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标题: 问一道prep上的题目 怎么看出encouraged和什么并列,解释里面一会说和stigmatize一会说和decelop [打印本页]

作者: monkeyjjl    时间: 2012-1-20 11:07
标题: 问一道prep上的题目 怎么看出encouraged和什么并列,解释里面一会说和stigmatize一会说和decelop
Ancient hunter-gatherers developed instincts that stigmatized selfishness, and voluntary
cooperation was encouraged as well, whether it be within the group or also with outsiders.
 
(A) selfishness, and voluntary cooperation was encouraged as well, whether it be within the
group or
(B) selfishness, encouraging voluntary cooperation as well, both within the group but
(C) selfishness and also encouraging voluntary cooperation, within the group and
(D) selfishness and they encouraged voluntary cooperation, whether it be within the group or
(E) selfishness and encouraged voluntary cooperation, not only within the group but  
 
考点:?平行对称(Parallelism)、简洁有效(Rhetorical Construction)、指代一致(Agreement)
1) not only…but also…连接的对象一定要平行
2)?主动语态优于被动语态
3)?并列句主语相同,应该省略重复的主语.
 
(A)?使用被动语态(was encouraged…),增加句子的复杂性;whether开头的结构笨拙复杂,且it没有
可以指代的对象.
(B) –ing结构encouraging…作为stigmatized selfness的伴随成分,而从句子的逻辑意思上看,该成

 
 
 
 
分应该跟stigmatized并列;both…but also结构不符合习惯用法.应该改为not only…but also或者
both…and结构
(C) also encouraging和stigmatized不平行
(D)?并列句主句相同,they应该省略;如果一定要用they的话,and前面必须用逗号隔开,构成一个新
的句子;whether…or also结构笨拙复杂,且it没有可以指代的对象
(E)?正确, encouraged同developed构成并列谓语;not only…but also符合习惯用法
作者: sdcar2010    时间: 2012-1-20 11:18
和 stigmatize 并列
作者: monkeyjjl    时间: 2012-1-20 11:22
标题: 如果和develop并列是不是要加豆号,那E选项解释错了?
和 stigmatize 并列
-- by 会员 sdcar2010 (2012/1/20 11:18:00)






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