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标题: 作文难题征集帖（更新关于A79的讨论） [打印本页]

作者: 竹林中人 时间: 2011-12-15 22:25
标题: 作文难题征集帖（更新关于A79的讨论）
本帖希望各位同学把自己认为不好打开思路的题目给集中起来，然后我们大家（包括斑竹们）一起出主意想思路等等，也欢迎有人能将自己觉得写好的文章贴出来，让更多的人受益！谢谢各位的合作，大家在杀鸡的路上，多多相互提携相互帮助，共同进步！
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作者: 普渡哥 时间: 2011-12-15 22:32
顶一下！

作者: 竹林中人 时间: 2011-12-15 22:35
自己上一个吧
Issue 144True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for
oneself.
成功只能根据自己设定的目标来衡量！
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or
disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you
take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in
which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these
considerations shape your position.

作者: 普渡哥 时间: 2011-12-15 22:46
加一个：

It is impossible for the society to recognize its heroes when they are alive

作者: 大剑Jade 时间: 2011-12-16 08:21
再上一个： In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
注：该篇我考试的时候有些跑题，直接影响到了分数。希望大家好好看看

作者: 竹林中人 时间: 2011-12-16 11:31
Issue144：True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for
oneself.
这个题可以参考老G的Issue126.
这个题我想到了这么几点：1.社会所给予的奖励是社会对个人成功的认可，他对个人而言是一种鼓励，一种动力，有时对于实现个人目标是有帮助的。举例：1.特雷萨修女，winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979,dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India ,thus gaining her the name "Saint of Gutters. " The devotion towards the poor won her respect throughout the world.She founded an order of nuns calls the Missionarise of Charity in Calcutta,India dedicated to serve in the India and in 517 missions throughout 100 countries worldwide.
2、而对于个人来讲，应把自己所设立的目标作为衡量成功的标准，虽说社会上额外的奖励是必要的，但对于奋斗的个人或者团体来讲，那并不能作为衡量成功的标准，也不能把它作为设立的目标，因为那太过于狭隘而且短视。真正的成功应该是以是否为社会为人类做出自己的贡献为标准。举例：南丁格尔，选择了并不为社会大多数人认可的护士职业，但最终通过自己的努力改变了护士的地位，让护士在战争以及和平时期治病救人起到了很大作用。
3.过分注重社会所给予的奖励，会妨碍真正的成功。这样例子就很多了。。。

作者: 竹林中人 时间: 2011-12-16 23:24

加一个：

It is impossible for the society to recognize its heroes when they are alive

-- by 会员普渡哥 (2011/12/15 22:46:34)

关于这个题，我觉得要分领域来写。1某些领域像经济、政治领域等的heros能被当时的人们认可，比如比尔盖茨、罗斯福等。有些领域就不是，比如文学。艺术等。卡夫卡在活着的时候并没有获得很大的名气，反倒是死后才被人们发现，成为意识流小说的鼻祖。再比如梵高的画等

作者: Michelle2011 时间: 2011-12-18 22:56
63 Government should preserve public owned wilderness areas in their natural state, evern though these areas are often extremely remoste and thus accesible to only a few people.

思路有点打不开，虽然没写过

作者: 竹林中人 时间: 2011-12-20 11:29

再上一个： In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
注：该篇我考试的时候有些跑题，直接影响到了分数。希望大家好好看看

-- by 会员大剑Jade (2011/12/16 8:21:30)

这个题，我的想法是分领域吧，有些领域是需要前人的经验和成就，比如自然科学、工程设计。但有些就不是，比如艺术领域，很需要天赋和灵感的。希望有人给点意见啊？？？

作者: 竹林中人 时间: 2011-12-23 20:56
Argument79
79 Since those issues of Newsbeat magazine that featured political news on their front cover were the poorest selling issues over the past three years, the publisher of Newsbeat has recommended that the magazine curtail its emphasis on politics to focus more exclusively on economics and personal finance. She points to a recent survey of readers of general interest magazines that indicates greater reader interest in economic issues than in political ones. Newsbeat's editor, however, opposes the proposed shift in editorial policy, pointing out that very few magazines offer extensive political coverage anymore.

