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标题: 新手上路 大家豁出去 拼命拍砖 鞠躬鞠躬 if u have a dream u have to defend it [打印本页]
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-6-27 20:09
标题: 新手上路 大家豁出去 拼命拍砖 鞠躬鞠躬 if u have a dream u have to defend it
20120627独立

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Compared with people who live in cities, people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.



When it comes to the issue that compared with the people who live in cities ,the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families. Taking all the relevant factors---- the timecitizensspending with their family, the distractions which come from theirdaily affairs, the interpersonal relationship in cities. It is not difficult to make the judgement that :people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families .

First and foremost, in cities , people usually are busyengaginginvarious affairs which come from the jobs or daily life---everyday they have deadline to meet ；goals to fulfill; decisions to make ----Obviously ,they lack the time to spend with their families. Undoubtedly, with less time ,citizens can’t take good care of their family, since taking care of family is a matter of time ---that is the more time you spend with your family ,the better you can take care of them.On the opposite, if you don’t have enough time spent with your family, you can’t

talk with them in depth about the obstacles they encounter and provide alternative solutions ;you can’t go abroad to enjoy a wonderful vacation with your family or you can’t participate your family members’ graduation ceremony On the other hand ,people who live in rural areas are more available ----whentheir family members getstuck in their daily life or when the family members are sick and need nurse.

Additionally , people in rural areas have less distractions ,that is ,when decide which way to spend time ,they have limited options –to work on the farm or to stay at home .Unlike the citizens ,they have no cinema ,musem,restaurant or other public facilities .Consequently ,they spend most part of their leisure time charting or playing with their families .This can be demonstrated by the undeniable fact that in the cities ,children often feel lonely and turn to the internet gamesto search the sense of belonging during fighting with the virtual enemies . Whereas ,in the rural areas ,children often have outdoor activities such as hiking ,skiing or jogging with their family members . MoreoverTherefore ,in this case ,people in rural areas can take better care of their families .



All these illustrations point out that :with enough time ,less distractions building from the daily affairs , people who live inrural areas can take better care of their family than the people who live in cities do .

作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-6-27 20:09
这是 我第一次写作文帖子
作者: Crystaljoy    时间: 2012-6-27 22:47
鼓励一个！实力派！
看看写作小分队大本营的帖子~welcome
作者: tyyhappy    时间: 2012-6-28 14:32
蓝色是疑问，红色是修改，黄色是高亮。

When it comes to the issue that compared with the people who live in cities, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families. Taking all the relevant factors---- the time citizens spending with their family, the distractions which come from their daily affairs, the interpersonal relationship in cities（这个排比好啊）(但是这个句子结构无谓语哪). It is not difficult to make the judgement（judgment） that: People who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.
First and foremost, in cities , people usually are busy engaging in various affairs which come from the jobs or daily life---everyday they have deadline to meet ；goals to fulfill; decisions to make ----Obviously ,they lack the time to spend with their families. Undoubtedly, with less time ,citizens can’t take good care of their family, since taking care of family is a matter of time ---that is the more time you spend with your family ,the better you can take care of them. On the opposite, （连词很舒服）if you don’t have enough time spent with your family, you can’t talk with them in depth about the obstacles they encounter and provide alternative solutions; you can’t go abroad to enjoy a wonderful vacation with your family or you can’t participate your family members’ graduation ceremony.（例子读起来很舒服） On the other hand, people who live in rural areas are more available ----when their family members get stuck in their daily life or when the family members are sick and need nurse.
(论证过程严谨)
Additionally , people in rural areas have less distractions ,that is ,when decide which way to spend time ,they have limited options –to work on the farm or to stay at home .Unlike the citizens, they have no cinema, musem(museum), restaurant or other public facilities .Consequently ,they spend most part of their leisure time charting or playing with their families .This can be demonstrated by the undeniable fact that in the cities ,children often feel lonely and turn to the internet games to search the sense of belonging during fighting with the virtual enemies . Whereas, in the rural areas, children often have outdoor activities such as hiking, skiing or jogging with their family members . Moreover Therefore(?两个词连着用) ,in this case ,people in rural areas can take better care of their families .
All these illustrations point out that: with enough time, less distractions building from the daily affairs, people who live in rural areas can take better care of their family than the people who live in cities do.

