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标题: @help~~~~~~~~~~~og sc 51 关于og上对于E的解答~ [打印本页]
作者: bob9603    时间: 2012-7-16 10:40
标题: @help~~~~~~~~~~~og sc 51 关于og上对于E的解答~
OG-SC-51
51.        A new study suggests that the conversational pace of
everyday life may be so brisk it hampers the ability of
some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and
words and, the result is. to make sense of speech.

(A)         it hampers the ability of somechildren for
distinguishing discrete sounds and words and,
the result is, to make
(B)         that it hampers the ability of some children to
distinguish discrete sounds and words and, as a
result, to make

(C)         that it hampers the ability of some children to
distinguish discrete sounds and words and, the
result of this, they are unable to make

(D)         that it hampers the ability of some children to
distinguish discrete sounds and words, and
results in not making

(E)         as to hamper the ability of some children for
distinguishing discrete sounds and words,
resulting in being unable to make

我想问一下关于E的og解释，小菜没懂og上说的错在哪里？


“The phrase is awkward, wordy, and unclear;”


哪个phrase？？？
是so  that 变成了 so as to的不对？
（ps：小菜知道resulting的那里改变了原意，所以错，所以这个“resulting”问题先不考虑）


求解答~
作者: bob9603    时间: 2012-7-16 10:41
芝麻来人~
作者: bob9603    时间: 2012-7-16 11:08
help~~~~~~~~~~~
作者: bob9603    时间: 2012-7-16 11:46
饭前顶一下~~~
作者: jiaoguitar    时间: 2012-7-16 12:32
我的理解是1，ability to do在E中被改成了ability for doing。2，so as to 的语义与so that稍有不同。so that表示结果，so as to有表示目的。
作者: bob9603    时间: 2012-7-16 13:01
我的理解是1，ability to do在E中被改成了ability for doing。2，so as to 的语义与so that稍有不同。so that表示结果，so as to有表示目的。
-- by 会员 jiaoguitar (2012/7/16 12:32:20)

先谢谢你的回答哈~
我知道第一点~
亲，你的第二个说法，关于“结果&目的”，我有点启发，但我觉得这两个的区别虽然有，但应该不算是一个split的点~~
你的说法我再想想哈，等等别人怎么说~~~
先谢谢哈
作者: bob9603    时间: 2012-7-16 16:44
作者: Donts    时间: 2012-7-16 17:29
我觉得wordy说的是result in being unable另外关于so as to的用法，太多地方都有提到，它的前面需要是单一主谓，否则容易引起歧义
经典例子OG12 39.  In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to
Queen Catherine annulled so as to marry Anne Boleyn.
(A)  so as to marry
(B)  and so could be married to
(C)  to be married to
(D)  so that he could marry
(E)  in order that he would marry
OG说A有 King Henry VIII与 Queen Catherine， 所以是谁要marry Anne Boleyn就有歧义了。
作者: Donts    时间: 2012-7-16 17:30
另外求讨论being在SC中的选择啊！http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-737502-1-1.html
作者: jeffery2541    时间: 2012-7-16 17:35
其实我本身挺讨厌见到so...as to或so as to的，就是因为自己没有弄清楚它们。我们先来弄清这两个东西吧。

so as to：这是PP笔记上的一句话：so as to 可以表示目的也可以表示结果，用于单一主谓结构中，逻辑主语等于句子主语，即句子主语可以执行as to后动词的动作。
so... as to：so … as to be/do一般用于单一主语，但是不能相隔太远，否则可以视为错误。其原理为：so … as to事实上是三个结构的结合，so引出的是状语，as指代句子前面的核心含义，to是不定式引导状语结构(adverbial structure)，此不定式修饰的正是前面的核心动词以及该动词的逻辑主语，所以只有当前面只有一个核心动词而且很明确的时候才能够用so…as to，也正因为修饰成分离被修饰词过远会造成修饰不清，所以to be/do结构不能与前面动词不能太远。

我们再来看看E选项：
the conversational pace of everyday life may be so brisk as to hamper the ability ...（ablility for doing的错误我们就先忽略）
这样看来，根据上面的陈述，我倒认为E中的so... as to没有错误。so引导出结果状语，as指代句子前面的核心含义---pace be brisk，to引导了结果状语结构。
作者: jeffery2541    时间: 2012-7-16 17:41
我觉得wordy说的是result in being unable另外关于so as to的用法，太多地方都有提到，它的前面需要是单一主谓，否则容易引起歧义
经典例子OG12 39.  In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to
Queen Catherine annulled soasto marry Anne Boleyn.
(A)  soasto marry
(B)  and so could be married to
(C)  to be married to
(D)  so that he could marry
(E)  in order that he would marry
OG说A有 King Henry VIII与 Queen Catherine， 所以是谁要marry Anne Boleyn就有歧义了。
-- by 会员 Donts (2012/7/16 17:29:39)



你对于OG上说的这样的歧义认同吗？
作者: bob9603    时间: 2012-7-16 18:24
我觉得wordy说的是result in being unable另外关于so as to的用法，太多地方都有提到，它的前面需要是单一主谓，否则容易引起歧义
经典例子OG12 39.  In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to
Queen Catherine annulled soasto marry Anne Boleyn.
(A)  soasto marry
(B)  and so could be married to
(C)  to be married to
(D)  so that he could marry
(E)  in order that he would marry
OG说A有 King Henry VIII与 Queen Catherine， 所以是谁要marry Anne Boleyn就有歧义了。
-- by 会员 Donts (2012/7/16 17:29:39)




