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作者: perryyu    时间: 2004-9-2 02:54
标题: TWE163, 26自己写的几篇文章。还有4天就考试了。牛牛们帮忙指点指点吧

163. Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. (多伦多)


Recently, the topic, whether the ability to read and write today is more important than it in the past or not has been brought into the focus in my circle of my friend.Depending on my personal experiences, personality type, life style and emotional concern, I would probably say that reading and writing skills indeed are more important today than in the past.In the following dicussion, I would reason and present evidences to support my viewpoint.


No issue is more important than this one that refers to knowledge.Nowadays,the knowleage has became more important than ever.If you want work in a big company, you should have some perfessional skills. Of cause, the ability to read and write is the most basic ability that you must have.However, if you can not read or write, how can you survive in the modern society? Undenialbe facts witness and present many examples as below: First, a person must is able to read every acadamic article and magzine if he work in a company.Second, For  obtaining some knowledges, you have to know how to read the books.Third,to present your skill or knowledge, read and write is also the most efficent way,Don't you the the examples quoted above are very persuasive?


Communication is another chief and key reason that I choose to put here.there are no better illustration can demonstrat the viewpoint. Today, the status of communication in a person' life has been more important than it in the past.How can you enter a good university? You must have a very great score in your school .How can you find a good job?You must past the interview or some kind of test.How can you graduate from a fomous university? You have to pass the examination and do well in your presentation.How could you do such a good job on all these communications? You undoulbedly have to have very good reading and writing ability.THe more clear you can see that, the more deeply you can understand it.


Adimittedly, to some extend,the ability to read and write today seems not very nacessary. Such as people using computer to do lots  of tasks.However, if all of the factors are seriously contemplated, nevertheless, the importance of read  and write in current society carry more weight than the uselessness.So the most strinking conclusion is very obvious.


All in all, the reasons I mentioned above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and hence become more persuasive, we may safely arrive the conclusion that reading and writing skills indeed play a vital role in people's life today.As the matter of fact, Only by having perfessional reading and writing abilities, a person could do successfully what they want to do.



WE 26 It has recently been announced that a new movie theater might be built in you neighborhood. Do you agree or disagre
  


Recently, the topic, whether buid a new movie theater in my neighborhood or not has been brought into focus in my community because our community want buid a new theater and all the people in the community shold vote for the decision.Depending on my personal experience, personality type, life style and emotional concern, I would have to say that build a new theater provide many benifits to all of the neigborhoods.In the following discusion , I would like to reason and provide evdence to support my viewpoint.



No issue is more important than this one that the new theater provids us a new entertainmental way for all people.Thus the new theater gives peole a new choice for their leisure time. Undeniable facts witness and present envidence as follow. Fisrt,The people in the conmmunity can choose a movie which they like and watch them after supper.Second,all the students in the community have a chance to met together and wacth some educational film. Third, retired people can spend their leisure time in the theaterjust for relaxing.Don't you think the examples I presented above are very persuasive?


That  building a new theater would furnish some job for the community is another key and chief reason that I choose to put here.There is no better illustration can demonstrate the standpoint.On the one hand, building a theater needs many workers. On the other hand, waiters , tikets sellers and other kinds of place are also provided after finish the building.Futhermore ,these jobs would give opportunies for the some people who do not have permanent job to make some extra money.The more clearly you can see that , the more deeply you can understand it.


Adimittedly, to some extend, building a theater may cause some demerits , such as making some noises , pollutions or inconveniences during the construction peirod.However, if all the factors are carefully contemplated, nevertheless, the advantages of building a new theater carry more weight than that of disadvantages.So the most striking conclusion is very obvious.


All in all, given the reasons above,which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and hence become more persuasive.We can safely arrive the conlusion that building a new theater is a mature ,sagacious and adviable decision for a community.As the matter of fact, not noly no I perfer to build a new theater in my neighborhood, but also prefer to advise other communities to build a new theater in their neighborhood as possible as I can.