To chenglu

Happy水平有限，chenglu悠着点看嘞。

Chenglu的结构是总分分总，用词和句式变化很多样，是happy学习的榜样。

但是格式上，chenglu用的是先标点再空格，不知道是粘贴的问题还是chenglu没有注意了，我粘到word里面都是先空格后标点。

思路探讨：1他们被很多事情牵绊着不能陪伴家人2他们的干扰很少空余时间很多。只看中心句子会觉得两个议论点有些相近。我觉得第一点再强调下是被城市里繁忙的工作所牵绊，第二点在陈列观点的时候再强调：他们被城市里的很多娱乐休闲文体活动所吸引。
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-6-28 17:52
谢谢 happy的修改  新晋队长哦~  撒花撒花 支持支持
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-6-28 21:05
标题: 6.28独立作文 求狠拍
 Have you ever reviewed your previous examination paper for the approaching test? Have you ever seen the international companies analize their past experience while handling current business affairs?Have you ever recognized that scientists base their theories on observation before?If you haven't, you never know how significant it is to review the past for the sake of finding solutions of the current and future problems .

First and foremost ,learning from the past helps us predict the future ,consequently,being aware of the possible situation in the future assist us in solving the problems of the present and future .A small example can give some light to this point :when decide whether a newly-developed car is worthy putting into the maket ,the company will take all relevant information, which concluded by their previous maket researches ,into consideration ,then make a SWOT Analasis, that is analyzing the Strength,Weakness,Opportunity,Threat the company will encounter in the car's Launch  hase.Undoubtedly ,after deliberating the past experience,companies can predict some of the difficulties that may arise in the future and in this way the company  can be better prepared for them.
 Another priority of reviewing past is that everthing happening today stems from the past and will have direct effect in the future ,understanding our history aid us  in  avoiding old mistakes and make wise decisions .This can be demonstrated by the undeniable fact that when human beings are suffering from the Green House effect---rising sea level ,higher tempreture ,serve natural disasters,in the attempt to reveal the reasons behind this phenomenon,scientists gather the former meteorological data and compare it with the current data ,then they make the judgment that it is the green house gas emited by human activities and the hole in the ozone result in this effect.Afterwards,several  countries reach agreement on energy saving and emission reduction  in the Copenhagen Climate Council.Moreover,most countries take measures to protect the ozone layer ---using the substitute fuel and limiting the emission of carbon dioxide. In this way ,the green house effect is remited .Hence ,by studing the past ,we can avoid old mistakes and solve the current and future problems.
 All these illustrations point out that :studying from the past will bear fruit:predicting the future and avoiding old mistakes,at this point,why not review the past to solve the current and future problems ?
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-6-28 21:07
 这次写的够慢的了  查了半天单词
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-6-28 21:13
表沉了哇
作者: 瓜瓜不瓜    时间: 2012-6-29 23:24
6.28独立作文 求狠拍

红色为错误 蓝色为建议 绿色为段落评价 紫色为总评


Have you ever reviewed your previous examination paper for the approaching test? Have you ever seen the international companies analize（拼写错误 analyze） their past experience while handling current business affairs?Have you ever recognized that scientists base their theories on observation before?If you haven't, you never know how significant it is to review the past for the sake of finding solutions of the current and future problems .
（开头段写的太好了！！！！热泪盈眶！！！！比我的好很多很多！！！我想破脑子也没想到这些点！！！赞！！！）

First and foremost ,learning from the past helps us predict the future ,consequently,being aware of the possible situation in the future（这两个动名词短语在逻辑上是前后顺序，但在结构上仍然是并列关系，所以中间加一个and） assist us in solving the problems of the present and future .A small example can give some light to this point :when decide whether a newly-developed car is worthy putting into the maket ,the company will take all relevant information, which concluded by their previous maket researches ,into consideration ,then make a SWOT Analasis（拼写错误analysis）, that is analyzing the Strength,Weakness,Opportunity,Threat the company will encounter in the car's Launch Phase（为什么大写？。。）.Undoubtedly ,after deliberating the past experience,companies can predict some of the difficulties that may arise in the future and in this way the company can be better prepared for them.