你对于OG上说的这样的歧义认同吗？
-- by 会员 jeffery2541 (2012/7/16 17:41:54)

单就你说的这道题，我十分认同，而且很肯定的~但对于我这题，jeffery有什么看法呢~~~救我啊亲~~~
作者: jeffery2541    时间: 2012-7-16 19:31
我觉得wordy说的是result in being unable另外关于so as to的用法，太多地方都有提到，它的前面需要是单一主谓，否则容易引起歧义
经典例子OG12 39.  In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to
Queen Catherine annulled soasto marry Anne Boleyn.
(A)  soasto marry
(B)  and so could be married to
(C)  to be married to
(D)  so that he could marry
(E)  in order that he would marry
OG说A有 King Henry VIII与 Queen Catherine， 所以是谁要marry Anne Boleyn就有歧义了。
-- by 会员 Donts (2012/7/16 17:29:39)





你对于OG上说的这样的歧义认同吗？
-- by 会员 jeffery2541 (2012/7/16 17:41:54)


单就你说的这道题，我十分认同，而且很肯定的~但对于我这题，jeffery有什么看法呢~~~救我啊亲~~~
-- by 会员 bob9603 (2012/7/16 18:24:15)




对于你这道题，你主要的疑问是在于OG解释中所述有问题的phrase是哪个对吧~
如果问题是这样的话，我想说：我也不是很清楚OG是想说那个错了。。。。
作者: bob9603    时间: 2012-7-16 19:39
我觉得wordy说的是result in being unable另外关于so as to的用法，太多地方都有提到，它的前面需要是单一主谓，否则容易引起歧义
经典例子OG12 39.  In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to
Queen Catherine annulled soasto marry Anne Boleyn.
(A)  soasto marry
(B)  and so could be married to
(C)  to be married to
(D)  so that he could marry
(E)  in order that he would marry
OG说A有 King Henry VIII与 Queen Catherine， 所以是谁要marry Anne Boleyn就有歧义了。
-- by 会员 Donts (2012/7/16 17:29:39)






你对于OG上说的这样的歧义认同吗？
-- by 会员 jeffery2541 (2012/7/16 17:41:54)



单就你说的这道题，我十分认同，而且很肯定的~但对于我这题，jeffery有什么看法呢~~~救我啊亲~~~
-- by 会员 bob9603 (2012/7/16 18:24:15)





对于你这道题，你主要的疑问是在于OG解释中所述有问题的phrase是哪个对吧~
如果问题是这样的话，我想说：我也不是很清楚OG是想说那个错了。。。。
-- by 会员 jeffery2541 (2012/7/16 19:31:55)

嘿嘿，所以咱一起呼救吧~！！！！！！！！！！！！！！HELP斑斑~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
作者: Donts    时间: 2012-7-16 19:44
我觉得wordy说的是result in being unable另外关于so as to的用法，太多地方都有提到，它的前面需要是单一主谓，否则容易引起歧义
经典例子OG12 39.  In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to
Queen Catherine annulled soasto marry Anne Boleyn.
(A)  soasto marry
(B)  and so could be married to
(C)  to be married to
(D)  so that he could marry
(E)  in order that he would marry
OG说A有 King Henry VIII与 Queen Catherine， 所以是谁要marry Anne Boleyn就有歧义了。
-- by 会员 Donts (2012/7/16 17:29:39)




你对于OG上说的这样的歧义认同吗？
-- by 会员 jeffery2541 (2012/7/16 17:41:54)

认同啊……怎么的人家是OG....GMAC搞出来的……它就是宇宙运行的法则TAT
作者: bob9603    时间: 2012-7-16 19:48
我觉得wordy说的是result in being unable另外关于so as to的用法，太多地方都有提到，它的前面需要是单一主谓，否则容易引起歧义
经典例子OG12 39.  In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to
Queen Catherine annulled soasto marry Anne Boleyn.
(A)  soasto marry
(B)  and so could be married to
(C)  to be married to
(D)  so that he could marry
(E)  in order that he would marry
OG说A有 King Henry VIII与 Queen Catherine， 所以是谁要marry Anne Boleyn就有歧义了。
-- by 会员 Donts (2012/7/16 17:29:39)





你对于OG上说的这样的歧义认同吗？
-- by 会员 jeffery2541 (2012/7/16 17:41:54)


认同啊……怎么的人家是OG....GMAC搞出来的……它就是宇宙运行的法则TAT
-- by 会员 Donts (2012/7/16 19:44:04)

小菜以为，那个说的没错，但仅限于Jeffery那道：离婚的题，对于这题，没什么用~
作者: 笑落    时间: 2012-7-23 10:22
谁知道C选项的解释？没看懂？特别是“The result of this is a new subject requires a new verb ” 为何需要new verb？

that it hampers the ability of some children to
distinguish discrete sounds and words and, the
result of this, they are unable to make  The result of this is a new subject requires a new verb to connect the phrase; the phrase is wordy and unclear.
作者: 笑落    时间: 2012-7-23 10:38
看了一堆大家的讨论...真想说是不是想多了啊...对于COMPLEX 的句子，OG一向喜欢平行。既然有个优美的平行句子在前了，那么后面的RESULTING IN BEING明显就不简洁了啊。所以不管对错，（我觉得是对的吧）肯定不好。



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