1. The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania affords the visitor with unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
(A) The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania affords the visitor with unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
(B) The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania permits the visitor unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
(C) The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania gives the visitor the unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees without telephoto lenses.
(D) The visitor to the Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania has the unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses
（E）Even without the aid of telephoto lenses, the visitor to Tanzania’s Lake Manyara Park has an unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees.
选E。理由是A，B，C，D中without the aid of telephoto lenses放在修饰混乱
1. The failing of the book lies not in a lack of attention to scientific detail but in the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that reduce the credibility of the work.
(A) the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that
(B) fact that it depicts marine world scenes of life and death as having emotional overtones that
(C) depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones
(D) depiction of marine world scenes of life and death, which have emotional overtones and thus（A）
(E) fact that if depicts scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones
选A，但是A中的with短语也有同样的修饰毛病啊
请教这里什么情况下修饰是不合理的，什么时候又是合理的
第一题主要存在play这个动词，这样中without the aid of telephoto lenses不知做play状语还是photograph，会产生歧义，如lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.尽量避免歧义，故选E.
第二题with emotional overtones 也可产生歧义the marine world with emotional overtones，而实际with emotional overtones应该修饰the depiction ，不过这题不大好避免歧义emotional overtones有that定语从句修饰，不能紧跟depiction，只能置后。且5个中选最优也只有A可选。
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