What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer



Currently, the topic , what characteristics should a good parent have has been brought into focus in my circle of my friends because most of us have some complaints of our parents. Depending on my personal experiences, personality type, life style and emotional concern, I would probably say that consideration,communication, encouragement and care are the qualities that a good parent must have. In the following discussion , I would like to reason and present evidence to support my view point.

No issue is more important than this one that these qualities contribute to the understanding between parents and children . Undeniable facts witness and present examples as below: Consideration is the key for parents to know their children. When a problem were caused between two generation, If parents stand on the point of their children, they could easily get a solution. More over, communication plays a vital role for parent to get some massage of their children.Don’t you think the examples quoted above are very persuasive?


That the opinion, which I presented in the first paragraph, makes a positive impact on the growing of children is another chief and key reason I choose to put here. There is no better illustration can demonstrate the standpoint. On the one hand, after children fail to do something because they lack knowledge and experience, to analyze to mistake with them together and encourage them are the most efficient way for children to achieve success. On the other hand, if parents take care of children carefully, both in physical situation and emotional personalities, they could grow up very healthy.The more clear you can see it, the more deeply you can understand it.


Admittedly, to some extend, some other qualities for a good parent are also important, such as respecting the leisure time and personal things of their children. However, if all these factor are carefully contemplated, nevertheless, the advantages of consideration , encouragement, communication and care carry more weight than that of respecting children's leisure time and personal things .So the most striking conclusion is very obvious.


All in all, given the reasons mantioned above, which sometime intertwine to form an organic whole and hence become more persuasive. We may safety arrive the conclusion that consideration , encouragement, communication and care are the mature sagacious and advisable advice to a good parent.As the matter of fact, not only do I prefer to my parent taking care of my by these qualities, but also prefer to advice these method to  parents as many as I can.




作者: perryyu    时间: 2004-9-2 02:57

Borrowing monry from friends would not harm the friendship ,do you agree or disagree?

Reccently, the topic ,that borrowing money from friends would not harm the friendship  has been brought into focus in my circle of my friends because two of my friend become chilly due to some money .Depending my personality , personal experience , life style ,and emotional concern, I would probably disagree the statement. In my following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important than this one that borrowing money from close friends may make people loose trust to each other. The reason is quite simple: after you lend money to your friend ,it is very impoplit(shame-makeing) to ask your friend to give the money back to you. So it is very common to you to suspect your friend that whether he would give the money back to you on time. It frequently occurs in reality. Tom, one of my good friends, borrowed 500 dollars from me last summer and he promised to me he would give me the money back two weeks later. However, after two weeks he did not return the money and pretended nothing happened.Although he gave the money to me in the end, probably after 4 weeks, I do not trust him any more.

That asking your friend for some money would make your friend embarrassed is another chief and key reason that I choose to put here. It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the standpoint. Do you know if you friend can afford the money? Do you know if you friend like to lend the money to you?Do you know if your friend really trust you?In my point of view,people would never think about these factors before they ask their friends for money. And as the results, your friend is embarrassed to get a solution. The more clear you see that , the more deeply you can understand it.

Admittedly, to some extent, there is no denying (doubted) that borrowing money from friends has its own merits.Such as providing convenience and no interest compared to getting some loan from bank. However, if all the factors are contemplated, nevertheless, the disadvantages of borrowing money from friends carry more weight than the some relative advantages. So the most outstanding (striking) conclusion is very obvious (apparent).

All in all, given the reasons mentioned above, which sometimes intertwine (interweave) to form an organic whole and hence become more persuasive, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that borrowing money from friends is not a mature ,sagacious and advisable decision.As the matter of fact,not only do I not prefer to borrow money from friend, but also want to advise my friends not borrowing money from friends as many as I can.


作者: perryyu    时间: 2004-9-2 02:59

Eat at home or purchase in a restuarant?


