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作者: paopao    时间: 2004-9-22 09:21
标题: gwd9-17
Q17: E


Unlike most other mergers(兼并,合并) in the utility industry, which have been driven by the need to


save money and extend companies’ service areas, the merger of the nation’s leading gas


and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in


question with states opening their utility markets to competition.


A. and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network for the


utilities in question with states opening


B. and electric companies are intended to create a huge network for marketing the


utilities in question as states open主谓不一致/意思不大一样:as..当。。的时候,而原意表达的是对于那些开放的州的电器


C. and electric companies are intended to create a huge network that will be


marketing the utilities in question, with states opening主谓不一致/时态错


D. company and electric company are intending to create a huge marketing network


for the utilities in question, with states opening主谓不一致


E. company and leading electric company is intended to create a huge network for


marketing the utilities in question as states open表达笨拙且不合规则:leading gas company and leading electric company/不平行



这题的答案是E 我选的是A



请问A为何错了


Eleading gas company and leading electric company错了 重复leading 而且主谓不一致



谢谢



作者: leeon    时间: 2004-9-22 09:25

A中的the merger of  the nation’s leading (gas and electric) company,后面给人的误解是一家公司了,不合逻辑。

E的表达避免了这个问题,表达的没有歧义。


作者: 携隐    时间: 2004-9-22 09:33

主语是the merger,leading...and leading...只是merger后of的内容,核心词还是merger,怎么会有主谓不一致的错误呢。

A的the leading gas and electric company引起歧义,到底是gas和electric都是一个公司在经营呢,还是指两类公司呢?这是第一个修饰不清。如果仅仅改为the leading gas company and electric company,又产生了一个歧义,到底是gas公司是leading的呢,还是两个都leading?所以E是最没有歧义的表达。


作者: paopao    时间: 2004-9-22 09:48

唉 是我糊涂了


谢谢两位


作者: 携隐    时间: 2004-9-22 10:09
怎么我好像老是跟leeon同一时间回贴
作者: leeon    时间: 2004-9-22 10:29
以下是引用携隐在2004-9-22 10:09:00的发言:
怎么我好像老是跟leeon同一时间回贴

偶已经很少在语法区浇水了,没想到一开始就碰上了携隐MM!


作者: sunshining    时间: 2004-10-27 00:50

the blunder in A is 'with nation opening'


作者: tcyj    时间: 2004-11-2 15:39

opening强调动作

应该用as states open强调状态


作者: scorpio0001    时间: 2005-3-10 20:19
以下是引用携隐在2004-9-22 9:33:00的发言:

主语是the merger,leading...and leading...只是merger后of的内容,核心词还是merger,怎么会有主谓不一致的错误呢。


A的the leading gas and electric company引起歧义,到底是gas和electric都是一个公司在经营呢,还是指两类公司呢?这是第一个修饰不清。如果仅仅改为the leading gas company and electric company,又产生了一个歧义,到底是gas公司是leading的呢,还是两个都leading?所以E是最没有歧义的表达。


agree!


作者: skyguard2000    时间: 2005-3-25 01:00
A中with states opening只有放在句首才表示伴随,放在句中表示有(having),逻辑意思不对。
E中as states open表示“随着”,“当……时候”,很好。

作者: ethyl    时间: 2005-5-27 20:47

A中with states opening只有放在句首才表示伴随,放在句中表示有(having),逻辑意思不对。


听起来蛮有意思的哦


还是逻辑意思高那么一点点呀


作者: remona9t    时间: 2005-6-17 17:22

这道题A中的with states opening their utility markets to competition.


用法是正确的吧?表示的是


12used to say what position or state someone or something is in, or what is happening, when someone does something
She stood with her back to me.


We lay in bed with the window open. She was knitting, with the television on.
with somebody/something doing something


We jumped into the water with bullets whizzing past our ears.


---from LDOCE


with 在句尾,表达得也是伴随的意思


A的错误还是在于修饰的歧义




作者: qnzy    时间: 2005-7-16 10:24

应该是be intended for吧。sb. intend to do sth.


作者: 麦麦麦    时间: 2005-12-14 21:45
以下是引用skyguard2000在2005-3-25 1:00:00的发言:
A中with states opening只有放在句首才表示伴随,放在句中表示有(having),逻辑意思不对。
E中as states open表示“随着”,“当……时候”,很好。

请问,这个STATES指什么呢,我做的时候把它当成了UNITED STATES,觉得应该后面跟OPENS,所以就排除了。。。


作者: 麦麦麦    时间: 2005-12-15 12:49

UP


作者: monabluestone    时间: 2006-6-2 17:43
以下是引用remona9t在2005-6-17 17:22:00的发言:

这道题A中的with states opening their utility markets to competition.

用法是正确的吧?表示的是

12used to say what position or state someone or something is in, or what is happening, when someone does something
She stood with her back to me.

We lay in bed with the window open. She was knitting, with the television on.
with somebody/something doing something

We jumped into the water with bullets whizzing past our ears.

---from LDOCE

with 在句尾,表达得也是伴随的意思

A的错误还是在于修饰的歧义


我也觉得with用的对,主要还是修饰歧异的问题.待讨论!


作者: swiss0204    时间: 2006-10-8 01:06

Agreement 先排除BCD, 所以剩 A, E.

