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标题: 【Rock Toefl】写作小分队 一战打酱油飘过 接下来的人生要认真对待 [打印本页]

作者: 雅宝2011    时间: 2012-5-14 15:06
标题: 【Rock Toefl】写作小分队 一战打酱油飘过 接下来的人生要认真对待
  【Rock Toefl】写作小分队 一战打酱油飘过 接下来的人生要认真对待  

勤学如春起之草     不见其长而日见其长

辍学如磨刀之石     不见其损而日有所亏

【加油!加油!】


作者: 超级无敌小鹤鹤    时间: 2012-5-14 15:07
加油加油!
作者: 晨依Jacqueline    时间: 2012-5-14 18:58
来给亲爱的加油~
作者: tyyhappy    时间: 2012-5-15 16:31
雅宝童鞋,木有看到你的作文哎····晚上不一定有空批改,可能要明天才能给你改出来哪。
作者: 雅宝2011    时间: 2012-5-15 19:30
雅宝童鞋,木有看到你的作文哎····晚上不一定有空批改,可能要明天才能给你改出来哪。
-- by 会员 tyyhappy (2012/5/15 16:31:49)



happy,等下就交哦,要是晚上你来不及改明天也行啊。我第一次写所以慢了些,是不是在10点半之间粘上去。。
作者: tyyhappy    时间: 2012-5-15 22:10
雅宝童鞋,木有看到你的作文哎····晚上不一定有空批改,可能要明天才能给你改出来哪。
-- by 会员 tyyhappy (2012/5/15 16:31:49)




happy,等下就交哦,要是晚上你来不及改明天也行啊。我第一次写所以慢了些,是不是在10点半之间粘上去。。
-- by 会员 雅宝2011 (2012/5/15 19:30:24)


是这个样子的,应该是昨天晚上的10:30交14号的作业哈,
今儿交的是15号的作业^_^不过你写哪个我就批哪个咯^_^
作者: 雅宝2011    时间: 2012-6-21 18:52
Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

If the question asked was whether or not an action that is quickly taken is always wrong, and required an absolute yes-no answer, I think the answer had to be a resounding “no”. While patience can be important and necessary, there are many actions that are best suited to impulsive, spontaneous outcomes.

In a sense, we are living in an age when the “jungle law” and the “survival of the fittest” rule prevail. The burning desire for fortune or status may all be the driving forces behind competition. Under that fiercely competition, people always have no time to make more preparations because the opportunity never waits you. Therefore, the urge to win can compel us to take action immediately without patience.

At the same time, taking action promptly is necessary on the way to success. People who get too caught-out in careful planning often find themselves unable to make decisions. They choose patience and are looking for more and more information in order to make a well informed assessment, but they are taking along. For example, the CEO who plans the moves of his company cautiously so as to minimize the possibility of failure faces tough competition in the business world. In order to stay ahead of his rivals he will take actions on the fly to beat out competing companies.

With that said, there are, of course, situations which do require patience to make sound thougts and considerations before taking an action. For instance, as for me, buying an apartment or a house is a very big decision to make. In this circumstance, I would not make a choice without careful evaluation of all of the information available.

While sometimes patience may be a good strategy, actions can be taken slowly and still be correct. But I know ,if I had to carefully choose patience rather than take action ,I would never get anything accomplished.
作者: 雅宝2011    时间: 2012-6-21 19:00
这篇作文的题目觉得把握的很差,模仿了关于是计划周密后做决定还是坚决果断的采取行动方面的作文,觉得写的很混乱,求猛拍,求这个题目的思路!
作者: 包子不包子    时间: 2012-6-21 19:40
Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

If the question asked was whether or not an action that is quickly taken is always wrong, and required an absolute yes-no answer, I think the answer had to be a resounding “no”. While patience can be important and necessary, there are many actions that are best suited to impulsive, spontaneous outcomes.

In a sense, we are living in an age when the “jungle law” and the “survival of the fittest” rule prevail. The burning desire for fortune or status may all be the driving forces behind competition. Under that fiercely competition, people always have no time to make more preparations because the opportunity never waits you. Therefore, the urge to win can compel us to take action immediately without patience.

At the same time, taking action promptly is necessary on the way to success. People who get too caught-out in careful planning often find themselves unable to make decisions. They choose patience and are looking for more and more information in order to make a well informed assessment, but they are taking along. For example, the CEO who plans the moves of his company cautiously so as to minimize the possibility of failure faces tough competition in the business world. In order to stay ahead of his rivals he will take actions on the fly to beat out competing companies.

With that said, there are, of course, situations which do require patience to make sound thougts and considerations before taking an action. For instance, as for me, buying an apartment or a house is a very big decision to make. In this circumstance, I would not make a choice without careful evaluation of all of the information available.

While sometimes patience may be a good strategy, actions can be taken slowly and still be correct. But I know ,if I had to carefully choose patience rather than take action ,I would never get anything accomplished.

包子感觉除了两个论点有些相似
其他都无可挑剔了~~加油!




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