Recently, the topic, whether eating at home or in the restaurants has been brought into focus in my circle of my friend because when we had a party, we always argued this topic.Depending on my personal experience , personality type , life style and emotional concern, I strongly choose eating at home as my propensity. In the following discussion I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important than this one that eating at home can save money. As a student, the cost of the food undoubtedly is the first condition that I have to seriously think about, and it is very apparent that eating at home cost much lower than purchasing in a restaurant. Undeniable facts witness and present many examples as below: First, a restaurant has to spend big amount of money in the place where it located. Second, the boss of a restaurant must employ some people work for him and the money for their salary is a big part, too. Third, after people eating at restaurants, the tip for the waiter also cost a lot. And we should pay all of this if we eat at a restaurant. Don’t you think the examples quoted above are very persuasive?

That eating at home is healthier is another chief and key reason that I should choose to put here. There is no better illustration than can demonstrate the standpoint. The food outside always cause many diseases .For instance. Tom, one of my best friends who always ate outside in some restaurants, and he always felt bad on his stomach, and just two weeks ago, he was diagnosed that he had a very serious problem of his stomach, and the doctor told him the reason is that the foods of the restaurants to which Tom always went are not clean. The more clearly you can see that, the more deeply you can understand it.

Admittedly, to some extent, there is no denying that eat in the restaurants has its own merits. Such as convenience and relaxing compared with eating at home. However, if all the factors are seriously contemplated, nevertheless, the advantages of eating at home carry more weight than that of eating in a restaurant. So, the most outstanding conclusion is very obvious.

All in all , given the reasons mentioned above , which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and hence become more persuasive. We can safely arrive the conclusion that eating at home is a mature ,sagacious and advisable choice for our daily meal. As a matter of fact, not only do I prefer to eat at home, but also prefer to advise all of my friends that eat at home as possible as they  can.


作者: perryyu    时间: 2004-9-2 03:00

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position. (Toronto)

Recently, the topic, whether building a large factory near my community or not has been brought into the focus in my community because all the people in the community should vote for the decision. Depending on my personal experience, personlity type, life style and emotional concern, I would probably say that to build a large factory in my community could provide(furnish,offer, many benifits.In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important than this one that to build a large factory make a great imparct on the nevenue for the local government.Undeniable facts witness and present many examples as below.First, the company which will built this factory will give the taxe to the local goverment. Sencond,after the factory have finished, it will become work and thus they should give the taxe to government for their profit.Third,the workers also have to give the taxe to the government for their salary.Futher more, all the nevenue that government obtained from the factory would spend on the better living condition for the people in the community. Don't you think the examples quoted above is very persuasive?

That to build a factory would give many opportunities for the people to get a job is another chief and key reason that I choose to put here.There is no better illustration can demonstrate the standpoint.It is undoubtedly that to build the new factory needs many works for the construction.And also have to employ some people for every department in the factory.All of these jobs are conducive for the people who begin to woke in the community.For instance,Tom, one of my best friend,was working in the big factory in his community after he graduated from univercity.And last month, he told my that he was the manager of the department in that factory.The more clearly you can see that , the more deeply you can understand it.

Admittedly, to some extend,to build a new factory in my community would cause some demerit.Such as making some pollution, making some noises during the construction time.However , if all the factors are seriously contemplated, nevertheless, the advantages of building a new factory in my community carry more weight than that of dissadvantages. Therefore, the most striking conlusion are very obvious.

All in all, given the reason mentioned above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and hence become more persuasive,We can safely arrive at the conlusion that to build a new factory is a mature , sagacious and advisable disicion for a community. As the matter of facts, not only do I prefer to build a new factory in my community, but also prefer to advise my friends to approve to build a new factory in their community as many as I can.


作者: perryyu    时间: 2004-9-2 03:09
还想问问大家。这样的模板如果用手写。会比用typing分低吗?我的大字速度还是有点慢。
作者: perryyu    时间: 2004-9-12 11:55

贴得太多了。都没人说话






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