個人認為除了choice A 錯誤的原因除了

the nation’s leading gas and electric company

尚有adj 修飾states 錯誤的問題. ( 解釋如下)

 

  1. and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network

for the utilities in question with states opening
            

解釋: opening 已經限定修飾states, 所以易當成 in question with

(opening their utility markets to competition ) States.

這裡的states 已經限定指那些已經opening their utility………..

 

 

E. company and leading electric company is intended to create

a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open

   解釋: Choice E,則是另一個意思, as 作” 當……..” 來解釋, 邏輯上似乎較為合理


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作者: 晴天小狗    时间: 2006-10-29 11:31
不太明白这里AE选项中with和as应该怎么区分
作者: cccccc0    时间: 2007-1-9 17:54

E. company and leading electric company is intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open

中的for marketing the utilities in question怎么解释呢??ETS不是要用to do来表示目的么????我原先看到这个就把E给咔嚓掉了~~


作者: cccccc0    时间: 2007-1-9 20:32
我顶~~
作者: solleks    时间: 2007-1-10 19:47

NN们不来了,呵呵。

不过我觉得A的错误更明显,their utility markets to competition中的there没有逻辑指代对象阿,所以gas和electric应该是两个公司。


作者: dreamalittle    时间: 2007-2-23 22:01

一直没有看懂后半部分是什么意思

is intended to creat a huge,,,in question 是什么意思?


作者: 罗马青年    时间: 2007-6-8 23:34

一直没有看懂后半部分是什么意思,is intended to creat a huge,,,in question 是什么意思?

问:...,the merge of the nation’s leading gas  
                                    
company and leading electric company is intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open
 their utility markets to competition.

个人认为: in question 后置修饰  utilities,因此中文意思为:

当各州向竞争公司开放能源市场时,该国天然气公司和电力公司的合并是为了创造一个大型销售网络,使讨论中的能源市场化。


作者: songyeonpp    时间: 2007-8-23 07:13

in question:相关地,被讨论地,怀疑地

The
                
person, thing, or
                
time
                
in
                
question

                
is
                
one
                
which
                
you
                
have
                
just
                
been
                
talking about
                
or
                
which
                
is
                
relevant.

where is the man in question.

Add up the the income you have received over the period in question.

A 有歧义,因为实际上只有utility被讨论, 可是A却是utility and states opening..都被讨论


作者: songyeonpp    时间: 2007-8-23 07:16

utility industry可以理解为能源工业,比如水电气之类的。

在美国每个月每户需要交utility fee,就是水电气费用的意思。


作者: WD2007    时间: 2007-8-27 12:02

解题思路:

首先是主谓一致问题,主语是the merger 所以谓语是is 排除B D C

然后关注未划线部分的代词 (ETS经常用在这部分给出代词给出正确答案的提示,注意)

出现复数的their A中无法说明其指待什么

E说明了 两个公司 所以选E


作者: fishyyy    时间: 2007-9-16 14:07
以下是引用cccccc0在2007-1-9 17:54:00的发言:

E. company and leading electric company is intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open

中的for marketing the utilities in question怎么解释呢??ETS不是要用to do来表示目的么????我原先看到这个就把E给咔嚓掉了~~

我也是因为这个选了A,哪位NN可以解释一下这个for doing 在这里有没有问题?


作者: JasonTang    时间: 2007-10-17 18:10
To 26楼

their应该指代states吧?
我选择E是因为看到A中的with很别扭。

作者: tangzimo    时间: 2007-10-20 21:01

真是好啊,看以前的人讨论

自己根本不用发帖提问……


作者: fortitude    时间: 2007-10-27 23:55
good
作者: eileenmu木    时间: 2008-2-16 12:56
以下是引用fishyyy在2007-9-16 14:07:00的发言:

我也是因为这个选了A,哪位NN可以解释一下这个for doing 在这里有没有问题?

同问,谢谢!!!
作者: ledazhou    时间: 2008-7-12 13:32

一般来说TO DO 会好多FOR DOING, 但如果没有TO DO 的选项, FOR DOING 也可以,不能说错~


作者: 夜凉如水    时间: 2008-7-19 23:42

貌似有with的地方都会有争议.


作者: laura466    时间: 2009-7-18 15:11

为什么我看不到别人的回复啊。。。


作者: jackieli007    时间: 2009-8-5 13:07
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作者: angelwds    时间: 2009-8-8 13:19
up
作者: seapetal    时间: 2010-6-3 06:30
这题我选的是A。
不知道是不是需要把自己的生活常识带进来。
现在人在美国的缘故,一看到这个题我立马想到平时每月要把电费交到一个叫SDGE的公司,就是gas and electricity company 555555555  误导啊 ,误导啊!
作者: seapetal    时间: 2010-6-3 06:31
ms米国的gas和electricity公司通常是一家公司,而不是分开的gas和electricity公司
作者: miller811    时间: 2010-7-9 16:30
Agreement 先排除BCD, 所以剩 A, E.

個人認為除了choice A 錯誤的原因除了

the nation’s leading gas and electric company

尚有adj 修飾states 錯誤的問題. ( 解釋如下)



    and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network
for the utilities in question with states opening
           

解釋: opening 已經限定修飾states, 所以易當成 in question with

(opening their utility markets to competition ) States.

這裡的states 已經限定指那些已經opening their utility………..





E. company and leading electric company is intended to create

a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open

  解釋: Choice E,則是另一個意思, as 作” 當……..” 來解釋, 邏輯上似乎較為合理

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