标题: og12 103 warps that是否有啰嗦嫌疑？ [打印本页] 作者: lordwilliam 时间: 2011-12-22 17:45 标题: og12 103 warps that是否有啰嗦嫌疑？ 103. Yellow jackets number among the 900 or so species of the world's social wasps, wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where thev consist almost entirely of females—the queen and her sterile female workers.
(A) wasps living in a highly cooperative and organized society where they consist almost entirely of (B) wasps that live in a highly cooperative and organized society consisting almost entirely of (C) which means they live in a highly cooperative and organized society, almost all (D) which means that their society is highly cooperative, organized, and it is almost entirely (E) living in a society that is highly cooperative, organized, and it consists of almost all 答案选B.
这个句子按照B的答案结构我理解成：Yellow jackets （主语） number among （谓语）... species （宾语）...， wasps that live in a highly cooperative and organized society consisting almost entirely of females—the queen and her sterile female workers.
问题在于从wasps开始那个分句，wasps that这种表述方式是不是wordy?直接变成wasps live in a highly cooperative and organized society consisting almost ....是不是应该更好？当然我知道GMAT是考最优选项，所以这里只有B最正确。但是我记得好像在什么地方看到过“主语+that+谓语+宾语”的这种格式有被认为啰嗦，所以想在这里理清这个判断是否正确？谢谢！作者: zoexixi 时间: 2011-12-23 14:12
刚好整理到这题，我的理解是，【wasps that 分句 】是做同位语，LZ去掉了that，live成了谓语，两个句子中间只有comma, 句子run-On了
LZ所说的【但是我记得好像在什么地方看到过“主语+that+谓语+宾语”的这种格式有被认为啰嗦，所以想在这里理清这个判断是否正确？】，我在想是不是说 【主语+that be 结构+谓语+宾语】啰嗦啊作者: lordwilliam 时间: 2011-12-24 10:53
多谢点拨！