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作者: langzhiyi 时间: 2012-1-18 07:23
标题: 提问语法问题！
我马上要考gmat了，做了做题有几道不明白的语法。望众大神解答！（低下是正确答案，括号里的事我选的）
辛苦啦！！！

8. GWD28-Q8:
In the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, which more than doubled the country’s size and that brought its western border within reach of the Pacific Ocean.

A. In the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, which more than doubled the country’s size and that brought
B. For about four cents an acre the United States acquired, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, 828,000 square miles, more than doubling the country’s size and it brought
C. With the Louisiana Purchase in 1803, the United States acquired 828,000 square miles for about four cents an acre, more than doubling its size and bringing
D. The United States, in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, for about four cents an acre, acquired 828,000 square miles, more than doubling the country’s size, bringing
E. Acquiring 828,000 square miles in the Louisiana Purchase of 1803, the United States bought it for about four cents an acre, more than doubling the country’s size and bringing

C (my choice d)

30. GWD28-Q30:
Unlike the body’s inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.

A. with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
B. where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
C. with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
D. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
E. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
d (e)

The principal feature of the redesigned checks is a series of printed instructions that the company hopes will help merchants confirm a check’s authenticity, which includes reminders to watch the endorsement, compare signatures, and view the watermark while holding the check to the light.
A. which includes reminders to watch the endorsement, compare signatures, and view
B. which include reminders for watching the endorsement, to compare signatures and view
C. by including reminders for watching the endorsement, comparing signatures, and viewing
D. including reminders to watch the endorsement, comparing signatures and viewing
E. including reminders to watch the endorsement, compare signatures, and view

e(a)
36: GWD-29-Q24
According to recent studies comparing the nutritional value of meat from wild animals and meat from domesticated animals, wild animals have less total fat than do livestock fed on grain and more of a kind of fat they think is good for cardiac health.
A. wild animals have less total fat than do livestock fed on grain and more of a kind of fat they think is
B. wild animals have less total fat than livestock fed on grain and more of a kind of fat thought to be
C. wild animals have less total fat than that of livestock fed on grain and have more fat of a kind thought to be
D. total fat of wild animals is less than livestock fed on grain and they have more fat of a kind thought to be
E. total fat is less in wild animals than that of livestock fed on grain and more of their fat is of a kind they think is
c(b)

Most of Portugal’s 250,000 university students boycotted classes in a one-day strike to protest a law that requires them to contribute $330 a year toward the cost of higher education, previously paying $7 per year.
A. year toward the cost of higher education, previously paying $7 per year
B. year toward the cost of higher education, for which was previously paid $7 per year
C. year, compared to the previously $7 per year, toward the cost of higher education
D. year toward the cost of higher education, instead of the $7 per year required previously
E. year as opposed to the $7 per year required previously for the cost of higher education
d(b)

作者: mahaofei001 时间: 2012-1-18 18:02
最好分帖子问~~满眼望去太多了，，，没情绪解答了~~我先试几个吧。。。

作者: mahaofei001 时间: 2012-1-18 18:22
第一个题。。。D的错误在于more than doubling the country’s size, bringing句后连续两个用逗号隔开的分词。。这个结构很难受的啊。。因为句末的分词结构即便只有一个有时候都很有歧义，何况两个。。谁是谁的原因谁是谁的结果，这样表示太不清楚了。。C的话把这两个分词从功能上平行了，显得比较好些。。。这种方式在OG和prep上有很多题的。还有with这个结果放在句首表主句的伴随。。
给你一个考察点差不多的题，等你回复我答案，我们再讨论这个题
On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender all of the gold they had brought with them.

A. On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
B. With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
C. A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding
D. Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold
E. Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

作者: mahaofei001 时间: 2012-1-18 18:47
出去吃了个橙子，回来继续看题。。。你把题发一堆的形式真心让人揪心。。会有抵触情绪的撒。。。
E中instead很多余的讲，healing的主语是widespread swelling and stiffness无逻辑。。。至于D对的原因奉上一段外国大牛的解释。。The correct answer is D: 'it' refers to the injured area, the only singular noun in the relative clause. Dividing need not be parallel to healed, as the former is not acting as a verb but rather is an active participle that means 'that divides'.

作者: mahaofei001 时间: 2012-1-18 18:52
第三个的which不对。。。就近指代了。。。你把前半句话自己好好翻译下看看。。。会发现A的问题的。。。E中的including 实际说得是instructions包括了些啥。。。

作者: mahaofei001 时间: 2012-1-18 19:03
B的问题是比较结构中没有补出that of 。。这个很不清楚。。具体例子manhattan上有讲。。还有个问题是more of a kind of fat thought to be。。这里和前面构成了个非常大的bug。。要补出have的。。而且这个说法和C比较下会发现不同的。。。意思上不如C好。。。C说得脂肪多，而且那种被认为是好的脂肪也多。。。

作者: mahaofei001 时间: 2012-1-18 19:13
最后一个题说得是着重在价钱上D明显要好。。B的话感觉是因为语序的问题。。$7 per year放到was前就对了。。

作者: langzhiyi 时间: 2012-1-18 20:01

最后一个题说得是着重在价钱上D明显要好。。B的话感觉是因为语序的问题。。$7 per year放到was前就对了。。

-- by 会员 mahaofei001 (2012/1/18 19:13:55)

十分感谢！！第一次发帖。。以后提问会分开的!

作者: langzhiyi 时间: 2012-1-18 20:07

第一个题。。。D的错误在于more than doubling the country’s size, bringing句后连续两个用逗号隔开的分词。。这个结构很难受的啊。。因为句末的分词结构即便只有一个有时候都很有歧义，何况两个。。谁是谁的原因谁是谁的结果，这样表示太不清楚了。。C的话把这两个分词从功能上平行了，显得比较好些。。。这种方式在OG和prep上有很多题的。还有with这个结果放在句首表主句的伴随。。
给你一个考察点差不多的题，等你回复我答案，我们再讨论这个题
On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender all of the gold they had brought with them.

A. On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
B. With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
C. A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding
D. Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold
E. Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold

-- by 会员 mahaofei001 (2012/1/18 18:22:14)

底下这个是选c么

作者: lulu5049 时间: 2016-8-3 20:14

mahaofei001 发表于 2012-1-18 19:03
B的问题是比较结构中没有补出that of 。。这个很不清楚。。具体例子manhattan上有讲。。还有个问题是more o ...

可是OG的答案是B，我也觉的C比较正确

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