[/quote] en .....You mean mention the Subject again in 插入语部分?是这样的,GMAT语法和表意要求简洁明了,如果重复写成Rising inventories, if (Rising inventories are)not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth
then, it will sound very awkward and wordy!没有这个必要加在插入语。看,if 插入语部分由逗号隔开,显得很清晰。阅读时留意Subject and Veb,找主干会好理解一些! 作者: treewing929 时间: 2012-2-15 06:02
明白, THANKS!!! 很好人!!