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(A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to

(D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to

(E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

绿色部分inspired 的逻辑主语好像不是Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe

Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

如果整个句子是这样的结构, 那么 “also” 不是有点多余吗? 因为它后面的 inspired是真正句子主语的动作, 而前面并没有另外一个动作被提出: subject verb1, also verb2…为什么会这样?

上面黑色部分是主句，蓝色部分是定语从句，绿色部分是分词做定语。

主语Bill Monrue, 前面的音乐家是主语同位语，also=too 副词：也

定从1：whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists.

非限定性定语从句，whose指代Bill Monroe's 作所有格代词。and连接三个并列主语repertory、views和vocal style。谓语influenced

相当于省略了which的非限定性定从，逻辑主语是musicians(which).

非限定性定语从句，whose指代musician's。主语misic 谓语differed from.

全句意思是：这个人（PM），他的作品、观点和风格影响过很多人（artists)，他自己(的精神）也鼓舞了许多musicians，(这些musicians中)包括（音乐风格与他有很大区别的）EP和JG。

不过，可不可以把repertory, views,和vocal style 理解成几个名词并列呢。总觉得那个views做repertory的同位语有点难啊，特别在考场上怎么能一下子就把句子结构剖析得那么清楚呢？

考试时候也可以区分，主要是要对逗号和连接词敏感，另外区分谓语是主句还是从句谓语，从句和非谓语通常是修饰语，多数可以忽略。先找主句。

Sorry现在才发现上面 “如下不同颜色”个没完, 贴出来颜色却不见了…

请问一下为何whose不是代距这个词最近的Presley and Jerry Garcia，而是较远的musicians呢？

即然主句是: Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe also inspired many musician.

同问，如果结构是 sb1, including sb2, who... 这时who指的是哪个啊？

whose修饰musicians,因为including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia是插入语,是独立的,对其他成分没有影响的.由两个逗号格开句子的主要成分

以下是引用stellate在2004-10-24 14:07:00的发言：

kuikui要问什么？

Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe,
                        whose
                        repertory,
                        views on musical collaboration,
                            and vocal style
                        influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including
                            Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia,
                    whose music differed significantly from his own.

上面黑色部分是主句，蓝色部分是定语从句，绿色部分是分词做定语。

分开来看：

主句：Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe also inspired many musicians

主语Bill Monrue, 前面的音乐家是主语同位语，also=too 副词：也

定从1：whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and
vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists.

非限定性定语从句，whose指代Bill Monroe's 作所有格代词。and连接三个并列主语repertory、views和vocal style。谓语influenced

分词定语：including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia,

相当于省略了which的非限定性定从，逻辑主语是musicians(which). ---有不同意见，我认为是插入语。

定从2：whose music differed significantly from his own.

非限定性定语从句，whose指代musician's。主语misic 谓语differed from.

全句意思是：这个人（PM），他的作品、观点和风格影响过很多人（artists)，他自己(的精神）也鼓舞了许多musicians，(这些musicians中)包括（音乐风格与他有很大区别的）EP和JG。-------我有不同意见，因为including前面有一个逗号，所以including引导的是插入语，whose引导定语从句。改为这些音乐家（包括EP和JG）的音乐与他自已的音乐有很大的不同。

whose修饰musicians,因为including
Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia是插入语,是独立的,对其他成分没有影响的.由两个逗号格开句子的主要成分

以下是引用amy7777在2006-10-5 12:14:00的发言：

whose修饰musicians,因为including
Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia是插入语,是独立的,对其他成分没有影响的.由两个逗号格开句子的主要成分

所以whose应跳过插入语趣修饰musicians

看完了stellate解释，本豁然开朗，但仍有一个点不理解：

including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia 这个现在分词结构，怎么就知道是修饰musicians呢？为什么不可以理解为修饰主句的主语呢？

楼上的说是插入语，但是只能解释whose的指代关系。现在分词修饰也是就近原则吗？

昨天还在现在分词中崩溃，今天看张道真语法时，无意找到了including的解释，写出来给大家分享一下：

张道真语法书的535页关于同位语的论述：有些同位语复杂些，如for example, including等引导：

其中的一个例句：New Zealand possesses rick mineral deposit，including gold。

所以我的愚见是including 是作同位语，不是做插入语。既然是同位语，那么后面whose的指代也就没有影响了，因为muscians 和后面的两个音乐大师是同位语，即——whose 指代的是两个音乐大师。