planted into the new environment.

Furthermore, the narrator argues that to preserve Torreya in research centers cannot ensure the continued survival of the species, which（is） different from what states by author. She alleges that the stability of population of Torreya cannot be guaranteed since trees lived in the centers cannot resist the diseases. To be specific, two a request---- large and genetic diversity, play crucial roles in trees survival.To the tree, Living in wild can satisfied these condition. However, for the sake of absence of genetic diversity, the tree cannot growth well in centers.

楼主真心厉害，内容都能听出来了！而且文章也能表现出passage和lecture的不同。
存在极少的语法小错误，但无伤大雅。ym楼主~

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-14 18:35

谢谢dunia 同学的批改，

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-14 18:35
9月13日独立

Have you ever gotten tons of desirable job hunting information from some special courses? Have you even adopting various interview skill taught by teachers to win the work opportunity in the fierce job market? Have you ever appreciated the preparation courses offered by university when you acquire the chance of advancement? If you have never had these experiences, you would never know how crucial the preparation courses are. In my opinion, before student enter into social competition, the preparation course is imperative.

First, preparation courses provide a platform for student to acquire guidance of work. Students needs guidance from teachers, since their do not have an overall understanding of the work they are going to engage in. This means, before being faced with drastic competitions, students could have no blueprints for their futures. Just as a kid who is for the first time in a swimming pool could do nothing but to play with water. Therefore, it is impossible to overstate the important of courses too much. By this special course, knowledgeable teachers could give desirable recommendation that allow student to explore what sorts of job they are best suited to in terms of their skills and personality.

Furthermore, offering a preparation course is a better way for students to learn how to employ the academic knowledge into their routine works. The mainly aim of university is to make students comprehend the knowledge of their major field systematically to form a whole-scale prospect, which lead the increasing number of graduate are “the giant of thought, and the dwarf of action”. An investigation conducted in 2012 revealed the surprising factors that many students pass examinations by relying on nothing more than rote memorization.

There should therefore be courses that help student transform the knowledge in mind into the capacity of action by providing the opportunities of action. Such as teaching a biological student learn how to conduct an experience by using academic information. The more internship and training graduate have, the more academic knowledge can be master by student.

In addition, not only the guidance of job occupation but also the other desirable skills should be offered by college. Today, the majority of teachers and students laid too much emphasis on the scores, only few cares about other abilities which are also essential for students' future success. For example, while major courses may occasionally utilize teamwork skills for group activities in class, does it really benefit for students career? Last year, a shocking news comes out, a Tsing Hua university graduate sells the pork meat alone in the farm market to make a living, the top-A students cannot hold a job for more than two month because "He does not possess social abilities" form one of his ex-boss. To give a better hand for their students in the future job market, the university, arranging the course to improve cooperation skill is imperative.

To sum up, Considering that job preparation is closely related to students’ development, it is impossible to emphasis the important of offering job courses in college too much. As the Abraham Lincon address: I will prepare and some day my chance will come.

总感觉每段的废话太多，麻烦指正。后来自己有重写了一下2，3 段，麻烦对比一下，那种比较好。

1 帮助学生更好的规划未来。

The plan of occupation is of important for the every stage of student. To help students to depict brilliant blueprints of themselves, it is crucial for the university to arrange special job courses, which could benefits student a lots. These courses should not only provide the detailed job hunting information but also give them the most suitable recommendations for career, according to their various situations, by which all of them will have an overall understanding of their occupation. Only in this way can bring the student a splendid future.

2 帮助学生知识和技能更好的融合。

No matter what the student majors in the university, he or she need to employ the academic knowledge acquired into their routine works. Generally, it is a long period that the students transform theory into practice with the accumulation of experience. If university could offering relevant course and arrange the chance of internship to forge their ability of action, this process could be accelerates. Therefore, their more easily got the win during the fierce competition of job, since it is quicker to them to familiar with the operation of the companies by skilled using theoretical knowledge into tasks.

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-15 20:24
9月14日独立

Have you ever watched the American opera” gossip girl” via internet? Have you ever been encouraged to learn basketball even though you are a girl? Have you felt happiness and satisfied since you paid the tuition fee by your scholarship? If you have never had these experiences, you would not know how easy can we geteducation in today society due to the development of technology, assistance of government as well as the change of social attitude.

It is well known that technology has been advanced significantly since last century, which leads to great improvement in our education resources and means. Given the past, if students wanted to learn foreign language such as English, directly emulating the pronunciation of teacher is the only way in that there were no equipment for them to listen to English tapes and no foreign teachers to talk with. However, with the advent of internet and various electronic equipments, such as IPAD, MP4, students can easily gain access to a huge amount of English materials, which handily prepare them with the key knowledge they need in the future. it is impossible for us to emphasis the important of technology too much, when it comes to the quality and availability of education.

Apart from advanced technology, the assistance from society and government also play a crucial role in improvement of education. For those who had difficult being educated for the sake of finance problem, governmental authorities and colleges have provided various welfare programs to help them. With plenty of opportunities to acquired scholarship and subsidies, students are more likely to finish their education. In addition, the popularization of compulsory education offers more chances to those who are eager to received education but cannot affords the expensive tuition fees. It is the sound welfare system of government and some institution in today society guarantees the availability of schooling to more people than in the past.

