标题: 求助OG语法79解答。。。。 [打印本页] 作者: xly878 时间: 2012-5-9 18:39 标题: 求助OG语法79解答。。。。 79. Defense attorneys have occasionally argued that their clients’ misconduct stemmed from a reaction to something ingested, but in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy, the perpetrators are in effect told that they are not responsible for their actions. (A) in attributing criminal or delinquent behavior to some food allergy, (B) if criminal or delinquent behavior is attributed to an allergy to some food, (C) in attributing behavior that is criminal or delinquent to an allergy to some food, (D) if some food allergy is attributed as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior, (E) in attributing a food allergy as the cause of criminal or delinquent behavior, Logical predication; Idiom Th e original sentence contains a misplaced modifi er. Th e modifying phrase (in attributing …) incorrectly describes perpetrators when it should describe defense attorneys. Th e correct idiom in the active voice is one attributes x (an eff ect) to y (a cause). In the passive voice, x (the eff ect) is attributed to y (the cause). Th e best way to correct the sentence is to transform the modifying phrase into a subordinate clause that uses the idiom correctly: criminal or delinquent behavior (x) is attributed to (verb phrase) an allergy to some food (y). A Misplaced modifi er. B Correct. In this sentence, the modifi cation error has been eliminated with the use of the correct idiom, is attributed to. C Modifi er describes perpetrators, not attorneys; wordy and imprecise. D X is attributed as the cause of y is not the correct idiom. E Modifi er incorrectly describes perpetrators; idiom is misused. Th e correct answer is B.、
原句句子包含了放错位置的修饰成分。修饰短语（in attributing...）不正确地修饰了perpetrators 而实际应修饰 defense attorneys. 正确的习语如果是 主动语态，则为， attributes x (一种效果) to y (一种原因)。如果是被动语态，应为，x(效果) is attributed to y (原因) 改写这句句子最好的方法时将修饰短语转化为正确使用习语的从句，即， criminal or deliquent behavior (x) is attributed to （动词短语）an allergy to some food (y)
A. 修饰成分位置放错 B、正确，在此句句子中，通过正确地使用习语 is attributed to 错误的修饰 被 去除 C、错误1、修饰成分应修饰 attorneys 而不应修饰 perpetrators 错误2、句子表达啰嗦、不准确 D、x is attributed as the cause of y 是不正确的习语 E、错误1、修饰成分错误地修饰了 perpetrators 错误2、习语被错误地使用。
自己的理解 逗号 + but 后 应该是完整的句子 因此分词 in attributing 语法上来说 修饰了 the perpetrators 没错 但是 意思上不对 attributing 这个动作 应为 attorneys 发出 才显得合理！
此题 最绕 最搞的 就是
x(效果) is attributed to y (原因) x和y 相互 倒来倒去 导致错误！！
还有的语法点： n. that is adj. 啰嗦 应为 adj + n. 更简洁
特指优于范指 an allergy to some food 优于 some food allergy