作者: 竹林中人 时间: 2011-12-23 20:58
这个Argu的疑惑是我们容易不知道结论是什么，我的理解是在第一句话里面，就是那个publisher recommend 的那个结论，所以写起来的话，可以按以下的思路参考下：
publisher提出两个论据：
1.）过去3年以政治为头版的杂志销量很差 2 x* B: M5 ?. s0 n
（ ==》反驳：销量差未必是由于政治新闻造成的；同期其他杂志的销量是否OK。。。）
2.）调查指出人们更喜欢经济新闻8 |# }9 e8 K( w. m. C
（==》反驳：调查是否权威，调查范围是否是Newsbeat的销售范围，喜欢经济新闻并不代表不看政治新闻.。。。）

editor提出一个论据：
1.）现在做政治的杂志很少
（==》反驳：政治相关杂志很少不代表你做了就一定有销量，做政治的少不代表不能做经济。。。）

提出recommendation：
1.）可以做一个更权威更有说服力的survey，来说明newsbeat的读者更期待经济新闻# i
2.）可以两种新闻一起做，但是以哪个为front cover需要更深入的调查

作者: freecat1992 时间: 2012-2-13 17:08
就是楼上说的这题！！我也一直没明白，这个意思是到底要反驳谁的观点？前面那个人的还是editor的？求问！

作者: jamesthu 时间: 2012-2-23 22:11
标题: 请问A74题
The president of Grove College has recommended that the college abandon its century-old tradition of all-female education and begin admitting men. Pointing to other all-female colleges that experienced an increase in applications after adopting coeducation, the president argues that coeducation would lead to a significant increase in applications and enrollment. However, the director of the alumnae association opposes the plan. Arguing that all-female education is essential to the very identity of the college, the director cites annual surveys of incoming students in which these students say that the school's all-female status was the primary reason they selected Grove. The director also points to a survey of Grove alumnae in which a majority of respondents strongly favored keeping the college all female.

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

请问这道题的结论是啥？感觉就是两边在陈数自己的观点

作者: sereinlee 时间: 2012-3-8 17:34
我觉得版主对A79的分析很对呀。是要两个都批驳吧？即publisher和editor提出的理据都不充分。

作者: nobody1112 时间: 2012-4-9 23:22
Claim: The best test of an argument is its ability to convince someone with an opposing viewpoint.
Reason: Only by being forced to defend an idea against the doubts and contrasting views of others does one really discover the value of that idea.

Writea response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
这道题...想不通,看不懂啊...看去年总结的机经..考到好几次了..有没人帮忙解解?

作者: yao茶茶 时间: 2012-4-17 21:42
ISSUE66

eople who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.
不知道应该怎么写啊，求教求教

作者: 竹林中人 时间: 2012-4-17 22:05

ISSUE66

eople who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.
不知道应该怎么写啊，求教求教

-- by 会员 yao茶茶 (2012/4/17 21:42:40)

关于这题，我觉得，从两方面来说，有些专业性很强的领域，上面的说法是可靠地，但有些领域，需要普通人的参与，并且普通人的认识有时显得尤为重要，再做一个综合点的，就是现在随着普通人对专业知识的掌握的增多，专业人士和普通人相互补充

作者: queenie0126 时间: 2012-5-22 20:27
17. Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
一时之能想到一点：标准化考试、标准化答案有时确实僵化

51. Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
观点：赞成
1. long-term， realistic goals可以给人长久的努力方向
2. 追求immediate fame and recognition会导致急功近利、不择手段的现象
3. 但这二者有时确实不大好分：在追求长期目标的过程中，可能突然就成功了……对一时名声的追求也可能转化为长期的
感觉这样的提纲还是很乱，而且例子不大想得出来……

54. In order to become well-rounded individuals, all college students should be required to take courses in which they read poetry, novels, mythology, and other types of imaginaitve literature.
这题就有点茫然了，是应该侧重想象力的重要性呢？还是文学的重要性？

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