Another priority of reviewing past is that everthing happening today stems from the past and will have direct effect in the future ,understanding our history aid us in avoiding old mistakes and make wise decisions .This can be demonstrated by the undeniable fact that when human beings are suffering from the Green House effect---rising sea level ,higher tempreture ,serve natural disasters,（前后是两个完整的句子，改成句号）in the attempt to reveal the reasons behind this phenomenon,scientists gather the former meteorological data and compare it （data是datum的复数，所以是them）with the current data ,then they make the judgment that it is the green house gas emited（emitted） by human activities and the hole in the ozone result in this effect.Afterwards,several countries reach agreement on energy saving and emission reduction in the Copenhagen Climate Council.Moreover,most countries take measures to protect the ozone layer ---using the substitute fuel and limiting the emission of carbon dioxide. In this way ,the green house effect is remited .Hence ,by studing the past ,we can avoid old mistakes and solve the current and future problems.

All these illustrations point out that :studying from the past will bear fruit:（两个冒号的嵌套lulu之前有木有见到过？我木有见到过，所以不知道对不对哈，要是你也不确定的话，可以把第二个冒号改成that的从句）predicting the future and avoiding old mistakes,（一句话已经完了，句号吧）at this point,why not review the past to solve the current and future problems ?

总评：瓜瓜迟到，sorry啦！！！！！第一次互改O(∩_∩)O

         lulu的文章观点和支持的例子 说的理由都很好很好，瓜瓜这篇题目相比就写的好差了╮(╯▽╰)╭
         木有特地高亮精彩，因为觉得整篇文章基本都是复杂句，都用的很好，要划就要划整篇啦！
        但是lulu存在一个问题：就是只讲了两个点，一般都是用五段式，就是讲三个点，所以尽量写到三个点吧，是在想不出第三个观点，可以用一个让步段。4段看起来有点少哦。
        一些小错误瓜瓜都在文章中注明了，这里就不说了哈。一起加油！
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-7-3 17:04
七月四号 独立作业

七月4号 独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past people eat more healthy food than what people have nowadays

   Have you ever eaten fry while sitting in the KFC Have you ever gained weight after eating snacks for couple of days ? Have you ever felt thirsty when you eat the bacon? If you haven’t ,You probably don’t know that in the past people eat more healthy food that what people have nowadays .
           First and foremost ,it is widely acknowledged that as the food reservastion technology develops sharply, the food industry usually  adds various kinds of chemicals which have adverse affects on human body in the food  to extend the food's longevity .This can be demonstrated by the undeniable tragedy that in 2010 ,the ShanDong province of china ,hundreds of babies died of the milk powder which is added excess toxic chemicals used by the producers to lengthen the longevity of the milk powder.On the other hand ,in the past ,people feed their babis on breast milk. In this point ,undoubtedly,compared with the man-made milk powder ,the breast milk is much healthier,consequently ,the babies who are  fed on the breast milk will have a stronger body than the babies who are fed on the milk powder.

Additionally ,owing to the unhealthy food such as the potato chips、chocolate and cheese cakes which contain not  nutriments  but lots of fats and salt,current people constantly suffer from  obesity 。According a research conducted by the World Health Organizaiton ,in 2011 the number of people who are attacked by disease such as high blood pressure and hyperlipemia is twice the number of people who live  in 1990.Obviously,the unhealthy food which contains   quantities of chemical additive and fat  contributes to the  high blood pressure and the hyperlipemia .Let's trace to the past ,people often cooked their food in a healthy way ,that is ,the food was usually steamed or boiled by the water with proper  amount of oil.In this way,thus ,in the past people eat healthier food than people do now.

