1. Like Haydn, Schubert wrote a great deal for the stage, but he is remembered principally for his chamber and concert-hall music.
(A) Like Haydn, Schubert
(B) Like Haydn, Schubert also
(C) As has Haydn, Schubert
(D) As did Haydn, Schubert also
(E) As Haydn did, Schubert also
我的理解:
B,D,E中as also 和like also语意重复,错.
C中的补出助动词不正确.1
但:我认为A也不对, Schubert有两个动作,A的使用表示Haydn也有相同的两个动作如Schubert,但从文章意识上应该是两人在wrote上相同.
因而我觉得若A能改成AsHaydn did, Schubert
可能更好.请NN指正
1 B的错误在于Like和also语义重复;C的错误在于has助动词和wrote不对等,因为has后应补出动词written或done;D的错误同B;
2 原句的意思就是表达了两者在wrote这个动作上的相似性,而没有表达but后的相似性,but后仅仅指S;而且,如果你有这个like误解的话,那么你的as改法也无法消除这个误解。
我同意echochen的看法。A能改成AsHaydn did, Schubert。。。可能更好
但和rt316的2的意见相反:如果用like就是表达两者在wrote以及but后的相似性;如果用as did,则只表示wrote相似,but后面仅仅指S。
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