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标题: P106 1 parallelism [打印本页]

作者: zww8169 时间: 2011-12-24 05:42
标题: P106 1 parallelism
the city's decay stems from governmental mismanagement, increasing unemployment, and many businesses are relocating.

correction: the city's decay stems from governmental mismanagement, increasing unemployment, and business relocation.

但可不可以把 business relocation 改为 relocating businesses

作者: HarrisZheng 时间: 2012-1-2 23:51
不可以

注意这三个平行的中心词 mismanagement unemployment relocation

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