All these illustrations point out that :with lower salt ,fat and less chemical addtive,  cooked in a  healthy way ,the food  people live in the past have  is much healthier  than what people have nowadays .
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-7-3 18:15
综合TPO19
The speaker contradicts the statement in the text that owing to several adverse reasons  the buzzing tactic should be banned.He states that the reasons given in the passage are misleading.
To begin with,the lecturer contends that unlike the ordinary advertisement ,the buzzer, for example, the speaker actually has used the phone service and he is really fond of this  service .Thus ,the company hires him to serve as the buzzer and tell the truth of his feeling about this service .The reading ,however,by contrast asserts that since the buzzers are paid to advertise the products ,they  tend to tell incorrect information of the products as the ordinary Ads do.

The second reason suggested in the passage, that people will be less critical  about the buzzers‘ words and believe most of what the buzzers say , is rejected by the speaker. According to the lecturer ,he claims that people like to ask a lot of questions about the products or service  while talking with the buzzers , such as: how much  is the price ? how is the service? how long have you used it?If the buzzer can not provide the answers to these questions,people won't believe the buzzers and they won't buy the service or products which the buzzers are buzzing .

The speaker also chanlleges the final point of the passage ,that since buzzing is misleading and unreliable ,after awaring the presence of  the buzzers,people  tend not to trust others so that buzzing harm the social    relationship among people .On the opposite ,the lecturer contends that since the company will hire the buzzers for the products which is of high quality.The speaker ,a buzzer ,has a high oppinoin of the phone service after using it .Therefore ,the people he  buzzs also will  have good experience while using the service.Hence , it turns out that people tends to  be more trustful and opening to each other .
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-7-4 22:10
标题: 七月五号 独立
七月5号 独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High school students should take a course on basic economics.
Have you ever felt confused about the complex statistics of the anual economic development report ? Have you ever had a hard time understanding the relashionship between the inflation and the unemployment
rate?Have you ever found it difficult to deal with our financial problems ? If you haven't ,you never know how significant it is for high school students to take a course on basic economics .

First and foremost ,as the society is  put forward by the economic development ,the knowledge on basic economics  gradually plays an critical  role when people handle their financial problems .This can be
demonstrated by the undeniable fact that in the world finacial crisis of 2008,many pleople suffered from bankruptcy ,while some people recouped the capital outlay timely and ,consequently,survived in this
depression.When we research this phenomenon in depth  , it turns out  that the financial sense based on the basic economics protects them from the bankrutcy ,because they conbine their  observation on the past
economic law with the principles of basic economics ,then judge the proper time to withdraw capital.

Additionally,studying basic ecomomics benefits the students' ability to reason logically ,which will be of great importance throughout their academic career.A small example will give some light to this point , after
taking basic economics in high school,I have a comprehensive understanding of the business ,accounting and statistics , which help me   analyze various academic puzzles smoothly and make the conclusion
independenly after taking all relevant information into consideration and reasoning logically  .
Last but not the least,according to a research conducted by the national education organization ,compared with students who don't take basic economics course in high school,the students who have taken the
course in high school  tend to be more rigorous when dealing with the problems they encounter in their study.

Admittedly ,some people may against my point of view for the reason that the high school students have egaged in so many courses--English ,chemistry ,math and so forth .Hence ,their burden will be heavier after taking the basic ecnomicx.Nevertheless ,in the long term, undoubtedly, they will feel thankful to have take it when they find that the knowledge on basic econimics benefit them in various aspects---they can easily understand the complex statistics data,they have a thorough financial plan ,they can take a deeper consideration when come across problems .
All these illustrations point out that high school student should take a course on  basic economics in order to enhance their ability to handle financial problems in the future and help them to foster the habit of logical
reasoning .
作者: 包子不包子    时间: 2012-7-5 07:15
七月4号 独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past people eat more healthy food than what people have nowadays

Have you ever eaten fry while sitting in the KFC Have you ever gained weight after eating snacks for couple of days ? Have you ever felt thirsty when you eat the bacon? If you haven’t ,You probably don’t know that in the past people eat more healthy food that what people have nowadays .

