标题: 关于句子重心的改变 [打印本页] 作者: saber0425 时间: 2012-6-30 15:55 标题: 关于句子重心的改变 看李希强的sc，它上面有的句子中心改变了，有的没改，到底怎么判断什么时候应该改，什么时候不该改？Laos has a land area about the same as Great Britain but only four million in population, where many are members of hill tribes ensconced in the virtually inaccessible mountain valleys of the north. .. (A) about the same as Great Britain but only four million in population, where many .. (B) of about the same size as Great Britain is, but in Laos there is a population of only four million, and many .. (C) that is about the same size as Great Britain’s land area, but in Laos with a population of only four million people, many of them .. (D) comparable to the size of Great Britain, but only four million in population, and many .. (E) comparable to that of Great Britain but a population of only four million people, many of whom
答案上说D The coordinating conjunction and gives undue emphasis to the claim that many of the people in Laos live in inaccessible places.（句子重心改变）我个人觉得的d是对的作者: jiaoguitar 时间: 2012-6-30 16:07
Laos has a land… but (has) a population这是一个gmac喜欢用的平行结构。D选项确实改变了句子后半句的成分，此外many单独出现也增加了指代歧义的风险。