3.富含信息量,信息量就是指句子中是自己对文章的诠释,而不是套话,这点要求在特别是在套用新东方的模板的时候,有些模板就是套话,不含信息量,因此可以套在任何一篇文章中,是万能句子,比如:the study reports cited in reasoning abovemust show to be reliable and trustworthy before I can accept anyconclusion the author reaches based upon it .
7) The following is a recommendation from the Board of Directors ofMonarch Books.We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, havingbeen in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a largecustomer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on allsubjects. Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers. Space couldbe made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section, which willprobably become less popular given that the most recent national censusindicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under ageten. Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and bettercompete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to beanswered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have thepredicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions wouldhelp to evaluate the recommendation.
首先分析题目中的逻辑错误:
1)作者认为在Monarch 开一家café 会吸引更多的顾客并且和Regal Books竞争。
2)Opening a café, 商业问题一定要考虑到cost, profit, revenue 这些问题。直接cost就是把少儿区改装成咖啡区的装修花费,间接cost是失去的少儿区。
3)撤销少儿区的原因是the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in thepercentage of the population under age ten.
4)Regal books 和 Monarch 是否comparable
接下来就要安排文章:
首段:可以用自己的话简单陈述一下结论,以及为了得出结论引出的证据,表明有逻辑性错误。
接下来开始安排正文,重点在于如何安排这些逻辑错误
1P,指出census 的问题。 National范围和Monarch 所在地区的差异,而且给的是percentage,不知道exact number,这一点比较常见,在逻辑单题中也有,percentage number 和 exactnumber 永远是两个矛盾的。总之要拉大差异性
2p,作者简单认为openinga café would attract more customers ,
文体稍作改动即可,把正文段的三段内容作总结,用疑问句来质问这些可能出现的错误。比如:1P Does any difference exist between the placewhere the census took place and the district where Monarchy located?
2P Does the author think about thepotential negative effects after the opening cafe?how could the Monarch Books to run a cafewithout a experience of relevant management?
3P Are the Monarch Books comparable to theRegal Books? And, does the Regal Books successfully gain their profit byopening a cafe?