First and foremost ,it is widely acknowledged that as the food Preservastion technology develops sharply, the food industry usually adds various kinds of chemicals which have adverse affects on human body in the food to extend the food's longevity .This can be demonstrated by the undeniable tragedy that in 2010 ,the ShanDong province of china ,hundreds of babies died of the milk powder which is added excess toxic chemicals used by the producers to lengthen the longevity of the milk powder.On the other hand ,in the past ,people feed their babis on breast milk. In this point ,undoubtedly,compared with the man-made milk powder ,the breast milk is much healthier,consequently ,the babies who are fed on the breast milk will have a stronger body than the babies who are fed on the milk powder.怎么从食物讲到母乳了 有些片面了

Additionally ,owing to the unhealthy food such as the potato chips、chocolate and cheese cakes which contain not nutriments but lots of fats and salt,current people constantly suffer from obesity 。According a research conducted by the World Health Organizaiton ,in 2011 the number of people who are attacked by disease such as high blood pressure and hyperlipemia is twice the number of people who live in 1990.Obviously,the unhealthy food which contains quantities of chemical additive and fat contributes to the high blood pressure and the hyperlipemia .Let's trace to the past ,people often cooked their food in a healthy way ,that is ,the food was usually steamed or boiled by the water with proper amount of oil.In this way,thus ,in the past people eat healthier food than people do now.

All these illustrations point out that :with lower salt ,fat and less chemical addtive, cooked in a healthy way ,the food people live in the past have is much healthier than what people have nowadays .

加一个让步段吧 或者在正面写一段 这样感觉有些短了
感觉第一个论证不够充分 可以局普遍一些的例子 can food colored food之类的
句型再多遍些哦~
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-7-5 12:23
恩 谢谢包子的修改  第三个正面点 我再想想哈
作者: kchszy061ban    时间: 2012-7-5 20:34
蓝色为意见或建议高亮为精彩绿色为总结红色为错误
The speaker contradicts the statement in the text that owing to several adverse reasons  the buzzing tactic should be banned.He states that the reasons given in the passage are misleading.

To begin with,the lecturer contends that unlike the ordinary advertisement ,the buzzer, for example, the speaker actually has used the phone service and he is really fond of this service .Thus ,the company hires him to serve as the buzzer and tell the truth of his feeling about this service .The reading, however,by contrast asserts that since the buzzers are paid to advertise the products ,they tend to tell incorrect information of the products as the ordinary Ads do.

The second reason suggested in the passage, that people will be less critical about the buzzers‘ words and believe most of what the buzzers say, is rejected by the speaker. According to the lecturer, he claims that people like to ask a lot of questions about the products or service while talking with the buzzers, such as: how much is the price ? how is the service? how long have you used it? If the buzzer can not provide the answers to these questions, people won't believe the buzzers and they won't buy the service or products which the buzzers are buzzing .

The speaker also chanlleges the final point of the passage, that since buzzing is misleading and unreliable, after awaring the presence of the buzzers, people tend not to trust others so that buzzing harm the social relationship among people. On the opposite, the lecturer contends that since the company will hire the buzzers for the products which is of high quality. The speaker, a buzzer, has a high oppinoin of the phone service after using it. Therefore, the people he buzzs also will have good experience while using the service. Hence, it turns out that people tends to be more trustful and opening to each other.
不错，不错，很完美的说。

作者: 包子不包子    时间: 2012-7-6 06:48
7.5

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High school students should take a course on basic economics.

Have you ever felt confused about the complex statistics of the anual economic development report ? Have you ever had a hard time understanding the relashionship between the inflation and the unemployment
rate?Have you ever found it difficult to deal with our financial problems ? If you haven't ,you will never know how significant it is for high school students to take a course on basic economics .

First and foremost ,as the society is put forward by the economic development ,the knowledge on basic economics gradually plays an critical role when people handle their financial problems .This can be
demonstrated by the undeniable fact that in the world finacial crisis of 2008,many pleople suffered from bankruptcy ,while some people recouped the capital outlay timely and ,consequently,survived in this
depression.When we research this phenomenon in depth , it turns out that the financial sense based on the basic economics protects them from the bankrutcy ,because they conbine their observation on the past
economic law with the principles of basic economics ,then judge the proper time to withdraw capital.