Last but not least, change in attitude toward education, especially for women, considerable urges the education pervasion. This obviously reflected in the fact that the increasing number of female are active in the social stage. In the ancient of China, girls who wanted to get education were often regarded as traitorous. They were forbidden by their parents to touching any books so that most of they were not literate at all. Compared with them, women nowadays are able to attend school as well as man without gender discrimination from parents and society.

To sum up, I agree with the statement that people are now easier to become educated today than in the past because many aspects of our society have largely improved to relatively high level, which are more likely to satisfied the needs of people who seek the chance of education and self-enhancement.

作者: 羊咩咩yw 时间: 2012-9-15 21:35
Have you ever watched the American opera” gossip girl” via internet? (我觉得Gossip girl 电视剧用在这里不太合适呢，要不换成Modern Family 你觉得怎么样？要不网络课程也行~~个人意见呢，呵呵~)Have you ever been encouraged to learn basketball even though you are a girl? Have you felt happiness and satisfied since you paid the tuition fee by your scholarship? If you have never had these experiences, you would not know how easy can we get education in today society due to the development of technology, assistance of government as well as the change of social attitude.（楼主~其实我觉得这个开头结构用的人很多~~这样容易重复，小建议哈~~）

It is well known that technology has been advanced significantly since last century, which leads to great improvement in our education resources and means. Given the past, if students wanted to learn foreign language such as English, directly emulating the pronunciation of teacher is the only way in that there were no equipment for them to listen to English tapes and no foreign teachers to talk with. However, with the advent of internet and various electronic equipments, such as IPAD, MP4, students can easily gain access to a huge amount of English materials, which handily prepare them with the key knowledge they need in the future. it is impossible for us to emphasis the important of technology too much, when it comes to the quality and availability of education.

Apart from advanced technology, the assistance from society and government also play a crucial role in improvement of education. For those who had difficult （difficulty） being educated for the sake of finance problem, governmental authorities and colleges have provided various welfare programs to help them. With plenty of opportunities to acquired scholarship and subsidies, students are more likely to finish their education. In addition, the popularization of compulsory education offers more chances to those who are eager to received education but cannot affords the expensive tuition fees. It is the sound welfare system of government and some institution in today society guarantees the availability of schooling to more people than in the past.

Last but not least, change in attitude toward education, especially for women, considerable urges the education pervasion. This obviously reflected in the fact that the increasing number of female are active in the social stage. (我觉得在后面加一个和题目联系起来的句子会更扣题~~)In the ancient of China, girls who wanted to get education were often regarded as traitorous. They were forbidden by their parents to touching any books so that most of they were not literate at all. Compared with them, women nowadays are able to attend school as well as man without gender discrimination from parents and society.

To sum up, I agree with the statement that people are now easier to become educated today than in the past because many aspects of our society have largely improved to relatively high level, which are more likely to satisfied the needs of people who seek the chance of education and self-enhancement.

我觉得LZ的句子写得很好~观点也很不错，加油~~

作者: E月羽 时间: 2012-9-16 19:31
9月15日独立
Whether university professors should focus on the education of students or researches? It might be tempting to back professors invest more time and energy in educating instead of researching. However, given to chance, I think the formula ought to be reversed. Granted, the students play a crucial role in future development of a nation. Still, researches in various spheres form the bases for a social rapid development.
First of all, Researches are of great important for our life. Countless scientific achievement, which has always accompanied with the progress and revolution of the society, definitely, relevant to a multitude of experimental researches conducting by professors and researchers. The invention of the stream engine brought a new era of prosperity of world society; the employment of electricity has multiplied the productivity and virtually reproduced limited resources on the earth. By the same token, the innovation of computer technology has made the Earth a little village and connected distant countries as a single Market. Apparently, we cannot emphasis the important of researcher too much.
Furthermore, It is likewise that technology will exert more far-reaching effect on the mind of students. No matter whatever the result is, a processing of a research often accompanied with rapidly accumulation of cut-edging knowledge to the professor, which directly reflected in their teaching courses. When referring to a sort of concept or points associating with one of research, it is evitable that professor brings into their incisive opinions and advanced knowledge. Even though most are too profound to understand, it also plants a scientific seed in student mind, waiting to germinate one days.
Given the understanding , it is difficult to overratethe connection between research and education. Admittedly, it can not be ignore that schooling of students imparted by professor is one of the vital feature of social development. Nevertheless, in many cases, the accomplishments hail from scores of research conducted by professors could facilitate the schooling of university. For example, technology has offered students with easy access to academic databases via I pad screen. Read classical literature masterpieces or watch historical documents on internet. These great works are essentially helpful to arousing their curiosity and prepares them with key knowledge necessary for many courses. This kind of case is not rare. Thus, we can draw a conclusion that researches greatly benefit the education in college.

To sum up, the professor’s time should be occupied by a plenty of research. For these reasons mentioned above, it is incorrect to place education significant above that of researches

作者: safeandsound 时间: 2012-9-16 20:14
标题: 9-15 作文批改
膜拜一下大侠

、、发现被赤裸裸的鄙视了

、、让我情何以堪啊、、[attach]106428[/attach]

作者: bonfin 时间: 2012-9-17 20:03
9.16 独立诶~

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