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标题: 求助OG12 59题E选项 [打印本页]

作者: 二楼往下掉    时间: 2012-6-28 23:15
标题: 求助OG12 59题E选项
59.  The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month.
(A)  world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month
(B)  world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festival’s month
(C)  world when they proclaimed a sacred truce for the festival month
(D)  world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed duringthe month of the festival
(E)  world by proclamation of a sacred truce that was for the month of the festival
正确答案D

我只是不明白E选项的句子结构应该是怎么样的,错在了哪里?OG上只说Wordy and awkward construction
作者: angelhxl    时间: 2012-6-28 23:57
by proclaimation...这就指向主语GAMES了,你觉得可能吗?所以逻辑语义错误!
作者: 二楼往下掉    时间: 2012-6-29 00:03
TheOlympic Games helped to keep peace by proclamation that was for the month ofthe festival
那简化完了应该是这么个结构么?我想确认下~

作者: jiaoguitar    时间: 2012-6-29 01:47
是的,你的简化是对的。所以整句句子的逻辑含义相当混乱。此外,就算Games和proclamation逻辑上能形成对应,也不会是GMAT喜欢的选项,因为其它选项中proclaim出现过动词形式,动词一般都优于抽象名词。
作者: 二楼往下掉    时间: 2012-6-29 22:32
好的,谢谢啦~~~
作者: zyq19911205    时间: 2012-7-18 11:08
是不是说应该用by proclaiming啊?我是觉得在表示 通过一种方法时,by后面一定是doing,with才加名词呢
对么




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