Additionally,studying basic ecomomics benefits the students' ability to reason logically ,which will be of great importance throughout their academic career.A small example will give some light to this point , after
taking basic economics in high school,I have a comprehensive understanding of the business ,accounting and statistics , which help me analyze various academic puzzles smoothly and make the conclusion
independenly after taking all relevant information into consideration and reasoning logically .
Last but not the least,according to a research conducted by the national education organization ,compared with students who don't take basic economics course in high school,the students who have taken the
course in high school tend to be more rigorous when dealing with the problems they encounter in their study.

Admittedly ,some people may against my point of view for the reason that the high school students have egaged in so many courses--English ,chemistry ,math and so forth .Hence ,their burden will be heavier after taking the basic ecnomicx.Nevertheless ,in the long term, undoubtedly, they will feel thankful to have take it when they find that the knowledge on basic econimics benefit them in various aspects---they can easily understand the complex statistics data,they have a thorough financial plan ,they can take a deeper consideration when come across problems .

All these illustrations point out that high school student should take a course on basic economics in order to enhance their ability to handle financial problems in the future and help them to foster the habit of logical
reasoning .

很好啊 基本没有小错误~~
感觉benefits the students' ability to reason logically 这一点的论述不够细致充分
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-7-15 21:18
标题: 7 ---15独立作文
七月15 独立作文
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that the most important problems in today’s world will be
solved in our lifetime.
   Have you ever seen in Africa millions of people are suffering from poverty and diseases ?Have ever watched the
news on the fact that  every year thousands of people died of  Middle East Affairs ? Have you ever found that the
sea level are rising continuously due to the green house effect？If you have,you'll definitely stand on my point of
view that the most important problems in today's world will not be solved in our lifetime .
  First and foremost , war ---one of the most important problems in current world ----is caused by the never ending
race of human's desire,which cannot be solved in our lifetime only if our human beings' s appetite for wealth and
resources exsits .This can be demonstrated by the undeniable fact that in 1840 ,China was invaded by the Eight -
Power Allied Forces ,which provoked the Opium War.Obviously ,the reason of this was is that the Eight-Power
Allied Forces were longing for China's abundont resources on wealthy and natural aspects .Only after satisfying
these invaders' reqiurements on money and resources such as coal ,mines,and cultural relics can the war ended
Moreover,the current war in the world are caused by various reasons on territory ,coal fuel and commercial events
,which are far more  complex than are the reasons of the  war in the past and, thus, difficult to solve in our lifetime.
  Additionally,the issue of enviromental problems remains unsolved since the rapid economic development in
recent years brings by-products---Green house effect ,harsh natural disasters and distinction of animals .That is--as
long as the industrial keep developing ,the enviromental problems caused by this development will remain
unsolved .  An example can give some light to this point ,China is now facing serious enviromemt problems
.According to some news reports ,Yellow River ,the mother river of the Chinese nation that nurtured generations of
Chinese people over the past thousands of years ,has been polluted by industrial wastes and has much less stream
of water at present  than in  previous times ,which has imposed great problems on the life and work of the people
living along the banks .Since these problems are accompanied by the boom of technology and industry ,and will stiil exsist if our society keeps moving forward .
  Admittedly,some people may refute my point of view by citing fact that many measures have been taken in attempt to solve these problems ----Limitation of green house gas release, improvement of enviroment friendly products and  conferences hold for world Peace .Nevertheless,these measures are not enough ,because the most important problems of today's world involve a variety of conflict of interest such as the polarization of the poor and the rich and the trade gap of different countries ,which are so complex that can't be solved in our lifetime .
  All these illustrations point out that the most important problems can't be solved in our lifetime .
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-7-16 22:39
7月16日 独立
Do you agree or disagree, the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/ her personality or charactor？
Does a child look mature after wearing a tie? Does a criminal in a suit act gentlely? Does a beggar appear to be elegant
when dresses well? The answers to these question is  definitely :no,which suggests that the way a person  dressed can't serve
as a good indication of his or her personality .
First and foremost ,during people's lifetime ,their personality will be stable ,meanwhile ,the way they dress will vary in
different stage.In this way ,how can the the way people dress indicate what kind of personality they have ? A small example
will give some light to this point ,when I was a teenager ,I wanted to be stand out from others,thus ,I tended to dress
clothes in  punk style ,which made me look unique from my peers and my friends even thought I was a Rebellious girl while in
fact I'm not . However, as a adult now ,I just want to be dress a comfortable way ,such as T-shirt,jeans .Obviously,my
personality rarely changes during my teenage and adulthood ,I'm still a  gentle girl even in  punk clothes.Hence judging
people's personality from the way they dress ,because people may change the way they dress depending on which stage they are
in,meanwhile their personality  remains the same .
 Additionally ,judging people's personality or characteristic from the way they dress is superficial ,since the way people
dress reveals not their personality but their dressing tastes. This can be demonstrated by the undeniable fact that a skirt
which has been manufactured in quantities can be sold to various people who  differ in characteristics ,personality or
interest.One thing is sure that these people who buy the same skirt share the same dressing taste .Therefore ,if people dress
the same way ,it is unconvincing and superficial  to make the judgement that they have similar characteristics or
personality.

