标题: OG12-59 求指点 [打印本页] 作者: danielleydd 时间: 2012-2-15 21:50 标题: OG12-59 求指点 59.The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival's month.
(A)world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival's month (B)world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festival's month (C)world when they proclaimed a sacred truce for the festival month (D) world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month of the festival (E)world by proclamation of a sacred truce that was for the month of the festival
正确答案是D 关于OG的解释，我有几点看不懂，觉得写的很含糊，再次请教
A In that is stilted and overly formal. 这该怎么看，因为句意和语法上都是对的，是不是以后只要看到in that就认为错呢？ D Correct. In this sentence, the conjunction for joins the two clauses correctly and economically. 什么时候该理解for可以用作连词呢？
E Wordy and awkward construction.我感觉E是曲解句意了，但不懂这里说的wordy & awkward在哪里？
作者: kyle7 时间: 2012-2-23 12:42
关于E，是因为用到了proclamation的名词（本可以用动词简洁表达），和选项中的that was 有些多余 关于 in that， 个人认为不是所有的in that 全错，在这道题中如果遇到更简洁的for，使得in that 成为了一个考点 http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_Math/thread-623358-1-1.html?SearchText=in that 希望上一道题的讨论对LZ有帮助～作者: zyq19911205 时间: 2012-7-18 11:15
是不是说应该用by proclaiming啊？我是觉得在表示 通过一种方法时，by后面一定是doing，with才加名词呢 对么