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作者: babaxiong 时间: 2012-6-17 16:00
标题: babaxiong的作文贴，求狠拍，求鄙视！
作文一直是我的软肋。
我的水平不是一般的差，一战是两篇都是F，基本通篇的是单句。自己看的都有想死的感觉啊
二战， 想为自己奋斗一次，不管最后结果怎样，只求自己不后悔
加油加油加油！！！
作者: babaxiong 时间: 2012-6-17 16:09
6月17日 独立
6月17日110115 NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The main role of a university professor is to educate students rather than to do research.
There is a controversy nowadays about what is the main role of university professors. Should they pay more attention on research or concentrate on educating. Someone who advocate the former said that, professors do lots of research can help promoting the technology in their field, improving the develop of whole society. And the advanced knowledge also benefits students. Besides, these research consequences help them research the forward in their field, too. While I am opposes that opinion. My perception is sufficient discuss as follows
To begin with, educating is the fundamental obligation to professors. Professors have obviously influence on students thinking and their performs. University hire them are aim to education students, research is just listed at the second place. Without their teaching, it is difficult for students to understand the deep theory, and also have difficult in know about the complex experiments. Professors not only teach students knowledge, they also educate the idea and the method about a field. What's more, the education during university is play important role in students’ future career, and also has significant impact on the whole society's development. Do not like the education in high schools, the knowledge gained form university are directly connect with the careers students choose in future. Imagine that, if all university professors just concentrate on research, and do not pay attention on educating, what will our society be? It must have negative influence on cultivate talents.
Another equally significant view is that, educating not only benefit students but also have positive impact on professors themselves. They could inspired with new ideas which are inquired from their students, and on the other hand professors can find assistants in their students, helping them to do research efficiently. For instance, one of Chinese famous agriculture scientist, Yuan Longpin, found several assistants form his students. And the truth, inventing the methods of increasing gripes production, proof that they are help a lot in research.
To sum up, as a professor, even though, research is vital to him or her, education is the fundamental obligation. He or she must pay more attention on it.
作者: kchszy061ban 时间: 2012-6-18 17:53
There is a controversy nowadays about what is the main role of university professors. Should they pay more attention on research or concentrate on educating. Someone who advocate the former said that, professors do lots of researches can help promoting the technology in their field, improving the development of the whole society. And the advanced knowledge also benefits students. Besides, these research’s consequences help them research the forwardin their field, too. While（but） I am opposes that opinion. My perception is sufficiently discussed as follows
To begin with, educating is the fundamental obligation to professors. Professors have obviously influence on students’ thinking and their performs. University hires them are aiming to educate students, research is just listed at the second place. Without their teaching, it is difficult for students to understand the deep theory, and also have difficult in knowing about the complex experiments. Professors not only teach students knowledge, they also educate the idea and the method about a field.What's more, the education during university is playing important role in students’ future career, and also has significant impact on the whole society's development. Do not like the education in high schools, the knowledge gained form university are(is) directly connect(ed) with the careers students choose in future. Imagine that, if all university professors just concentrate on research, and do not pay attention on educating, what will our society be? It must have negative influence on cultivating talents.
Another equally significant view is that, educating not only benefit students but also have positive impact on professors themselves. They could inspired with new ideas which are inquired from their students, and on the other hand professors can find assistants in(from) their students, helping them to do research efficiently. For instance, one of Chinese famous agriculture scientists, Yuan Longpin, found several assistants form his students. And the truth, inventing the methods of increasing gripes production, proofs that they are help(contribute) a lot in the research.
To sum up, as a professor, even though, research is vital to him/her, education is the fundamental obligation. He/she must pay more attention on(to) it.
1.xiao xiong 你要注意时态和动名词的应用，写完以后就检查一下，或者看看toefl语法什么的额；
2.然后xiaoxiong文章的内容逻辑的处理还是很好的，保持下去然后再提高会很好的；
3.主次分明，要是再加上一些例子和例子和主题句之间的衔接词，文章的整体连贯性会好很多。
然后，不好意思，改晚了额。
作者: kchszy061ban 时间: 2012-6-18 20:50
多谢xiaoxiong的修改额，辛苦了！ 对啊，我就是在有些地方定冠词用的不准确。逻辑都是G的作文给逼出来的了。 一起加油，
作者: babaxiong 时间: 2012-6-18 21:08
谢谢你给我的修改啊~~~你的修改真的对我很有用，自己检查真的检查不出来。我的作文真的很差~~唉~~~软肋啊
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