 All these illustrations point out that :due to the variability of people's dressing style in different stage and the
superficial aspect what the way a man dresses can reflect, the way a person dressed is not a good indication of his or her
charactor or personality.
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-7-23 19:25
标题: 七月23 综合 tpo14
The speaker actually contradicts the advantages of the salvage logging , she contends that the salvage logging will harm the forest in long term and the economy benifits of the salvage logging is questionable.

To begin with ,according to the lecturer ,she claims that removing the dead trees is unneccessary and can't provide right conditions for the new trees' growth. Because the decomposition of the dead trees can benefit the future generation trees ,moreover ,after removing the dead trees ,the soil may lack the nutritients which released by the decomposition and are benifital for the new generation's growth,the reading passage ,by contrast ,asserts that removing the dead trees can make room for new generation growth ,which help the forest recover from the disaster.

The second point of the text ,that salvage logging minimize the dangers of insect infestation such as the spruce bark beetles ,thus benifiting the health of the forest,is also rejected by the professor .She is of the view that the decaying wood provides indeed habitat to the harmful insects ,nevertheless ,it also provides habitat to the birds and insects which are very important to the long term health of the forest.Moreover ,she also cites fact that the spruce bark bettles has exsited for last hundred years without causing major damage to the forest .Therefore ,by removing the dead trees ,the salvage logging will do more harm to the forest than the harmful insects do .

The speaker also chanlleges the final point of the reading regarding the economic benifits of the salvage logging .She argues that the economic benefits of salvage logging is small and not long lasting .because the forest can only be salvaged at a very high cost such as the helicopters which are expensive to maintain .Furthermore ,the additional jobs provided by the salvage logging is temporary,and jobs usually are filled by the outsiders who are skilled with more professional training than the local residents .
作者: chenglu9066    时间: 2012-7-23 20:18
标题: 7月24 综合
In the lecture ,the professor rejects the measureswhich usedto control the introduced species ---cane toadproposed in the passage ,shecontends that these measures are unnecessary and will cause enviromental damage .

To begin with ,the statement made in the text ,that by constructing a national fence ,advanceof the cane toal will be prevented from moving into those parts of Australia that they hagve not colonized ,is rejected by the speaker.She points out that no matter where the national fence located ,there still are streams and rivers ,which carry the young cane toad and the eggs to the other side of the fence .Therefore ,the national fence can't stop the advance of the toads towards the regions which they haven't colonized.

In addition,according to the lecturer,she asserts that the untrained volunteers may damage the native frogs by mistake because without professional traning it is difficult for them to tell apart between toads and native frogs especially when they are young.The reading ,by contrast,claims that with the help of organized vollunteer campaign ,the cane toad will be captured easily and thus theirpopulation will be destroyed .

The professor also chanlleges the final point of the reading material ,that by introducing a special designed virus which won't harm most of the infected species but only harm the cane toads ,the population of the cane toads will be controled since the mature and reproducing process are damaged .She argues that this kind of virus may harm cane toads which are native species in American and part of which are endangered .because the cane toads is introduced species in Australia while in American they are native species .Moreover ,through the transtion between Australia and American thesecane toads which are infected by thedesigned virus will infect the cane toads of American which are native species in American and part of the ecosystem .This will harm the ecosystem of American
















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