[求助]首作，请大家帮助TWE004 - ChaseDream

Knowledge not only came from the book we read, but also from the experience which we got in the social activities. Although the knowledge we gained from the book is quite important , I think that the knowledge from our experience is much more important than we can got from books.

We learn our fundamental knowledge from the book on how to read book, write mails or letters to our close friends, and count our finance, All knowledge learn from the book must function in our daily life to make living.

But we can not get all knowledge from the book. Some important knowledge, the experience which we got from our social life, such as: how to get along with other people; how to deal with outburst; how to take care of other people who around us; and how to persuade people who opposite you, based on our own experience. Some experience can come from your parents and friend’s advise. As we leave adolescence behind and enter adult life, no one can teach us how to fall in love and get married., you have to be experienced.

In my opinion , I think that the knowledge from the book and the experience are interaction. We must learn our fundamental knowledge from book and put it into use in our daily life. In this process, the experience is much more important than anything else. It made you grew up and know how to deal with life.

趁机在此向写作牛人请教：象这种标点符号的运用可以吗？请指正！！

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以下是引用leo1111在2004-8-11 17:47:00的发言：

Knowledge not only came from the book we read, but also from the experience which we got in the social activities(要注意not only but also 的前后要对称,应该是knowledge came not only from.... but also from...). Although the knowledge we gained from the book is quite important , I think that the knowledge from our experience is much more important than (what)we can got from books.

We learn our fundamental knowledge from the book on how to read book, write mails or letters to our close friends, and count our finance, All knowledge learn (learned)from the book must function in our daily life to make living.(is prerequisite for us to make living)

But we can not get all knowledge from the book. Some important knowledge(is) the experience which we got from our social life, such as: how to get along with other people; how to deal with outburst; how to take care of other people who (are)around us; and how to persuade people who opposite (oppose)you, based on our own experience. Some experience can come from your parents and friend’s advise(advice). As we leave adolescence behind and enter adult life, no one can teach us how to fall in love and get married., you (we人称要统一)have to be experienced(experience them).

In my opinion , I think that the knowledge from the book and the experience are interaction(interactive). We must learn our fundamental knowledge from book and put it into use in our daily life. In this process, the experience is much more important than anything else. It made you grew up and know how to deal with life.

还要多加练习首先要注意语法多用更为客观的第三人称主体部分的内容还要更充实