AA:作者给出1.assumption:company with high employee productivity makes more profit. 两个evidence: 1. best technology equipment improve the employee productivity; 2. best technology equipment makes more profit. 最后 conclusion: investment of best technology equipment increases the profit margin of a company. 可能lz表达不清楚,lz理解是公司通过投资最好的设备,来提高工人的生产力,从而创造更多利润,最后提高了边际利润。lz弱弱地总结了几点argument可能存在的不足:
1.assumption不足,high employee productivity不是company makes more profit充分的条件,必须考虑其他causal possibility例如公司策略,竞争环境,设备,成本等等。
2.第一个evidence缺乏逻辑,best technology equipment 不一定能improve the employee productivity,可能工人太蠢,跟不上设备先进的步伐等等。
3.第二个evidence逻辑不足,best technology equipment 可能成本太高,profit can not offset the cost云云。 (最后提到了一下边际利润,可能公司利润已经饱和,过多投入设备只会徒劳无功,有点溶质被析出那种感觉,lz把会计课上的边际利润加上高中的化学结合yy了一下,鄙视我吧。。如果没时间可以忽略。。)
AI: With the increasing emphasis on globalization, does it more important for people to understand their roles as a citizen of the world, than to understand their role as a citizen of their own country? 原文差不多这样,lz选择it is more important for people to understand their roles as a citizen of the world,理由有for better communication, competition and cooperation.然后三段论分述三点,感觉时间比较充足,最后写完剩5分钟这样检查一下spelling错好多啊,囧。。