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标题: 【已解决】[老题新问]OG12 SC11 A选项 [打印本页]

作者: qiaowin88637 时间: 2012-4-29 17:47
标题: 【已解决】[老题新问]OG12 SC11 A选项
OG12-11There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
(A) the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid
(B) forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
(C) having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid
(D) to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
(E) that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid
答案D

BCD的错误都很明显，但是A，
OG答案说”the active gerund phase the forming of bricks does not fit with the passive verb phrase that follows (they are laid )“

先不论parallel的问题，
我不明白的是为什么不能fit了，这里的they不可以指代bricks吗？
我知道代词they优先指代主语然后是宾语，但是明显这里的分句主语（method）和宾语（forming）是单数，they不能指代，那么they就应该可以指代宾补bricks了对吗？为什么OG这里说不行呢？

十分困惑啊，跪求各路神仙指点，麻烦了~~

作者: superbat28 时间: 2012-4-29 21:07
Ummm...一家之言哈

我感觉第一个不好，是因为中间有个and，就肯定要考虑到平行的问题。所以，后面是they are laid 是主谓形式，而前面是the forming of bricks... 这个不平行很不舒服。

第二是，they 尽管确实可以指代bricks，但是这个指代太不直接了。就像第一题里也指出，让代词指代【介宾短语中的宾语】，其实是很别扭的。所以这个they指代bricks，就很别扭。。

作者: qiaowin88637 时间: 2012-4-29 21:14

Ummm...一家之言哈

我感觉第一个不好，是因为中间有个and，就肯定要考虑到平行的问题。所以，后面是they are laid 是主谓形式，而前面是the forming of bricks... 这个不平行很不舒服。

第二是，they 尽管确实可以指代bricks，但是这个指代太不直接了。就像第一题里也指出，让代词指代【介宾短语中的宾语】，其实是很别扭的。所以这个they指代bricks，就很别扭。。

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2012/4/29 21:07:35)

谢谢斑斑！！但是这个说法确实太过勉强了。。我查了下manhattan也没有明确的说这种情况they可不可以指代这样的名词，看来这道题只能用平行来排除了

作者: 单调唱 时间: 2012-5-1 16:07

OG12-11There are several ways to build solid walls using just mud or clay, but the most extensively used method has been the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid in the wall in mud mortar.
(A) the forming of bricks out of mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they are laid
(B) forming the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
(C) having bricks formed from mud or clay, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, they were laid
(D) to form the mud or clay into bricks, and, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, to lay them
(E) that bricks were formed from mud or clay, which, after some preliminary air drying or sun drying, were laid

我想问下楼主，the forming of bricks 表达的不应该是bricks形成的过程么。这个过程怎么是method呢？

这个点是问题么？？我也不是很确定~

作者: qiaowin88637 时间: 2012-5-1 16:35
还真是， the forming不是method

我觉得method只能是一个动作状态，裸的名词无法修饰method

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